Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Aug 23, 2024

    Author's Commentary #178:

    Time to talk about the Side Story 2 intro, Chapter 178: A tale of salt and crackers.
    This time, the side story will be focusing on Daria, though it's true plot won't become apparent right away. In fact, the backstory with Bruno was actually a last minute decision, though one I believe was worth it. But first, a bio on Bruno and Ignatz.

    ブルーノ・ルマカ (Bruno Lumaca) is how Bruno's name is spelled in katakana. His last name is actually Italian for "slug" which explains why he hates salt so much. Though the bigger reason he hates salt is because his character is a homage to Chess.com's Eugene bot who plays like a top level player, unless you open with Knight a3, the Sodium attack. Then he plays horribly. As such, I decided to pay homage to Eugene, by creating Bruno. And speaking of homages, his rating of 2832 is actually Magnus Carlsen's current classical rating at the time of this chapter's upload.

    His birthday is August 1st, which was the 1st day the Eugene bot was playable.

    His favorite piece is the rook, mainly because he believes it's the piece that has the least connections to salt.

    One other noteworthy thing about him is that he's Swiss, and hails from Lugano, which is located in the Italian-speaking canton of Ticino. Ignatz is also Swiss, but hails from the capitol city of Bern, which is 30 minutes away from Biel, a city know for hosting the prestigious Biel chess festival.

    イグナーツ・ヴァルザー (Ignatz Walser) is how Ignatz's name is spelled in katakana.

    His birthday is March 12th, which is actually two days before the birthday of Ignatz Victor from Fire Emblem Three Houses, the character who Ignatz's name was inspired by.

    His favorite piece is the knight, which is a bit ironic considering the character he's named after, Ignatz Victor, is pressured to become a knight even though he'd rather be a painter.

    As for the game, I was originally going to have the game be between Ignatz and Bruno with Daria watching, but decided it worked better to have Daria be the one to play Bruno. Bruno's weakness is actually knowledge only a few people know, and since Ignatz likely wouldn't open with the Sodium attack, nor know of Bruno's weakness on the spot, I decided Daria would be the better fit to play him.

    The game was actually played against Chess.com's Eugene bot, though with assisted mode on in order to replicate Daria's skill level. I actually have played some games against the Eugene bot with him at full strength in order to play crazy openings. Naturally, I use assisted mode, but I liked Eugene's concept so much, I decided to pay homage to him with Bruno. Since Eugene's rating is supposedly 3500 when you don't play the Sodium attack, I plan to try and play more crazy games against him, and who knows, maybe some will end up being the basis for future games in the series.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    En Passant Grandmaster
    Chapter:178

    Aug 23, 2024

    Author's Commentary #134:

    Time to talk about Chapter 134: Father's Day feast.
    I honestly didn't know what I was going to do for this chapter when I initially drafted it, but that quickly changed as I remembered all the side characters and realized they could play a role in this chapter.

    First up is Yuki who actually is an Escape Witch character, but never made an on-screen appearance there. His father, Natsuya is actually Gozaemon's third child and only son, making him Harumi's younger brother and Eika's older brother, respectively. I'll do their bios along with Katsuhito's.

    銀川 雪 (Ginkawa Yuki) is how his name is spelled in kanji. His name, 雪 means "snow".

    His birthday is December 21st. This is fitting since December is a month associated with snow, and the 21st is one of the possible days the Winter solstice, aka the first day of Winter, can fall on.

    His favorite food is red bean paste.

    銀川 夏矢 (Ginkawa Natsuya) is how Natsuya's name is spelled in kanji. His name, 夏矢, means "Summer" and "arrow", which is a bit ironic since he's a pacifist.

    His birthday is November 22nd. The day was chosen at random, but I did make sure it was a date in the season of Fall in order to keep with the pattern of Gozaemon's children being born in the season that takes place after the one they were named after.

    His favorite food is tofu.

    加勢川 克仁 (Kasegawa Katsuhito) is how Katsuhito's name is spelled in kanji. His name, 克仁, means "conquer" and "compassion" which is somewhat fitting considering he's a merciless grader and teacher. I'll also confirm that he is in fact Serika's homeroom teacher, meaning he's the teacher that first graded Serika's tests.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His birthday is December 1st. I chose the date at random, so there's no greater significance behind why this date is his birthday.

    His favorite food is pork ramen.

    Funnily enough, this chapter also helped me solve the riddle for how I'd handle the last mini-arc of the series. As for what that is, the hint is that Itsuki will be involved in some way, but won't be the main focus. But first, it's Benihime's birthday up next.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Spice of life [Remake]
    Chapter:134



    Aug 21, 2024

    Author's Commentary #177:

    Time to talk about the finale of Side Story 1, Chapter 177: Kirikawa lineage.
    Picking up from where things left off, Iori, Carol, and Harold have been taken to the Kirikawa villa. Here, they'll learn more about their lineage and possibly even some ninja moves too.

