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This is the former home of some of my novels, you can find them these days over on RoyalRoad!

registered at: Oct 14, 2021

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Mar 11, 2022

To:kazesenken

Well for random one shots, their really good😊😁

Kazemonogatari

Chapter:2

Mar 11, 2022

God damn - I picked this particular book cause I wanted to try your work and it looked both fun and short - But what I got was something else entirely😄!

It's so rare to see people write in the 2nd person, espically in web-novel format and even more uncommon to see it done well like you've done here😁.

Further the use of writer's block as an metaphore is really great and obviously quite relatable to a site of first time writers - I do think it might be a bit much putting it so bluntly in the author's note, the story speaks for itself so the note feels unneeded😊😉.

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I also just love the idea of a writer who truely frees their creations - Who through dreams writes everything that we as cousious people may never get to.
That idea of 'what if I wrote' Is awesome - I really enjoyed this😊😊.

Kazemonogatari

Chapter:2

Mar 11, 2022

To:kazesenken

That makes is all the more brilliant 😂😂😁😁

Kazemonogatari

Chapter:1

Mar 10, 2022

How did I fall behind on these, guess I was distracted by 'order'😂😂.
And what a time to get distracted! This is one of my favourites so far😁, Rheba is just so wonderfully strong and lovable, Hal & Harlon have some great lines and our boi Odell is getting his Gimlee moment😂😂.

Hell of a chapter😁😁.

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:92

Mar 10, 2022

God damn now this I can get invested in😁😍.

I love the idea that in the one universe where the anime-childhood best-friend finally wins, a law is immediately established to ruin her victory😂😂.

And while I don't know if you did it intentionally or not - This being almost literally a romcom of version of 1984 is genius 😅😂.

I'll definitely try get to more soon😄😊.

Kazemonogatari

Chapter:1

Mar 10, 2022

To:Hans Trondheim

Ho-ho I see, interesting😁😁

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 1

Chapter:3

Mar 10, 2022

To:Senkosenpai

It's a fun one😊😄

Below the City of Akihabara(BTCOT)|Alt: A Reborn Otaku, I fight demons and comfort little kids

Chapter:13

Mar 10, 2022

Sun all day Huh? I wonder if the world is flat - You also mentioned how there's only 2 continents - intriguing for sure😄.

Also was out boi Kuro a friggin speed reading champion on earth or something? There no way he read so much so fast😂😂

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 1

Chapter:3

Mar 10, 2022

I'm getting déjà vu😉😂

Below the City of Akihabara(BTCOT)|Alt: A Reborn Otaku, I fight demons and comfort little kids

Chapter:13

Mar 08, 2022

Not entirely sure why we're seeing this backstory right now 😅.

That said it's an interesting use of the power system - And 'papa' is quite the con-man😉😂.

The Mildpowered Virgins of Novylion High

Chapter:3

Mar 07, 2022

This is less horror and more just despressing😭😭

KNOCK KNOCK

Chapter:2

Mar 05, 2022

Interesting that the girls mind seemed to dwell on the word dog - I'll admit I also began to wonder after Ren said it - Presumably in an inclosed limited society the population of dogs would have to be actively perseved, as to avoid local extinction or inter-breedin-- Wait does that mean I think like a robot?😂😂.

Order

Chapter:3

Mar 05, 2022

I'm glad Hina survived😂, tho I'm surprised there's any unnamed sniper sisters left😅.

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As for your comment, take it easy man😊 - Don't get me wrong, wanting to write a better outline is great, we all want/hopefully should be always improving😄 - But don't beat yourself up or anything, I think this has been a really awesome first arc - It has issues sure but generally I've quite enjoyed it 😊😊 - Webnovels are wierd after-all, we come here and we publicaly publish what is eassientially a first draft😂, so don't be afraid to make small mistake here and there😁😊👍.

Dance of Thorns

Chapter:41

Mar 04, 2022

Fun chapter as usual - Though I should ask, does it not get awkward for the head-maid talking to Kuro?
I mean frequently he answers her in his head so I can only presume she's just left there standing waiting for a verbal response from him😂😂

The Human Saint is Bored, so I was Summoned to Another World Vol. 1

Chapter:2

Mar 04, 2022

😅😶😵

Say Goodbye to Logic

Chapter:3

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