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Jun 10, 2025

YOOOOOOOOO YURI LET'S GOOOOOOOOOOO

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Chapter:28

Jun 10, 2025

What the hell!!!! RANDOM CHILD HELLO???????????

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Chapter:27

Jun 10, 2025

Tbh, I feel like these are the kinds of chapters your story shines in. The actiony bits thus far have always come as a weird juxtaposition, present almost for prompts reasons alone. The cult members and the fast-paced escapes always seem to come out of nowhere, elapse before they begin, and leave very little room for interpretation. I feel like if you just focused on these slower, cosier and more reflective moments, your narrative would've had a more consistent tone and vibe. As it stands, between the quick summary chapters and the sudden shifts of pace, it's all over the place.

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Chapter:25

Jun 10, 2025

This escalated quickly... We went from arriving in Yamagata to some youth gang, to a literal peasant uprising in 1.5k

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Chapter:24

Jun 10, 2025

I do like this butterfly. It's been a recurring motif all throughout the book and it's been subtle enough that I didn't find its resurgence jarring. Plus it always seems to act like a guiding light to good things that eventually dovetail into 'situations.' Nice little narrative trick you got here: steals it.

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Chapter:23

Jun 10, 2025

3 MONTHS!? HOLY TIMESKIP

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Chapter:22

Jun 10, 2025

Begging Kyoko comes with them, because nothing brings more colour to an end of the world journey than a stowaway

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Chapter:21

Jun 09, 2025

God, taunting me with doomed yuri... You menace...

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Chapter:20

Jun 09, 2025

YURIYURIYURIYURIYURIYURI PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASE

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Chapter:19

Jun 09, 2025

Damn, the pace has accelerated all the way up to breakneck speeds. Feels like every paragraph is a fresh bit of whiplash. To be fair, I'm not sure how I feel about it. On the one hand it fits with the new developments, but on the other it feels like you've lost the slow, emotional beats of the first half, which drew me in in the first place.

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Chapter:18

Jun 09, 2025

That was... quite a sudden turn. We were kind of signposted to it, I suppose, but the way you revealed it feels so rushed and anticlimactic, I can't help interpreting it as an attempt at a quick cliffhanger or tension jump

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Chapter:17

Jun 09, 2025

Mmmmm, this is a bit clumsy I'll admit. Whilst I appreciate why this 'summary' chapter exists, it feels like an attempt to jumpstart the second leg (or part II) of the plot. Time constraints notwithstanding, I would've liked it more if this was handled at the same pace as before.

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Chapter:16

Jun 09, 2025

Gawsh, that's so pretty. I like how you spin up these little narratives out of the smallest gestures. They mean little in the grand scheme of things, but knowing this is all a swan song for everyone makes these tiny tokens of appreciation ring all the nicer. Pat pat.

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Chapter:15

Jun 09, 2025

I KNEWWWWWWWWWWWWW IT WOOOOOOOO I PREDICTED THE DOOMED YAOI. Thank you for adding an implied gay crush

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Chapter:14

Jun 09, 2025

PLEASE TELL ME IT'S MISAKI PLEASE I AM ON MY KNEES WAITING.

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Chapter:13

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