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Hello, I'm Joe Gold. I'm a writer of web novels and short stories, all set in my own original multiverse.
I'm a lifelong anime, comic book, and video game fan, and my fiction is often reminiscent of the series I grew up with.
What is an Achievement?
Aug 12, 2021
Rise up, gamers! Rise up! 😆
So it's CapeCom as in Capcom, oooh. I knew it would be something like Otakon from Metal Gear Solid.
I like that Honey is using her skates.
Wow, you have create cover art and fan art.
Aug 11, 2021
To:Deleted User
General Ripper at 100% is sure to be explosive! I'm punny. Sam is indeed the trump card of the Blue Meanies. I put the part in about Mammoth, Biker, and Girl Scout being alive just for you. Thanks for your continued readership. I will try my damndest to keep it up.
Thanks, Fox! Jack has indeed gotten smarter. I'm afraid that the cast is getting a little too bloated for Little Red Riding Hood to stick around, but hey, Big Bad Wolf is still on the loose. Little Red Riding Hood and Big Bad Wolf were actually fan-created slashers. It's interesting how well they've fit in.
Thanks, A.R.!
It isn't that gory since I'm trying to keep it 13 rated for the competition, but it is definitely like The Hunger Games.
How many comments/likes/follows do you need to do a week to get that gold medal, by the by?
Misha sends Honey memes to shut her up! 😆
I like that Honey's becoming a little happier. She comes across as such a sourpuss that I worry this'll be one of those novels where the reader sides with everyone but the protagonist. If you want to make her more likable, and you might not since I don't know what you have planned, now would be a good time to imbue her with some happiness charm. I think an important part of Honey defeating Charlotte is actually getting over the fact that she was bullied by her so that she can challenge her with the serenity of someone whose not stuck in the past, who's living their own life.
Looking forward to CapeCom. I just know he's going to be zany.
I like the story. The main criticism I have is you need to break up your charagraphs. On Honeyfeed, you need to make your lines as short as possible because people may be reading on their phonez.
Aug 10, 2021
To:TSeal
Much appreciated! Sure, I'll check it out.
To:Minab2SK
Thanks, man!
This isn't a language I undetstand. You should change it to English.
You need to space out your lines to make it more teadable. Try to read some English novels to get the hang of things.
I think the hooded mystery is Charlotte.
Remember not to capitalise said. It should be:
'Hello,' said Honey.
I've noticed a trend in media where the villain is always blonde. 😆 Even if the hero is blonde like Honey, the villain is more blonde like Charlotte. Will this racism against my kind ever die? 😆
Aug 09, 2021
To:KasumiMaika
I will!
Oh how I hate Charlotte! She's worse than a slasher! She's worse! I forget who said it, but a comedian once said that a malevolent man will break your arm, cripple you, or kill you, but a malevolent woman will poo in your soul. That's Charlotte all over... except she's a martial artist, so she'd probably do the other things too.
I like Honey' cute relationship with her parents.
Very strong chapter for characterisation.
Aug 08, 2021
Thanks for your opinion. I will review yours.
