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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Oct 24, 2024

So he eats fire. Now he's definitely giving me Natsu vibes. 😆

Saratoga: In Search of the Healing Tears

Chapter:4

Oct 24, 2024

It's good that Yalda wasn't out for days like last time. Looks like it's time for a training arc.

Face of Eternity : Principality of Dreams

Chapter:14

Oct 24, 2024

Uh oh, Yamin got kidnapped and Yalda's in hibernation mode. Loved the fact that the narration switched to third person and showcased another side of the battle.

Face of Eternity : Principality of Dreams

Chapter:13

Oct 24, 2024

Yep, knew there was gonna be a phase 2. 😆

Face of Eternity : Principality of Dreams

Chapter:12

Oct 24, 2024

The key to beating The Actor? Negative reviews. That really got a laugh out of me. But it seems like the battle's far from over. Wonder if the Tarasque is gonna have a second phase.

Face of Eternity : Principality of Dreams

Chapter:11

Oct 24, 2024

Author's Commentary #55:

Time to talk about Chapter 55: Castle caper Part 4.
This marks the finale of the London arc as well as Melinda's Reichenbach. While she did survive the fall, she'll no longer have a role in the story, but it won't be the last that will be seen of her.

It is worth mentioning that she is a streamer. An evil one, but a streamer none the less. So there's a good chance she might return in Streamer Royal. Speaking of which. Fans of the Casino cruise arc from the original Escape Witch can look forward to the remade version of it coming to Streamer Royal. Only Emeri will be present, as the other heroines are off doing other things, but she'll be joined instead by characters from my other works.

As for the Remake, it's going on break again as with the Mal X Honeyfeed contest going on, my plate is a little too full. I'll try to get it all done by the end of the year as best I can, but no guarantees it will happen. I hope you look forward to it.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Escape:Witch [Remake]

Chapter:55

Oct 24, 2024

Author's Commentary #54:

Time to talk about Chapter 54: Castle caper Part 3.
While this is rather similar to it's original counterpart, the notable difference is that the confrontation with Oribia and Orise is no longer present. Nakajima is also not the one needed to be rescued as she doesn't even leave Japan. Other than that, everything else is pretty much the same.

I really liked the fact that the girls just looked up the answer online as I thought it was a hilarious way to solve the puzzle. Speaking of the puzzle, I have a feeling characters like the count and the ghouls will appear in some of my other works as well. If that happens, they'll get proper names.

And with that, only one chapter remains for the London arc. After that, it's the grand finale of the remake.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Escape:Witch [Remake]

Chapter:54

Oct 23, 2024

To:SkeletonIdiot

Definitely stuff like that, though with orbiting fire balls, water, lightning, etc. People can even have their hair resemble animals and even fly around like a bird.

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:2

Oct 23, 2024

To:Stubby1807

Thanks for checking this out. Irina will most certainly be the chaos factor of the group.

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:1

Oct 23, 2024

To:stevebryan112

Thanks for checking this out. In all my works, I tend to take time to plan out the characters names. There are some cases where I just choose a name because it sounds cool, but others where I deliberately spend hours trying to narrow down the perfect name. This is usually the case for characters with Japanese names as I tend to make sure the meaning of the kanji in their names fits their characters.

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:1

Oct 23, 2024

Great start. I think the world-building really sets the stage for what's to come. Based on the genre tags and description, I'm really intrigued to know how this story will play out.

Anima: Don't Take the Bait

Chapter:0

Oct 23, 2024

Author's Commentary #53:

Time to talk about Chapter 53: Castle caper Part 2.
This one is pretty much the same as it's original counterpart. Aside from some dialogue changes, notably from Melinda, it is about as identical as it can get to the original.

Though I will state that the haunted castle portion of this arc is easily one of my favorite parts of the series. The haunted castle idea actually dated as far back as the initial drafts for the series. However, the castle was meant to be more of a Transylvanian-styled castle with a Dracula-like villain. I ended up making it an English castle as I wanted to have the girls have a showdown at a certain location in England, but needed something to fluff the arc out. Thus, I felt it was the perfect chance to make use of the haunted castle idea.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Escape:Witch [Remake]

Chapter:53

Oct 23, 2024

To:Shulox

Thanks for checking this out. When it comes to naming characters, I often like there to be some meaning behind their names. For example, Hana's last name, Hangetsu is Japanese for "half-moon", Selena's last name, Salamandra is Spanish for "salamander", and Irina's last name, Kobold is German for "goblin". Of the three, I'd argue Hana has the most affinity with the meaning of her last name as her whole aesthetic is themed around a half-moon.

Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent

Chapter:1

Oct 21, 2024

Author's Commentary #52:

Time to talk about Chapter 52: Castle caper Part 1.
It's been a few months, but Escape:Witch is finally back. This time, the London arc is being revised a bit, but the core of it is mostly the same as in the original. On that note, I feel I need to talk about the arc that was skipped, the casino cruise arc.

Part of the reason I kept pushing back realeasing new chapters, was because I was unable to find the motivation to revise the Casino cruise arc. Some of you might know that I'm also writing a crossover work between my series, known as Streamer Royal. There, I plan to definitely have a casino cruise themed arc, which led to me feeling more demotivated to revise the Casino cruise arc here.

Ultimately, I decided it was best to just cut the arc and jump to London, as it will serve as the penultimate arc for the series. Yes, this means the American arcs from the original won't be adapted in the remake, but I feel those arcs are honestly some of the weaker parts of the series. But for now, enjoy the London arc.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Escape:Witch [Remake]

Chapter:52

Oct 21, 2024

Seems Ralphy didn't know good bargaining. He should have stated a lower amount than what he had on hand to gauge how much of a bargain he could get the truck for. Curious to see where this one goes.

Food Truck in Space

Chapter:1

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