Sep 15, 2021

To:Deleted User

The plot feels draggy because at its core this is more of a slice-of-life series than a hero's journey.

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Sep 15, 2021

To:Deleted User

The predator-prey relationship is just a cover. Ueda-san likes him as a friend quite a bit. (this is subject to retcon at a moment's notice)

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Sep 15, 2021

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Rip, didn't want it to seem info-dumpy.

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Sep 15, 2021

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Um... hmm. There's not a lot of people getting devoured in The Heir of the Dragon, unfortunately. It takes dragons a long time to grow that big.

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Sep 15, 2021

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That's big-picture stuff, I have no idea where to go to get there.

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Sep 15, 2021

To:Deleted User

The problem is, I have literally nowhere to go with it. The whole thing stemmed out of a request from Blip anyway, I have zero vision beyond what I wrote here.
Okay, next girl will be a tomboy, but beyond that, zero vision.

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Sep 15, 2021

To:Deleted User

The comedy comes from the horrifying things she says with a straight face.

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Sep 15, 2021

I just need another summer break with no students.

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Sep 15, 2021

To:Deleted User

It's absurdist dark comedy.

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Sep 15, 2021

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Blip would disagree, he wants a sequel.

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Sep 15, 2021

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There wouldn't be a point, I used all my material on that one scene.

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Sep 15, 2021

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Idk I find the idea of systematically converting humanity into foodstock to be pretty scary.

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Sep 15, 2021

Well, the last one took two months, so the next one should only take a year or so to write.

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Sep 15, 2021

To:Deleted User

He's a high schooler, seeing a monster slaughter a bunch of thugs and then threaten to eat your family if you go against her is gonna do pretty good on breaking you down.

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Sep 15, 2021

To:Deleted User

That's because you're just a human. Don't worry, Ueda-san is sure for you.

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