Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Dec 10, 2024

    Author's Commentary #132:

    Time to talk about Chapter 132: A heartless woman.
    If you didn't hate Imelda already, this chapter will most certainly make you hate her as it offers a glimpse at just how cruelly she treated Carol during her college days.

    As for what happened to her sister, basically, her sister learned of what she had done to Carol and reprehended her for it. But Imelda aired her grievances to Pewler, which led to her sister being dragged into a DESPER match and turned into a sheepblossom as punishment for losing. As for what happened after, Imelda was walking with her sister, when she saw some guys walking by wearing anime shirts. Deeming anime degenerate thanks to Pewler's dogma, she ordered her sister to kill the two. Her sister came close to killing one, but the other killed her in order to save his friend's life. This enraged Imelda who promptly phoned in Pewler for help, resulting in the two being tried for murder and eventually subjected to DESPER matches against Pewler and turned into sheepblossom for losing. One of those guys was actually the sheepblossom that appeared back in Chapter 104, believe it or not. The other one was sadly killed and eaten by Imelda.

    Speaking of which, this chapter takes the cake for having the most brutal death in the series. This is why I had all the characters display various reactions. Carol's reaction in particular was one I struggled a bit with though. While she is glad that Imelda is dead, actually seeing her suffer such a gruesome fate before her eyes is still saddening for her. However, she feels that Imelda brought this all upon herself, which saddens her because deep down, Carol is a good person, unlike Iori who relishes in others suffering. The chapter's title also has some double meaning. On one hand, it could refer to Imelda, who claims to be a beacon of compassion, but is anything but. But it could also refer to Iori.

    As for the game, it ended up being a great way to write in a proper castling checkmate. Funnily enough, it occurred 12 games after the Iori and Carol collusion castling checkmate back in Chapter 112. Now Mimoko can see that Iori truly was capable of pulling off the move, and holds no resentment over the bet. However, things aren't over as while Mimoko and Carol were able to be sent back to Japan, Iori has stayed behind, presumably to face Horner and go after Pewler.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Dec 10, 2024

    Author's Commentary #121:

    Time to talk about Chapter 121: Sorcha's angst.
    I originally planned for this to simply be an intro chapter for Sir Grobhand, but decided to give a bit more character development to Sorcha. Then before I knew it, I was making a Life stream reference. Originally, I had Life Stream as existing within a separate universe, but decided that it would be part of the main one. Thus, Leona and Astrid exist here. Anyway, let's talk a bit more about Sir Grobhand and Muirchertach.

    ミュルヒェルタッハ・グラス (Muirchertach Glas) is how Muirchertach's name is spelled in katakana. He's currently the taoiseach of Ireland and has always had a large influence in Irish politics for years. He's a greedy man and also a Desperado.

    His birthday is July 14th. Like Sorcha, I wanted him to have a July birthday and the 14th of July worked well because 14 is 7 times 2.

    His favorite piece is the king. Mainly because he thinks the king is the most powerful piece on and off the board.

    グロブハンド卿 (Sir Grobhand) is how Sir Grobhand's name is written in Japanese. As per his name, his favorite move to play is the Grob opening. And if he's playing black, he'll always play the Borg defense unless he can play a Double Grob. I think we know who's going to face this idiot.

    His birthday is April 3rd, which is the day Monty Python and the Holy Grail was released. This is fitting since he's largely inspired by the film.

    His favorite piece is the knight, obviously since he himself is a knight.

    The next battle could allow Mimoko and co to return home, however, Muirchertach is a crafty man, and him showing up with Sir Grobhand does feel a bit too convenient.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Dec 10, 2024

    Author's Commentary #104:

    Time to talk about Chapter 104: Manipulator.
    Originally, Pewler didn't appear until Chapter 110. However, I decided he needed to appear earlier in order to make him more of a threat. I also decided to have the fictional dystopian novel, Glasstone, make its debut here as well, since it does give a bit of context on what fuels Pewler's ambitions.

    マヌエル・"マニー"・ピューラー (Manuel "Manny" Pewler) is how his name is spelled in katakana. His name, Manny Pewler, is a pun on the word, "manipuler" which is French for "manipulate". His design was based off of David Xanotos from Gargoyles, and funnily enough, I can imagine Pewler sounding just like him too.

    His birthday is August 15th which he shares with French emperor, Napoleon Bonaparte.

    As for his favorite piece, the queen would be his favorite normal piece due to it being the most powerful piece on the board. However, the fairy chess piece known as the amazon is actually his true favorite piece, due to it having the power to checkmate all on it's own.

    Pewler actually went through many character revisions before I settled on the final version of him. At first, he was initial going to be a manipulative, but more morally gray character. However, as I began to finalize the plot of Season 4, I felt he needed to be more evil and irredeemable.

    Unlike with Michiko, Pewler's true thoughts and motives will be revealed to the readers within the story. As such, I feel he's one of the antagonists I really need to nail when it comes to the writing. Speaking of the writing, Season 4 is quickly shaping up to be one of my more ambitious writing projects. I feel I'm either going to nail it or botch it, maybe get something in between.

    One quick thing I will touch on before discussing his secretary, Lindsey, is the fact that executive board members have the ability to mask their true ratings just like Raymond can. Unlike him though, they can't be looked up in the database, though since Pewler has defected to the Desperado league, all his match data along with his true rating are actually viewable. Now onto Lindsey.

    リンゼイ・コブラー (Lindsey Cobbler) is how her name is spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is January 21st. I chose this date at random so there's no greater reasoning behind why this date is her birthday.

    Her favorite piece is the queen, though mainly because Pewler told her that the queen is the best piece on the board when fairy chess pieces like the amazon aren't in play.

