Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Dec 05, 2024

    Author's Commentary #279:

    Time to talk about Chapter 279: Isabella and Laura.
    As mentioned in the previous commentary, this chapter delves a bit more into Isabella and Laura's characters. It turns out that Isabella had cheated once before in the past, with her reasoning behind it being to raise her elo. She did this as a result of being forced into a DESPER match and being raped as punishment following her loss. This is why Laura was a bit sympathetic to her motivations, but not her actions.

    Laura believes cheating is wrong no matter what, both in games and in love-life. This stems from her being cheated on by the one she once loved more than anyone and as a result, became the woman she is today. Though she does believe in second chances which is why she extended her hand to Isabella.

    However, reality can often be cruel as Isabella has seemingly relapsed into cheating once more. Worse, it appears to be due to the result of losing yet another DESPER match which is also causing her to implicate that her teammate, Margarita, was the one that ordered her to cheat. This puts the entire Italian women's team under suspicion, which could lead to the entire team being disqualified. Needless to say, the true mastermind behind this is nefarious.

    One final thing I'll touch on is the dark side of the DESPERs. They essentially give those skilled at chess the reigns of power to do as they please, which leads to many innocents falling victim to the holder's schemes. The only way to avoid being forced into a DESPER match is to have a higher rating than the one activating the DESPER, but that can be easier said than done. Isabella didn't have a higher rating than both the Desperado that raped her, and the one that's seemingly the mastermind behind this cheating scandal. And I can guarantee, there will be far more instances of how the DESPERs can be abused as the series progresses. These instances though will be on a much larger scale, national-level scale to be more precise. I'm sure some might be able to theorize what this means, and I will give warning, it is dark.

    Now that the backstory is complete, all that remains is for the match against Mimoko and Laura to conclude. I mentioned before that I wanted the match to conclude in the playing hall, and the cheating scandal is the main reason why. Since the match is decided and Laura's losing, Prokrutka decided to allow that game to continue rather than declaring Japan the winner of all it's games for the round, outright. This allows Laura to at least lose the game in the playing hall and have it officially registered. As for the fate of Italian women's team, that will remain to be seen.

    One final thing I will confirm though is that the next chapter won't be the final one for round 2. While the Japan vs Italy match may conclude, there are still some other teams competing in the event. In case it wasn't obvious by all the artwork of the teams I've been uploading, I'm dramatically expanding the series' cast. This is also why I consider this arc to be so important as it will introduce many new characters, some of which will play important roles in future arcs in the series.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Dec 05, 2024

    [Game log #166]

    Here's the game from Chapters 273 and 278 between Iori and Isabella on board 4 in the Japan vs Italy match in round 2 of the Chess Olympics.

    [Event "Chess Olympics"]
    [Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
    [Date "2024.09.17"]
    [Round "2"]
    [White "Isabella Elena (2369)"]
    [Black "Iori Ishikiridokoro (2444)"]
    [Result "0-1"]
    [Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

    1. Nf3 Na6 2. e4 g6 3. d4 c6 4. Nc3 Nc7 5. h3 Bg7 6. d5 d6 7. Be2 Nf6 8. dxc6 bxc6 9. Be3 O-O 10. a4 d5 11. e5 Nd7 12. O-O Nxe5 13. Nxe5 Bxe5 14. Bd4 Bd6 15. f4 Ne6 16. Qd3 Nxf4 17. Qe3 Ne6 18. Rad1 Nxd4 19. Rxd4 Rb8 20. b4 Rxb4 21. Rxb4 Bxb4 22. Na2 Ba5 23. Qg3 Bc7 24. Qa3 Bd6 25. Qe3 Qa5 26. Qd4 Bc5 27. Qf2 Bxf2+ 0-1

    If the game continued:

    [Event "Chess Olympics"]
    [Site "Budapest, Hungary"]
    [Date "2024.09.17"]
    [Round "2"]
    [White "Isabella Elena (2369)"]
    [Black "Iori Ishikiridokoro (2444)"]
    [Result "0-1"]
    [Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis?tab=analysis"]

    1. Nf3 Na6 2. e4 g6 3. d4 c6 4. Nc3 Nc7 5. h3 Bg7 6. d5 d6 7. Be2 Nf6 8. dxc6 bxc6 9. Be3 O-O 10. a4 d5 11. e5 Nd7 12. O-O Nxe5 13. Nxe5 Bxe5 14. Bd4 Bd6 15. f4 Ne6 16. Qd3 Nxf4 17. Qe3 Ne6 18. Rad1 Nxd4 19. Rxd4 Rb8 20. b4 Rxb4 21. Rxb4 Bxb4 22. Na2 Ba5 23. Qg3 Bc7 24. Qa3 Bd6 25. Qe3 Qa5 26. Qd4 Bc5 27. Qf2 Bxf2+ 28. Rxf2 Qxa4 29. Nc3 Qb4 30. Nd1 Qe1+ 31. Kh2 Be6 32. c3 Kg7 33. Kg3 Rb8 34. Kh2 Rb1 35. Kg3 a5 36. Kf3 d4 37. cxd4 Rb3+ 38. Ke4 Bd5+ 39. Kf4 Qd2+ 40. Kg4 Be6+ 41. Rf5 Qxd4+ 42. Kg5 h6# 0-1

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    Dec 04, 2024

    Author's Commentary #278:

    Time to talk about Chapter 278: Cheaters never win.
    I'll admit, this would have been a good title for the previous chapter, but I feel it works just as well here. There's actually quite a bit to talk about on this one so I'll start off with the game.

