Feb 03, 2022
Hmmmmm kk.
1. I love the idea that Tommy's party is dirt broke now cause Neitra got all the gold😂😂.
2. I think the story of Cessena was really well done and very interesting.
3. Don't fuck it up with Neitra 😂 - I don't want to speak too soon but ya she so far has no actual reason to turn evil (unlike poor Cesena) - I'm not saying anything yet but you better not pull some hidden tragic backstory outta nowhere 😂😂😂😂.
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4. Not entirely sure how I feel about Anthryom this time.
I like the paronoia angel but at the same time we did just do a whole
long ass chapter about him getting over this, ya know?
It feels like it would feel a whole lot more impactful if this chapter happened first (giving us more context for why anthryom doesn't get attached to NPCs) and then have the Sae stuff - Setting up for an inevitable resolution between him and Niethra.
As is, feels a bit '1 step forward, 2 steps back' - Now if that's what your going for then fair enough👍👍.
5. Honestly thought he was going for fragmentation grenades😂😂.
6. Lol anthryom saying killing never gets easier is bullshit - Man fecking lured in and murdered those assains like they were nothing, hell I think he enjoyed it😅😅.
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Yea overall pretty great chapter😊😄👍💪.
