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Hello, I'm Joe Gold. I'm a writer of web novels and short stories, all set in my own original multiverse.
I'm a lifelong anime, comic book, and video game fan, and my fiction is often reminiscent of the series I grew up with.
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Sep 12, 2021
To:fujisprouts
Haha! I sure did flip it. It felt natural to flip the villains into heroes for the final part for some reason. There must be something deeply psychological going on. It's great that you've gotten so atttached to these weirdos.
Sure, she's the survior! She's the final girl in slasher movies. I like the Sam and Lobo dynamic too. I think they'd make a good slasher hunting team.
😭 Thanks, Fuji. I never wanted my characters to have complete plot armour. I'm glad I was able to properly convery the tragic aspect of Mezu's final battle.
I like this fight too! Puck sort of won, sort of didn't, but she was able to overcome her own obsession with being number one, which was the important thing. She's sort of like Honey really. Puck no die! Puck strong!
Marilyn finally revealed her power level! I'm glad I was able to peak your sense of curiousity. I'd been teasing that there was something going on with her for a while.
Sep 11, 2021
Great job! I'm looking forward to your future writing, especially your comics! 👍👍👍
What a great ending! I was not expecting third degree burns, Jesus Christ, but the fact that Honey is powering through it is inspiring. In hindsight, I wish something worse had happened to Charlotte for what she did. I'm sure karma will bite her in the bum. Honey finnaly has some real friends, not just fake internet friends. Bless!
This is the best story on Honeyfeed period. Everything flows perfectly into a complete whole, from the characters to the dialogue to the fighting. You have a bright future as a writer, Fuji!
For a second there, I thought you were going to burn Chalotte allive, like god damn, Fuji. I hope Honey is okay! This was a nice chapter, a reconsilisation between two very broken people. Well done.
Charlotte Honey 🔥 🔥 🔥
Wow! What great theming! The cigarette burn leading to the bruning down of the warehouse! Great!
I'm glad that Honey was able to let go of her hatred of Charlotte and thus defeat her.
Honey and Charlotte's fight was very satisfactory. The way you campared Charlotte to a sharp force whereas Honey was a blunt force was spot on. 👍👍👍
So my Misha x Honey ship has been sunk. I suppose it figures; Misha never took my advice.
Charlotte finally makes her appearance! She's just as villainous as I expected.I like the interaction between her and Joshua. You can totally tell he's under her full control. I wonder how she fights.
Honey's complaining about the injuries she got from Vogue, the Drunken Serpent, and the Boulder, but I feel like the spiritual damage that CapeCom did is being overlooked.
By the way, I stole your renaming of Street Fighter to Street Brawler as well as your arcade scene, with Lobo replacing Gray. If you sue, I'll plead insanity.
So that's why you made sure to point out that Joshua was short at the start. You're clever, Fuji!
😭😭😭 Misha nooo! 😭😭😭
His dad sacrificing himself is genuinely sad and beleivable. Great scene.
Question: the Police Chief was King 1, Elias was King 2, Unknown was King 3, Misha was King 4, and Joshua was King 5? Am I getting mixed up here?
I think the only way to destroy the Midnight Fights is to get the corrupt Police Chief who oversees them fired and replaced.
I see! I was wondering why a police chief was at all interested in a high school fight club. So he was the original King! So the police chief knows that Joshua is King, but doesn't know that he identifies as trans? And Charlotte is Joshua's girlfriend? This is a deep conspiracy. I'm intrigued.
Damn. Honey's obsession with being the King is surprisingly relatable in regards to the competition.
If I were your editor, I'd have had you let Honey succeed in hitting Gray, realise what she'd done and stop, tell Gray 'don't get close to the Midnight Fights, child' to justify her behaviour to herself, get jumped by Misha, and then beat up Misha too, thereby becoming as bad as Charlotte before she faces Charlotte to show that she's become a monster bully to fight a monster bully.
Great chapter!
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