    Jijiji has also become the second person in the series to learn of Iori's past, however, it doesn't really phase him considering there's been many like Iori in the clan's long history. Speaking of things Jijiji learned, he also learned of Carol's past. I was debating whether or not to show his conversations with Carol and Harold, but felt it would be better saving that for another side story as that conversation will set the stage for said side story. I'm unsure if it will be Side Story 2 though as there's a lot of things I can do with the Side Stories.

    As for the series itself, a break from daily uploads is likely as I'm working to finish up the Spice of life remake by the end of the month and I'm planning a new series, Streamer Royale, which was actually referenced at the end of the chapter.

    To go on a little tangent about Streamer Royale, it's a crossover work with many of my other novels that take place in the Jouzu-verse. In case I haven't already stated this in a commentary here, the Jouzu-verse is the term I use to describe the universe in which most of my novels take place in. This chapter confirms that within the Jouzu-verse timeline, Streamer Royale will at least take place after Side Story 1 of EPGM. It's likely though that another Side Story or two will take place chronologically before the events of Streamer Royale, but I'll mention that fact when it's relevant. If you're interested in seeing Iori, Carol, and Mimoko interacting with characters from my other works, feel free to check out Streamer Royale.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    En Passant Grandmaster
    Chapter:177


    Aug 20, 2024

    Author's Commentary #176:

    Time to talk about Chapter 176: Inspector Prokrutka and the old ninja.
    This was originally going to be the final chapter of the side story, but I decided to split the chapter into two since it turned out to be longer than I thought. This chapter introduces two important characters, Inspector Prokurtka from the WWCF and Jijiji, the patriarch of the Kirikawa clan's main branch. Let's talk about both.

    ウラジスラフ・プロクルトカ警部 (Inspector Vladislav Prokrutka) is how Prokrutka's name is spelled in Japanese. Инспектор Владислав Прокрутка (Inspector Vladislav Prokrutka) is how his name is spelled in Russian. His last name means "scroll". This is fitting since Prokrutka is said to have scrolls of data he claims prove certain players have cheated.

    His birthday is June 25th which he shares with 14th chess world champion and Russian grandmaster, Vladimir Kramnik.

    His favorite piece is the knight, due to Petrov's defense being one of his most preferred openings.

    Unlike most of the other characters in the series, Prokrutka's character was based a bit more heavily off the real world chess player he shares his birthday with compared to the others. All I'll say on that is if you know, you know. In terms of his design though, he's actually based heavily off of Inspector Clouseau from the Pink Panther series and looks very similar to him.

    ジジジ (Jijiji) aka 切川 一二三 (Kirikawa Kazujizou) is how Jijiji's name is spelled in Japanese. 一二三 means "one", "two", and "three", while 切川 means "to cut" and "river".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His birthday is March 3rd which he shares with his two triplet siblings, Roichi and Minii, as well as his great grandchildren Kasumi, Nika, and Miku.

    He doesn't really play chess, but his favorite piece would likely be the king, mainly because that's his favorite shogi piece.

    As stated before, I ended up posting a Kirikawa family tree in the gallery. While it is labeled with a "Spoiler" tag, that's mainly due to the fact that it was posted before it was revealed in the story that Iori, Carol, and Harold were Kirikawas.

    Since some of the protagonists from my other series are Kirikawas, there's a good chance Iori will meet them soon enough. Of course the question of whether she'll first meet them in this story or elsewhere remains to be seen.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    En Passant Grandmaster
    Chapter:176




    Aug 18, 2024

    Author's Commentary #129:

    Time to talk about Chapter 129: In the palm of her hand.
    This one's another remake exclusive, though it does borrow an idea from the original, namely Reika putting on a disguise. Everything went according to her plan, meaning Rika doesn't need to worry about the footage of her killing Hilda being used against her.

    Since Cyril uploaded the footage to his channel, I.L.U. has no choice but to deligitimize his credibility as otherwise he could revive the blackmail empire and use it against them. This also marks the beginning of Ginji and Cyril's feud with one another which will continue all the way to En Passant Grandmaster. Had Ginji known that Reika had set everything up, he would have changed tactics, but since Reika is one of the smartest characters in the series, he fell right into the trap. Cyril did too as he had no idea the woman he was doing business with was actually Reika.

    Now that Rika's in the clear for the time being, the story will start winding down. There will still be a few more big twists though, one of which being hinted at since the early chapters of the series. See if you can guess what it is before it's revealed.

    And as for the amount of chapters left, I've finally settled on the series ending on the last day of August, though I'll also do a bonus chapter which I'll post on the series 1 year anniversary on September 23rd, meaning there's a total of 14 planned chapters left. That means, series will end with a total of 146 chapters. It's certainly been a journey, and it's hard to believe it's almost over, but I thank everyone that's supported this series thus far and hope you're looking forward to the final batch of chapters for the series.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:129

    Aug 17, 2024

    Author's Commentary #128:

    Time to talk about Chapter 128: Money on the mind.
    Rize makes her declaration and I.L.U. finds out about Hilda's death. It seems like things might get a tad bit hectic before the end of the series. Speaking of hectic, Ginji Inohara is quite the eccentric.

