Mar 13, 2022
K lots to say😂;
Dunno if it was intentional but I think it's wonderful the title of this chapter - 'Finish the Fight' obviously being the famous Halo 2/3 line but moreover Master Cheif's arc in later games is about learning to rely on other people, those around him - Admittedly this is really only the case in halo 4 and the new one - But the point being that the title refences something with direct connections to Fiona's own arc.
If that was intentional then damn, that's a deep reference😅 - In the more likely case it's a coincidence, then that's an awesome happy accident 😁😊.
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Sticking with Fiona, maybe I'm just dumb but I honestly thought the fan club were girls.... This to me is brilliant - The way you've given them voices through dialogue, while leaving them vague enough that even their gender is a little unclear is great!
It makes the moment when they get properly described and their names reinstated, go from being a trio of comic relief - To a proper character moment for the princess - Great stuff😄😊.
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Interesting the mentions of her always being the black sheep and her siblings being wary - I wonder if there's more to Fiona then just some pranks and gone wrong experiments🤔😊.
Also teleportation is clearly the second best power (after Adan's in no.1 of course) - I can't see how teleportation would ever be seen as weak - Damn Aquarians and their wierd buercecy😂😅.
