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I like writing about mooches! Wanna chat? Hit me up on MyAnimeList :) Or find me on the Honeyfeed Discord Currently writing GLINT. Have other stories planned for the future, namely a certain isekai called "Dominion's Paradise" ~
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Jul 02, 2022
To:Swaggyweeb
Asagiri has some interesting history to say the least, so we still have lots to learn about her <3 Next chapter introduces something of a rival though ~
Running away with Nari doesn't sound that bad actually Pretty good escape scene too, liked how a lot was going to make it more interesting
Satisfying conclusion to the fight, Shannon really pushed herself to her limits it seems. Your fights scenes are long but really good. Wish I could try sneaking in some of my own action scenes into my romcom xD
It helps motivate me to write a bit more xD
Jun 30, 2022
T-They're onto me . . . 😅 Bah, I like sprinkling little references and easter eggs in my works haha
Dialogue is apparently what people like best about my writing 😅 Hoping I can keep it up until the end then!
Jun 29, 2022
"straight up animalistic body modications." Cat girls then😆? Love me some cat girls, if you couldn't tell by my story haha But yeah, I like how this chapter sets up some interesting mysteries
Not bad, I liked the attention to detail without really traveling into purple prose territory. Fuji did a great job on the cover as well
Jun 27, 2022
To:Dope
<3 Yup, they're starting to place a bit more trust in one another. Asagiri has a bit of a complicated history, so that's gonna complicate how much she opens up to anyone 😅
To:Shirota
Yeah, he's the chaddiest character in the series haha xD We'll see a lot more of Mogami later on
To:FumoDrawer_95
Yay, another appreciator of based jokes 😎 Mogami (the chad) is too chad for most people to handle haha
Jun 26, 2022
To:Jio Kurenai
Yeah lol, I like having characters act as good foils for the main characters, great for juxtaposition too Hopefully readers don't mind a tsundere incarnate 😅
Yeah, already planning for a scenario where she'll have to use it for a certain reason so that's gonna be interesting haha Keiko is defintely gonna like teasing Kazuma with it often 😆
Jun 25, 2022
I do take some pride in my wacky dialogue haha But yeah, Japan is def having some problems with their birth rate lol And thanks for reading!
Finished your first chapters Fight scenes are pretty good, nice. Smart use of third person since action is pretty hard to nail in first person. Luckily there's no fight scenes in my romcom so I can use first there lol Rooting for Shannon Only thing I gotta note is the author note at the end of every chapter is kinda distracting, slightly shilly lol But other than that yeah, good stuff 😆
