Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #31:

    Time to talk about Chapter 31: Déjà vu.
    Gyro's been in this place before. Funnily enough, this chapter and game were written before Chapter 23: Hagemi's first match, meaning the game featured in that chapter was actually modified from the one in this chapter. As for why I did that, I felt it would be thematic to have the games play similarly in order to shine some more light on Gyro's character.

    The game was enjoyable to write and was also another me vs the Chess.com bots original. I did play in assisted mode, as I tend to do for most of the games in the series since I needed to have Mimoko play like the prodigy she is and completely outplay Gyro. Speaking of which, the assisted mode has been very helpful in helping me craft some of these games. Since my own skill level in chess is intermediate-level, 1000 elo if I were to self-asses, I need to rely on these tools in order to play the games like how the characters in the story would. For example, if it's Mimoko playing, I'll make use of the tools to make the best moves, if it's Yuusuke, I might play as best I can on my own and/or choose to make some deliberate bad moves if need be.

    The chapter also gave us a taste of Gyro's despair and desperation as he's constantly hoping for Mimoko to make a mistake. I'll touch a bit more on Gyro in a future commentary. In fact, the very next one will offer some more insight on Gyro's motives, so look forward to that.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #29:

    Time to talk about Chapter 29: Prelude to the third round.
    Obviously, this is a buildup chapter. The first notable thing about this chapter is Mimoko's casual attire. Mimoko thinks suspenders look cute which is why she usually pairs them with a skirt and long sleeve shirt. She also loves sneakers, Mizuse Niimi brand sneakers in particular, with all-white being her favorite style.

    Now onto the new Desperados. First off is Svetlana Smirnova. Her design was inspired by Jill Sturgeon from Metallic Rouge, who in turn reminds me a lot of Sibylla from Spy Kyoushitsu. スヴェトラーナ・スミルノワ (Svetlana Smirnova) is how her name would be written in katakana. Светлана Смирнова (Svetlana Smirnova) is how her name would be written in Russian.

    Her birthday is September 28th, which she shares with Aleksandra Goryachkina, a Russian grandmaster that is also one of the top female chess players of all time.

    Her favorite piece is the rook since she views it as an extension of her sledgehammer, which is her preferred weapon of choice.

    鴨志田 春樹 (Kamoshida Haruki) is how Haruki's name is written. His first name, 春樹, means "Spring" and "tree". It is also written the same as Haruki Yamauchi's name from Classroom of the Elite. His last name, 鴨志田, means "duck", "aspiration", and "rice field". It is also written the same as Suguru Kamoshida's name from Persona 5.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Considering Haruki's named after two big pieces of shit, you can probably guess that he's going to be a massive piece of shit, and you're right. This piece of shit will by far be one of the most vile and despicable characters in the story. Though believe it or not, Kakeru Ryūen from Classroom of the Elite is by far the biggest inspiration behind his character. So much so, that I honestly imagine him sounding just like him when he talks.

    His birthday is May 30th, which he shares with Haruki Yamauchi from Classroom of the Elite.

    His favorite piece is the king, because that's how he views himself.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #28:

    Time to talk about Chapter 28: The secret puzzle cafe.
    Originally, this chapter simply served to introduce the secret puzzle cafe system, but after revising things, a game is now present in the chapter. I'll talk about the game first since it actually will be important to the overall plot.

    Despite being recounted in a discussion and not shown live, it's actually the most important of the four games. The reason why is that it properly showcases Mimoko's and Okisato's philosophies when it comes to openings, but the game also features a Důras Gambit. This opening will become very important later on, so I'm glad I have the chance to properly build it up now. And now that the game's out of the way, back to the secret puzzle cafes.

    The concept of the secret puzzle cafe was another byproduct of my "if this novel gets a video game adaptation, this will be a key feature in it" mentality. There's actually more to do in the puzzle cafe than just attempting chess puzzles. Chess terminology quizzes, exhibition matches against fellow players, and chess variants are all offered at the secret puzzle cafe.

    The most notable of the variants is 4-player chess, or 4-way chess as I call it. This is the cafe's main attraction aside from the daily puzzles. There are actually a few variations for 4-way chess rules, but for simplicity's sake, this universe version of the game follows the Chess.com rules for the game.