    This is one of the cases where it might help to throw the game into Chess.com's analysis engine as it'll show the eval bar and why Isabella was freaking out when she did. She could only see the eval bar though and not the engine's top moves, which is why she had to guess what move to make, and if she made a wrong one, she freaked out. Iori caught on and that led to her leveling the accusation.

    Iori was winning the game anyway, but decided to accuse Isabella of cheating, not because it was the right thing to do, but because she wanted to be sadistic. As for why Laura acted the way she did, that will be touched on in the next chapter, so I'll save going in depth on her and Isabella until that chapter's commentary.

    As for the match, Japan has won it, so the result of the board 1 game between Mimoko and Laura won't matter in the end, though at least the arbiters decided to let it continue instead of giving Japan the win outright.

    I actually was debating having the match be called in Japan's favor and then have Mimoko and Laura pick up their game elsewhere, but I felt it was better to have the game be allowed to continue so that it ends in the playing hall. With Iceland, only Köfun will be punished since he was caught cheating, and since it was a non-electronic method of cheating, he'll simply be suspended from competitive play until the tournament is over. He will be allowed to still spectate though, but he will be under a watchful eye.

    With Isabella, the matter is more serious as an electronic device was used, and will end up snowballing into something that impacts the entire Italian women's team. I'll elaborate more on this in the commentaries for future chapters.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Dec 03, 2024

    Author's Commentary #277:

    Time to talk about Chapter 277: You're not number one.
    The Icelandic team has been foiled, with Köfun being caught cheating and Ragnar losing to Okisato. Ragnar certainly isn't number one now, nor is Iceland, though only Köfun will end up getting punished since he was the one caught cheating. This means that Sportlegur will have to play for all the remaining matches.

    Now that the match has concluded, it's time to talk about it more in depth. First off, as I previously mentioned, Japan actually did face Iceland in round 10 of the 45th Chess Olympiad. And in it, they won 3-1. Their one loss ended up being on board 3, instead of board 2 like in the story, but if I had known about this match-up prior to writing the chapters, I would have done it. It's possible I might retcon it, but I also like what I wrote so it probably won't change. But if I do end up retconning it, this is why.

    As for Laura, I originally planned for Mimoko to be the one to spot the cheating and call the arbiter, but I decided the role fit Laura better. This decision in turn led to me fleshing out her character more, and gave me an idea on what to do for some of the other characters that have been introduced this arc.

    Speaking of original plans, Canada was originally set to be the round 2 opponent for Japan, but I ended up shafting them in favor of Iceland. Canada could still show up though in later rounds of the tournament though. If you've seen my gallery, you'll notice I've been uploading art of most of the key teams. Obviously, I won't be doing artwork for EVERY team participating, but I do think the total women's teams I'll add will near 50. The men's side probably won't be as much, but I will try to at leas do art of the teams Japan faces.

    Another idea I initially had was having Ragnar get away with his cheating and have Okisato try and spot it by viewing his notes. I backed off as I felt this would be a bit too much work, not to mention I wanted Ragnar's game to end in a checkmate. Since the game sis have a moment where Ragnar moving around the pieces could give him the edge, I decided to have him attempt to cheat there.

    Now with Japan's victory over Iceland, things will shift back over to the women's side. To give a refresher, Japan's chances are looking good there too as they currently lead 2-0. All they need is a draw to clinch the match, which seems likely at the very least. Even though the Italy match is still ongoing, I will say that the Iceland match is easily the highlight of round 2 for me. The games were so much fun to write. This arc truly does have me motivated to the max, making it easy to see why I'm considering it one of the best arcs in the series.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 30, 2024

    Author's Commentary #274:

    Time to talk about Chapter 274: Who in the world is Carla Sanmarino.
    Well, now we know. Turns out, she's a actress on Fiverr, or Eighterr as it's known in this universe, that was commissioned to join the Italian team. This was all part of Margarita's scheme to try and lure Daria out to play as doing so would force her to play Laura at board 1. While Laura has never beaten Daria, she has managed to draw her a few times, and since she'd have the white pieces, doing so would be much easier. Margarita had little faith Carla would beat Mimoko, though if she somehow managed to or at least hold her to a draw, that would be icing on the cake. However, Margarita failed to account for how truly skilled those on the lower boards were, and what to do if Daria decided to sit out.

    Tenju gaining Taira's prowess also threw a wrench in her plan as Carla would have had a much easier time playing against the old Tenju. But now, Italy's chances of winning are gone as with Japan leading 2-0, a draw is the best they can do. And even then, Laura and Isabella don't have the advantage in their games, and both must win in order for Italy to draw the match. The game was also fun and even had an epic rook sacrifice at the end, which definitely helped in persuading me to use the game for this match.

    Though the full results of the Japan vs Italy match won't be revealed for a while as now things will shift over to the men's section. Speaking of which, IRL tournaments do allow players to get up and walk around the playing hall to observe games. As such, I decided to illustrate this by having Mimoko be the one to check in on the men's team.

    That's all for this Commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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