Aug 14, 2022
To:Deleted User
Yep, too many loose ends, too many details unresolved, too many overarching arces, but I had to end it here. Technically, an arc has ended. It's a shame Honeyfeed's limit is 5k or so words. I would have gone ten, or I can copy and paste, distributing the paragraphs to other chapters. But too late now. It would ruin the story.
I'm sorry for a rushed ending. I really wanted to put more, and I know I haven't reached the contest's limit, but I had to follow the chapter naming schemes (I find it really important, go figure).
I hope this ending is qualified for the contest lol. Feels like it's cut off, but I decided that this was an ending.
Confession, the confession was real, but it was a half-assed confession----is what Amahiko thinks.
That bullying will remain, but Yoshimura will be resolved albeit far into the future (maybe volume seven, idk). And it will get more out if hand.
Other stuff I wanted to do: Put a secret code leading to a Google Docs that would be the 'secret' epilogue, but couldn't find opportunity.
The 'Ryuu-Amahiko Code,' also will be known as the 'Dinnerplate Code' to be utilized, but word limit has cut it off (Will place after contest).
Use the group names (FieldCamp) as some sort of secret message of foreshadowing (partially done).
More Yoshimura bullying.
Chinatsu-Yoshimura suspicions.
More FieldCamp events.
The mystery of the red stone.
Yeah, that's about it. Sorry if I dumped info. I just felt like I needed to divulge to compensate for the ending.
I'll post an afterword probably today/tonight, but I'll say it right now: Thank you for reading all the way, Tomoyuki!