Jul 20, 2021
To:znf
Thank you so much for reading! I'm also very thankful for your critique. It's a perspective I haven't seen yet so I'm happy you vocalised it. I will definitely look into what you've said and consider how I can improve on such aspects in the coming chapters.
A small note, but I never quite meant for Lev to be outraged. I meant for it to be less rage and more disbelief. However, I think I understand what you meant by it goes overboard. I will keep that in mind for scenes in the future.
Again, thank you so much for reading and taking the time out to comment! I really hope you can continue to read my work and keep me notified of anything I should be on the lookout for!
