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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Oct 03, 2025

And I guess that's it for now... Premature review time then. I do think this was much better than the thorn novel, much easier to read and as such, easier to understand the jokes. And well, that's it. It's a shame you couldn't finish this in time, but for what it was, I gave me some good laughs.

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Chapter:14

Oct 03, 2025

Imagine if Frieren went south instead of north. Although, that might have led to some interesting lore dumps.

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Chapter:13

Oct 03, 2025

Another one.

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Chapter:12

Oct 03, 2025

Never watched Shield hero either, so I can't vouch for the comparisons either. Anyway, it's wizarding time, so play the wizard theme on the cheap plastic kazoo.

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Chapter:11

Oct 03, 2025

Well, maybe she's so malnourished they won't bother eating her.

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Chapter:10

Oct 03, 2025

To:Mai

Muki mobile.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:12

Oct 03, 2025

How could West Brom even win the champion's league if they aren't even qualified for it. Best they could get is Europa league, but only if they win the FA cup.

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Chapter:9

Oct 03, 2025

Goomba: "What da hell are you doing?"

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Chapter:8

Oct 03, 2025

Ah yes, hentai-sized titties. I've seen some that have a life of their own, so I can imagine how much they jiggle when she hammers. Also, Alexa, play 't Smidje.

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Chapter:7

Oct 03, 2025

We've got to have... money...

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Chapter:6

Oct 03, 2025

Plot armor can change the future.

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Chapter:5

Oct 03, 2025

Is this about to become a cosmic horror show?

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Chapter:4

Oct 03, 2025

Noticing improvement with the dialogue tags' variety so props for that. Still not a fan of them being separated by paragraph though. On that note, I'd also recommend trying to break up the paragraphs as most of them are really chunky.

How a Pink Diamond Talisman Turned Me from a Graduate Student into a Warrior Princess

Chapter:3

Oct 03, 2025

To:Mai

Real gamers press the "skip dialogue" button. If they're doing a speedrun that is.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:9

Oct 03, 2025

To:Mai

That's right, you've got a Winona in your story. This one might even be more psychotic than yours.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:8

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