    猪原 銀仁 (Inohara Ginji) is how his name is written in kanji. 銀仁 means "silver" and "compassion", while 猪原 means "boar" and "origin".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His name and character were mainly inspired by Ginji Kiyomizu from Tying the knot with an Amagami sister. He is also Kaori Inohara's father.

    His birthday is January 27th. The reason for that is because Ginji Kiyomizu debuted in chapter 127 of the Tying the Knot with an Amagami Sister manga.

    His favorite food is mizo soup.

    Despite the fact that this series takes place canonically before En Passant Grandmaster, Ginji actually ended up making his debut in one of the chapters there. I actually wasn't sure if I was going to add him to this story, but decided to, starting with a small cameo, and now having him shown off fully in this chapter.

    In terms of the story and how many chapters are left, I've actually written most of the ending chapters, but can't post them yet since I still have yet to write the stuff that happens in between this chapter and those. None the less, there is still some major plot-points to still address, the headmaster selection being the big one. Thankfully, that and one other thing will be addressed before the series' end.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:128

    Aug 16, 2024

    Author's Commentary #172:

    Time to talk about Chapter 172: Gothic chess gamble.
    Turns out Okisato's still got one more match to play, and it's against the queen of the faires herself. But to add even more intensity to the match, it's actually a Gothic chess match, meaning the board is bigger and the empress and princess are in play.

    Gothic chess is a chess variant that improves upon Capablanca chess by rearranging the starting pieces in order to make things more fair. The board is a 10x8 instead of an 8x8, and the princess, also known as the archbishop, and empress, also known as the chancellor, are in play. These pieces can move like a knight and bishop and knight and rook, respectively.

    Considering the fairy league is named after fairy chess pieces, I felt there had to be at least one game with fairy chess pieces fought against them. The reason it took so long to finally get a game like that in the series was simply because it took me a while to find out that you can play Gothic chess on Chess.com.

    Speaking of which, the game was played between me and another player, which is why the game plays out as it did. I somehow won the game despite playing horribly, but it was my terrible moves that inspired me to have fatigue play a role in justifying why Okisato played so terribly. The man did play Red Reaper 3 times, Phantom once, and Xiao Lin and all 7 of her SPCMs. That's 12 total matches, not to mention some of them were chess variants like atomic chess, chess 960, fog of war chess, and chaturaji. Okisato needed rest, but thanks to Scharlachrot, was on the verge of losing.

    Luckily, Heather, much like my opponent in the game, didn't see the mate threat before it was too late. Now everyone except Numakawa is back in Japan, but there's still a bit more story to be told in London, mainly Scharlachrot's backstory. Plus, there's the batsu for Heather which will definitely be very steamy.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    En Passant Grandmaster
    Chapter:172

    Aug 16, 2024

    Author's Commentary #127:

    Time to talk about Chapter 127: Vampire Slayer.
    Rika immediately realized Hilda was in the restaurant and promptly fought her. Though what ultimately determined the outcome was Hilda foolishly destroying her phone earlier. Of course, Rika naturally would have sliced that to bits if Hilda ever tried to use it.

    Hilda being a vampire is what explains her advanced age. However, there are also many I.L.U. members with advanced ages that are not vampires. I actually planned for Hilda to try and attack Rika after reforming rather than fleeing, but felt her fleeing would be more in line with her character, as she would want to prioritize getting away. Had her phone been intact though, she might have been able to sneak out a text before Rika offed her. And yes, Hilda truly is dead. Unlike Ookuma though, I.L.U. will find out about her death.

    Two final things I'll talk about are some of the characters in this chapter. First up is Wexley who was present in the original, in one of the worst chapters in the series. However, I decided to bring him back, and actually have some plans for him. And finally, the grand reveal that the mysterious red-haired woman was Rize all along. Lets give them their bios.

    シュナウズ・ウェクスリー (Schnauz Wexley) is how Wexley's name is written in katakana. His first name is actually a pun on "schnoz" while his surname is a pun on "wax" as I originally intended to name him "Waxley".

    His birthday is November 6th. I chose the date at random so there's no greater significance behind why this date is his birthday.

    His favorite food is wax food. Yeah, I had to make the joke. In terms of edible food, wax beans, and yes, those are a real food.

    撫養 里瀬 (Muya Rize) is how Rize's name is written in kanji. 里瀬 means "hometown" and "rapids", while 撫養 means "comfort" and "nurture".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is August 2nd, which she shares with Asahi Saiba from Shokugeki no Soma. Ironically, she's more heavily inspired by Rindo Kobayashi from the same series.

    Her favorite food, as revealed in the story, is pljeskavica with spam musubi.

    Now that Hilda's out of the picture, things will begin to wind down, and the majority of the story from this point on will likely be slice of life stuff. I'm not sure how many more chapters left there will be, but I still think the series will conclude in August. Though regardless of when it does conclude, I do plan to do something for the series' anniversary on September 23rd.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:127