    Since I've made such a big deal about 4-way chess, I'm sure you can guess that there will eventually be a 4-way chess game in the series. To that, I say yes, but not until Volume 2. There won't be too many in the overall series, but there will be some notable ones.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #27:

    Time to talk about Chapter 27: Pop quiz.
    This is another chapter added to the original Season 1 as part of a series of revisions, this time expanding on the round 2 games of Mimoko and Okisato. And just like round 1, it introduces characters that originally debuted in Season 7, but that I decided to have introduced earlier. Let's talk more about them.

    マカビー・ベン・ホーリン (Maccabee Ben-Horin) is how Maccabee's name is spelled in katakana. מכבי בן-חורין (Maccabee Ben-Horin) is how his name would be spelled in Hebrew.

    His birthday is June 24th, which he shares with Belarusian-Israeli grandmaster, Boris Gelfrand.

    His favorite piece is the knight as it can move as it pleases.

    Maccabee was originally born in Tel Aviv, but immigrated to America. He shares his name with the Maccabees, a group of Jewish rebels that overthrew the Seleucid empire in the 2nd century BCE, which eventually led to the celebration of Hanukkah. As such, Maccabee often carries around dreidels, 4-sided tops each containing a Hebrew letter, as they are often associated with Hanukkah.

    ミリャナ・マジッチ (Mirjana Majić) is how Mirjana's name would be spelled in katakana. Мирјана Мајић (Mirjana Majić) is how it would be spelled in Montenegrin (Cyrillic).
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is March 24th, which she shares with Hungarian-American escapologist, illusionist, and stunt performer, Harry Houdini.

    Her favorite piece is the queen.

    Mirjana is very hardworking and active, often being the one having to do everything for Montenegro's president to keep the country running smoothly. In terms of hobbies, she's fascinated with magic tricks, and likes to practice them in her spare time.

    As for the game, Maccabee plays the Israeli Gambit, also known as the Halász-McDonnell Gambit. This gambit can be pretty powerful if your opponent is unfamiliar with it. This gambit first appeared in a game in Season 7, but since I decided to have Maccabee debut earlier, I figured he should play this gambit in his game against Mimoko. A gifted player like Mimoko was naturally able to pass this test with flying colors. As such, I decided to name the chapter "Pop quiz", not just for the fact that Mimoko is effectively being quizzed on how to properly counter Maccabee's moves, but also because Maccabee himself is a father, thus the "pop" in the title could hold a double meaning.

    As for why I chose Maccabee and Mirjana to be the second round opponents, Maccabee, or rather someone related to him, will become a very important character later on in the series. As such, I figured I'd have them both debut in Season 1of the original. It also makes sense for Maccabee to frequently travel to Japan as his wife was Japanese. Mirjana on the other hand, I simply wanted to introduce earlier.

    And with that, Mimoko's 1st and 2nd round games, which were previously off-screened have now been shown in all their glory. All that remains in terms of round 2 is Okisato's game against Mirjana. This one won't be shown like all the others have, but will nonetheless be important for character development between the characters.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #25:

    Time to talk about Chapter 25: Mimoko's debut match.
    This chapter is one of a few that was originally added into the final major revision of the original Season 1. In the original draft of Season 1, rounds 1 and 2 of the Knigtlife Classic were skipped over, but I felt the matches needed to be showcased to better highlight Mimoko's and Okisato's prowess before their respective marquee matches of the season. What also brought this change about was the fact that thanks to Season 7, the series now has well over 500 characters from which I can draw from to have debut earlier in the story. As such, let's discuss those two characters now.

    ヒューバート・ノイマン (Hubert Neuman) is how Hubert's name is spelled in katakana.

    His birthday is June 20th, which he shares with American grandmaster, Hans Nieman.

    His favorite piece is the pawn.

    ゴラナ・ペトロヴィッチ (Gorana Petrović) is how Gorana's name would be spelled in katakana. Горана Петровић (Gorana Petrović) is how it would be spelled in Serbian (Cyrillic).
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is May 26th, which she shares with Serbian international master, Teodora Injac.

    Her favorite piece is the rook, since it's built like a mountain.

    Gorana is currently the highest rated female chess player in Serbia. She enjoys the outdoors and hiking in the mountains and also has a strong moral compass, and will refuse to remain silent on things she deems to be wrong and/or an injustice.

