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Hi there,
This is the former home of my fiction - Unfortunately from drama, to a lack of innovation - To bugs that made the site unusable to me - My books are no longer being hosted here on here.

This in mind I'm leaving this note here to let people with an interest know you can find all my works in updated versions over on RoyalRoad & ScribbleHub - With plans for other releases yet to come.

For more info you can check out the final chapters of either 'UnderCurrent' or 'The Girl He Used to Know' - Which both depict my odd journey with this website😅.
HoneyFeed had its merits, it got me some feedback & I made some good friends here - But it is in effect the training wheels of web-noveling sites - If you are even slightly serious about your art or simply want a website that will teach you proper formatting & has an actual userbase - Then do yourself a favour, take off the training wheels & seek out the website that is right for you😊.

Best Regards,
-Momentie

registered at: Oct 14, 2021

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Feb 27, 2022

Just to be clear if anyone comes here based off Ana's discord message - Some of the mods replys are gone now - Hence why there's gaps in the convo - And I have already apologied elsewhere for if anything I said came across as unfair.

I don't believe I got 'angry' at Ana but if that's how she felt, then Ana I am sincerely sorry i made you feel that way, you have my sincerest apologies - I simply wanted to highlight that a more soft approach to case's like Senko, might encourage authors more and grow the site - But again I'm deeply sorry if that came across as angry or hurtful or the message got lost along the way.

Finally, I did at one point mix my pharsing - In one message I said the contact buttons were hard to find, in the next I miss spoke and said they were non-present.
I think anyone reading it will see that clearly I just miss-spoke, hence my anounce at it being framed like they didn't exist - Further the contact button still doesn't work for me but I guess that's just on my side of things - crap 1mb/s internet and all that.

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This has blown up way too much, with people on my book going out of their way to nitpick my concerns - That said an equal number said lovely things and I hope the site grows from some of this if nothing else.

Momentie's gonna go hibernate for a bit now - I don't wish for further hurt, I'll return to reading before long no doubth, I enjoy it after all.

Like I said elsewhere, yesterday HF released a wonderful audiobook which I believe was voice by the very same Ana - I'd advise everyone go enjoy that and as Ana said, forget about this akward series of miss-understandings😊👍.

((Senko once more I apologize, hopefully I and a flock of mods will never spam your comments like this again😅😅))

BTCOA but it's clean and full of wholesome cuddling

Chapter:0

Feb 27, 2022

To:Pearlyn.M

No worries pearl😊, I'm glad the covids went away for you😎.

.Your new thing sounds intriguing 😁

I'm Thinking Out Loud & I Can't Stop

Chapter:1

Feb 27, 2022

Sometime I like is your attention to detail - The way the sky is cold is a really nice detail😊👍

BTCOA but it's clean and full of wholesome cuddling

Chapter:10

Feb 27, 2022

To:Senkosenpai

😂😂, ah I get ya, no worries😁

BTCOA but it's clean and full of wholesome cuddling

Chapter:0

Feb 27, 2022

To:Senkosenpai

A silver lining if ever I heard one😊👍

BTCOA but it's clean and full of wholesome cuddling

Chapter:0

Feb 27, 2022

Damn poor kanno has bad it rough - Damn those dragons!!

BTCOA but it's clean and full of wholesome cuddling

Chapter:9

Feb 27, 2022

To:Deleted User

100% I know they didn't, like I said when I briefly mentioned it - I know your doing it for your own reasons and what not - I was simply mentioning that jk or not, the chat was accusing you of things and rather then stop it, the mods just watched - Joke or not, to me that's wrong.
Shouldn't of used you as the example tho, I could of mentioned other examples of it - Your just the one I guess came to mind first.

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And your quite right, it was a pointless convo - Like with your issue, rather then seeing the point I was making (That you should not allow a group of people to publicly discuss another without their consent) - I was simply told I didn't have enough context....despite the fact I saw the discord chat. So sure I defo don't have the full context but again my point was that from the outside, the view of most users of the website, it looks bad and unwelcoming.

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But like I've said elsewhere - I should of been more clear and composed - I got frustrated that the mods were reading my posts and either not replying or in one's case picking a specific point I'd miss-spoken on - Gleefully correcting that and not addressing the rest before telling me they won't address it here - Despite addressing the part they wanted to here.

That frustration clearly lead to me being unclear which is my fault and no one else's.

It's like you said - No point arguing with people who don't want to listen or to improve.
The eventual response I did get (Which again I appreciate them finally talking the time to answer properly) summed it up best when it said along the lines of : 'Clearly you don't think you can be in the wrong'.

To imply I can't be in the wrong, when they litterally wouldn't engage with me for 12 hours despite being very clearly online - Is honestly just bad manners.

But again, it was my own doing and I truely apologize for mentioning your name and for causing such a stir👍👍.

BTCOA but it's clean and full of wholesome cuddling

Chapter:1

Feb 26, 2022

Medieval weapons and armour are wild man - I agree it's awkward how their definitions have so much crossover😂.

The Wolf Among Rats (Old)

Chapter:10

Feb 26, 2022

To:Senkosenpai

Belated happy birthday!😊👍

BTCOA but it's clean and full of wholesome cuddling

Chapter:8

Feb 26, 2022

To:Robin Paharya

No worries - We all go through different drafts😊.

I'll look foward to it😁👍

The Exile Returnee

Chapter:1

Feb 26, 2022

Great title😂😂😎😁

BTCOA but it's clean and full of wholesome cuddling

Chapter:8

Feb 26, 2022

To:Senkosenpai

Nothing wrong with wholesome cuddles😉😂

BTCOA but it's clean and full of wholesome cuddling

Chapter:8

Feb 26, 2022

Interesting, I don't tend to read Synopsys so it's nice to just have the story start with no exposition.

I also find it wonderful how good people on HoneyFeed are at finding new ways to describe characters - The student pass was a nice touch😊.

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I will say that you dip into the past tense in some wierd places - Which is a shame as generally your dailogue is good but breaks a little whenever a character speak incorrectly - Easy way to catch this is to read aloud when editing😊👍.

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Good stuff🍻😁

The Exile Returnee

Chapter:1

Feb 25, 2022

Our boi is quite the lady's man😉😂.

Something I quite like is the presentation - It's so jolly about death😂😂

BTCOA but it's clean and full of wholesome cuddling

Chapter:8

Feb 25, 2022

To:Senkosenpai

You mean me😶😶?

Oh I didn't know there was anything else to say😅 - I was just gonna ride off into the sunset of obsecuity😂 - No need to wait for anything more from me, I've stepped in it enough for one day😅

I like your newest chapter if that what you meant😊👍.

BTCOA but it's clean and full of wholesome cuddling

Chapter:0