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This is the former home of some of my novels, you can find them these days over on RoyalRoad!

registered at: Oct 14, 2021

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Jun 28, 2023

I like that, the sweats tasting wrong is a clever mood - Also makes Huru seem a bit depresisng tho😅🤣

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:4

Jun 27, 2023

Eh, nice timing, I was thinking it was about time for a girl to enter this romance😄.

Also 9 times more time!!! Why wouldn't you just sleep all day, sleep 18hours a day, yours life would grow longer for it or atleast ypur persepction of life!!

Dragon X Digital Dream

Chapter:4

Jun 26, 2023

I really, really love the idea of playing Vr video games in your sleep - I could make so much progress on catching up wit my backlog😂😂.

I rather enjoyed him breezing through the generic opening stuff of the game - Its says a little about him that it is so familiar but also is quite relatable to many of us - The tree branch being of a different type of tree to those in the area made me smile😊.

Good stuff😄👍

Dragon X Digital Dream

Chapter:2

Jun 24, 2023

Interesting opening - You keep things moving pretty fast, even while delivering a decent amount of information about the protags past and his present, lethergy shall we say?
Defo looking foward to seeing where it goes😊😄

Dragon X Digital Dream

Chapter:0

Jun 24, 2023

I quite like the idea of a dream that describes all the different aspects of your personality, I can defo see how that would leave a big impression on Grace😄

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:2

Jun 24, 2023

Heh, I thoight at first we were doing that old troop of the girl falling from the sky, but the quick tranistion to a dreamworld of Alice in wonderland or perhaps studio ghibli styling was quite a nice way to start thing off😄😊

Grace Dances Upon the Clouds

Chapter:0

Jun 23, 2023

Furbolt returns and a new character approachs, good chapter to finish with my catching up spree!😎😄

Been meaning to say btw, might be worth putting brackets or something around system text - At present it sometimes blends togather with Daichi's inner thoughts😊👍

Overall Dominion is both what I expect from you but in a good way - It has nice detail, everyone has motivations and quirks - And as always you're not afriad to have a sur-real moment of panic or dread from time to time.
The prose and grammer are solid, the plot intriguing - Really am looking foward to seeing where it goes next😄😊👍

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:9

Jun 23, 2023

To:Deleted User

Agreed for sure, I'm not confident myself how it will go, but I think its good he's writing something he has passion for so hopefully it all works out😄❤️

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:7

Jun 23, 2023

To:Deleted User

Ho damn, i actually gave a very similiar critic to this in a message to Fondness the other day - I guess me and you were thinking the same thing - Good story, but perhaps the judges might not like it as romance🥲🫂

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:7

Jun 22, 2023

Really atmospheric chapter, struck me as a kinda pop-culture river sticks, very much so enjoyed❤️😊

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:5

Jun 22, 2023

Interesting chapter, neat to see our boi not only liked conspiracy stuff as a kid but also modelling and battleships, says alot about a kid in an age where their perma linked to the internet.

*cough* canon, is spelt 'Cannon' when dealing with weapons *cough*

Dang just falling into a sleep for the isekai part eh? Neat😎

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:4

Jun 21, 2023

To:F.C Fondness

Very good point and certainly something I appreciate seeing, the drama, mystery or general tribulations of trying to get home can be real highlights in a good isekai 😄

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:3

Jun 21, 2023

Dachi is an interesting dude, clearly has alot of bagging but also a fair bit of drive😎💪

Dominion's Paradise: IF

Chapter:3

May 21, 2023

His parents came by? Was that off screen or am I going senile?

Also, Miss.Chidori seems.... nice lol😂😆

My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!

Chapter:34

Apr 30, 2023

Is it bad that all i got from the rating system is anime fans?🤣

Like you got the Larpers - Those who just watch the most popular stuff Netflix happens to offer.

The Moderates, bit deeper - Defeintly watch anime regularly but still have other hobbies and generally don't publicise the fact they like anime.

And finally the Otakus, immersed in the culture, room full of posters and dvds etc🤣🤣

My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!

Chapter:32

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