    As for the game, it features the infamous London System, a strong opening used at all levels that is either loved or hated. It originally debuted in Season 4 of the original, but with the chance to add new games to Season 1, I decided that Mimoko's would include the London, since it actually is one of her most preferred openings as White. Getting back to the game itself, I was really pleased with how it turned out as it was exciting from start to finish, and filled, what I believed, to be the missing piece of excitement, Season 1 was lacking.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #23:

    Time to talk about Chapter 23: Hagemi's first match.
    Originally, this wasn't going to exist, but I felt that I needed to flesh out more of why Gyro feared Hagemi so I decided to write this chapter. It ended up working in the end, though I'll elaborate more on that in a future commentary. One thing I will state now is up until the revised game log was released, the official date this match took place on was unknown, but now, the official date this game took place on was June 23rd, 2005. Now let's discuss some more info on Hagemi.

    Hagemi comes from a rich family, but ran away from home after her father tried to force her into a relationship with the son of an influential politician. She was only 16 at the time, and had never played chess prior. After meeting and impressing Redfield, she quickly became an overnight star in the chess world, but in the process, upstaged Kuon. At the time, Kuon was a 9-year old chess prodigy whom was going to be the next big star, until Hagemi came out of nowhere and not only upstaged her, but became Redfield's favorite chess player. As such, Kuon developed a rivalry with Hagemi and views her with hostility. Hagemi however, initially viewed her as a little sister, but began seeing her in a bit more of a romantic light once she became an adult. Hagemi's also close with Mimoko's mother, Daria, as well as various other mothers in the neighborhood. She's actually very sociable and nice, though can become terrifying when she's angry.

    One final topic I'll touch on are Inojin and Cypress. First off, both ended up having sex with Gyro as a punishment for Gyro's loss. The incident ended up causing Cypress to have mild, but not romantic affection for Gyro. The incident is also one of the big reasons he made it his creed not to underestimate women.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #22:

    Time to talk about Chapter 22: A prodigy in the making.
    This chapter gives us the first proper look at Okisato and Mimoko going all out. It also illustrates that just like in the real world, blunders are more prone to occur the faster the playing speed is.

    Now let's discuss the chess club. They've expanded their roster from 5 members to 10. However, only 8 of them will really be getting the spotlight in the story.

    As for the other two, their names are Zago-kun (座吾) and Azenira-chan (畔蒜 ).
    座吾 translates to "seat" and "myself" while 畔蒜 translates to "shore" and "perennial plant of the lily family".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    As for why they only have surnames, both were made with the intention that if this series ever got a video game adaptation, they'd be the player characters. As a result, their first names would be chosen by the player.

    Azenira and Zago won't have a major role in the story, until Season 7's adaptation, but even then, their roles could summarized as glorified cameos. And as for how things would work out plot-wise if the novel ever did get a video game adaptation, they'd essentially follow the chess club around and be fully controllable during tournaments. They wouldn't hijack the story though, simply being present for moments everyone plays in a game and watching events like the Okisato-Inojin game from a distance.

    Though going more into a potential video game adaptation, you would still be able to play as characters like Okisato for story battles. Speaking of which, I'd also make sure all the story matches (Okisato vs Inojin, Iori vs Cypress, Yuusuke vs Zanni, the bughouse game, etc.) have secret cut-scenes and dialogue if you play the games EXACTLY like they are in the story. This would only be a feature of story mode though.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #21:
    Time to talk about Chapter 21: WWCF cards.
    The primary purpose of this chapter was to talk about the WWCF cards. Since this was written before I rewrote some of the earlier chapters, this was originally going to be the giant info dump chapter on the WWCF cards. However, all this chapter really ended up doing was revealing that they can allow their holders to earn money from winning battles. Part of my mentality for doing that is that if this novel were to ever get a video game adaptation, the banking feature would essentially function similar to how you get money from winning battles in Pokemon games. I also thought it would be better to gradually reveal some of the features of the WWCF cards rather than dump everything all at once, so look forward to more reveals about the card's features in future chapters. Finally, let's discuss Syouma Numakawa.

    沼川 將誠 (Numakawa Syouma) is how his name would be spelled in kanji. 將誠 means "to almost be" and "fact", which is fitting since he's part of the science club. 沼川 on the other hand, translates to "swamp river".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His birthday is June 13th, which he shares with Lorenz Hellman Gloucester from Fire Emblem Three Houses.

    Like Maida, he feels the queen is the most versatile piece on the board.

    He's actually skilled at programming, but also very arrogant. Funnily enough, the greatest influence for his character is actually Lorenz Hellman Gloucester from Fire Emblem Three Houses.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #20:

    Time to talk about Chapter 20: Chess experiment.
    This chapter essentially served as a way to help spread word of the chess club throughout the school, and establish Maida as the supervising teacher for it. As such, I decided that it would be fitting for her to have her class do an experiment related to chess. The experiment is essentially seeing what the most common moves are amongst the class. Though when class reconvenes, the students will play each other from the 1. e4 Nf6 position so look forward to that in Volume 2.

    Finally, the big secret regarding Hagemi is out; she's the top female chess player in the world, publicly at least. I'll talk more about her background later, so for now, we'll just go over some basic trivia about her.

    承先 励美 (Shousen Hagemi) is how her name would be spelled in kanji, with her first name, 励美, translating to "Inspire" and "beautiful". Now remember how I said way back in Author's Commentary #3 that 承先 can mean "first"? That's why I chose it to be Yuusuke and Hagemi's surname as Hagemi is currently the number 1 female chess player in the world.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is March 31st which she shares with Koneru Humpy, an Indian grandmaster and one of the top female chess players of all time.

    Her favorite piece is the rook. Initially, she thought rooks were lousy, but quickly found how valuable they are in the endgame, which led to them becoming her favorite piece.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #19:

    Time to talk about Chapter 19: Feline fanatic.
    First thing's first, Kuon was originally supposed to be a much larger antagonist, but I couldn't think of what to do with her, so I relegated her to that of a minor one. As such, this chapter originally served to build her up as a messed up villain, but since I decided to change course, I ended up rewriting Kuon to make her more of a scientist. That being said, in the volume revisions, her role will be a tad more significant compared to the original.

    南谷 九怨 (Nanya Kuon) is how her name is spelled in kanji. Her first name, 九怨, translates to "nine" and "resentment", which is fitting for her character. Her last name, 南谷, means "South" and "ravine". It also has "nya" in it which is why I chose it.

    Her birthday is August 8th, which is International Cat Day. As for why she prefers catgirls over cats, she just does. Catpeople are her fetish.

    Her favorite piece is the queen, mainly because she herself believes she is the queen of chess. She was actually a child prodigy, but ended up getting upstaged when her eventual rival and world's highest rated female player, Hagemi, entered the scene.

    I'll also talk a bit about Nyogaku Nakano. Like Kuon, I originally planned for her to have a larger role, but for now she'll be a minor character.

    中埜 如岳 (Nakano Nyogaku) is how her name is written in kanji. Her first name,
    如岳 means "similar to" and "peak". Her last name, 中埜 means "inside" and "field". It is an obvious nod to the the Nakano quintuplets from the Quintessential Quintuplets. Though funnily enough, the character that largely inspired Nyogaku was actually Sahara Wakasa from Mato Seihei no Slave.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is December 4th. I originally wanted to make her birthday the same as Sahara's but decided to go with something a bit more creative as Sahara debuted in the 12th chapter of the manga and the 4th episode of the anime.
    Her favorite piece is the bishop because she likes how they go whoosh on the diagonals.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Nov 26, 2025

    Author's Commentary #18:

    Time to talk about Chapter 18: A woman of science.
    First off, let's briefly touch on the now bald catgirl, Nyoan. One thing I've always wondered about catgirls is if they have two sets of ears. That's why I decided to answer that question and found out they do indeed have both human and cat ears, or at least Nyoan does. Even though she was subjected to a full-head wax, her hair has a small chance of growing back naturally. However, since Okisato simply made her punishment "losing all her hair and fur", she could challenge someone to a DESPER battle and have her prize for winning be her hair and fur growing back. Of course, Nyoan is probably not smart enough to think of that herself.

    Now let's move on to Okisato's 27-year old teacher, Mayana Maida. She's a woman of science and is highly intelligent. She draws heavy inspiration from Sae Chabashira from Classroom of the Elite.

    毎田 万夜奈 (Maida Mayana) is how her name is spelled in kanji. Her first name, 万夜奈, can translate to "ten thousand", "night", and "fruit tree". Her last name, 毎田, means "always" and "rice field".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is March 14th which she shares with German-born theoretical physicist, Albert Einstein. Believe it or not, Einstein did play chess from time to time so this can technically count as a chess related birthday as well.

    Even though she's just now picking up chess, she's determined that the queen is by far one of the more useful pieces on the board, and thus that could be considered her favorite piece, which is a bit ironic considering she was trapped in one, but it could also be argued that the incident gave her an up close look at how useful the queen is.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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