    Like Pewler, she now debuts much earlier than in the original draft, which I believe is for the better. Speaking of which, I've made lots of changes in the revisions that I believe are for the better. Safumi interacting with Okisato instead of Zago is one, as while the interaction would likely be a thing in a video game adaptation, for the story, I don't really want Zago and Azenira to hog the spotlight too much. There are other notable changes as well, which I'll talk about more as they show up within the story.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Dec 09, 2024

    Author's Commentary #283

    Time to talk about Chapter 283: Prussia's declaration.
    I'll admit, the main purpose of this chapter was to properly introduce all the members of both Prussian teams. Quite a few have already been revealed, but only three have gotten their bios. I'll also do bios for Unnur and Vesna as I didn't get the chance to do it in the previous commentary.

    フォルクナー・キーナー (Volkner Keiner) is how Volkner's name is spelled in katakana.

    His birthday is November 15th, which he shares with German grandmaster, Vincent Keymer.

    His favorite piece is the knight.

    ハンス・ウルリッヒ・ミュラー (Hans-Ulrich Müller) is how Hans-Ulrich's name is written in katakana. His character is loosely inspired by the Medic from Team Fortress 2.

    His birthday is April 7th, which is the day Team Fortress Classic released.

    His favorite piece is the bishop as he likes making use of both of them.

    エーデルトラウト・ウルブリヒト (Edeltraud Ulbricht) is how Edeltraud's name is spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is June 22nd, which she shares with Edelgard von Hresvelg from Fire Emblem Three Houses, which is fitting since she'd loosely based off her.

    Her favorite piece is the queen, because that's how she views herself

    イングリッド・フォン・ヘッセル (Ingrid von Hessel) is how Ingrid's name is spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is January 4th, which she shares with Ingrid Brandi Galatea from Fire Emblem Three Houses, which is fitting since she shares her name with her and is loosely based off her.

    マグダレナ・ヨック (Magdalena Yock) is how Magdalena's name is spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is April 17th, which she shares with Hubert von Vestra from Fire Emblem Three Houses.

    Her favorite piece is the bishop.

    シビル・ウィズナー (Sibylle Wizner) is how Sibylle's name is spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is December 9th, which she shares with Sibylla from Spy Kyoushitsu, who she is very loosely based off of. The birthday is also shared with Saloni Madhock, Indian International master Divya Deshmukh, and American grandmaster, Hikaru Nakamura, but that's more of a coincidental thing.

    Her favorite piece is the queen.

    ハンネロア・シュローダー (Hannelore Schroeder) is how Hannelore's name is spelled in katakana.

    Her birthday is March 31st which she shares with Koneru Humpy, an Indian grandmaster and one of the top female chess players of all time.

    Her favorite piece is the rook.

    ウンヌール・スロッドセン (Unnur Throddsen) is how Unnur's name is spelled in katakana. She likes to refer to herself in the third person.

    Her birthday is May 5th, which she shares with Miku Nakano from The Quintessential Quintuplets, which is fitting since she's loosely based off her.

    Her favorite piece is the queen because she views herself as a villainess queen.

    ヴェスナ・モローズ (Vesna Moroz) is how Vesna's name is spelled in katakana. Весна Мороз (Vesna Moroz) is how her name would be spelled in Ukrainian. Her name translates to "Spring Frost".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translation, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is June 5th, which she shares with Ukrainian grandmaster, Natalia Zhukova.

    Her favorite piece is the pawn, as pawns represent an army of comonomers in her view.

    And with that, all the Prussians have their bios along with Vesna and Unnur. With the focus on Prussia, I'm sure many will theorize that Prussia will likely be Japan's next opponent. The question is whether both teams will face Prussia. Though I think at least one of the teams will face them, though it would be a bit hillarious if none did as it would make Diderich's declaration all the more awkward. But regardless of if face Prussia next round, I will confirm that both teams will face Prussia at some point in the tournament.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Dec 09, 2024

    Author's Commentary #19:

    Time to discuss Chapter 19: A woman of science.
    First off, let's briefly touch on the now bald catgirl, Nyoan. One thing I've always wondered about catgirls is if they have two sets of ears. That's why I decided to answer that question and found out... They do indeed have both human and cat ears, or at least Nyoan does. Even though she was subjected to a full-head wax, her hair has a small chance of growing back naturally. However, since Okisato simply made her punishment "losing all her hair and fur", she could challenge someone to a DESPER battle and have her prize for winning be her hair and fur growing back. Of course, Nyoan is probably not smart enough to think of that herself.

    Now let's move on to Okisato's 27-year old teacher, Mayana Maida. She's a woman of science and is highly intelligent. She draws heavy inspiration from Sae Chabashira from Classroom of the elite.

    毎田 万夜奈 (Maida Mayana) is how her name is spelled in kanji. Her first name, 万夜奈, can translate to "ten thousand", "night", and "fruit tree". Her last name, 毎田, means "always" and "rice field".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is March 14th which is shared with Albert Einstein, one of the most famous scientists of all time. Believe it or not, Einstein did play chess from time to time so this can technically count as a chess related birthday as well.

    Even though she's just now picking up chess, she's determined that the queen is by far one of the more useful pieces on the board, and thus that could be considered her favorite piece, which is a bit ironic considering she was trapped in one, but it could also be argued that the incident gave her an up close look at how useful the queen is.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Dec 08, 2024

    Author's Commentary #282:

    Time to talk about Chapter 282: Chess' worldwide importance.
    This one's a lore dump chapter, and there's a lot to talk about. And the big one is easily the state of the world thanks to the effect of the DESPERs. The fact that Germany's now the German Empire of Prussia, Russia's ruled by a tsar, and England's ruled by fairy chess fanatics probably cued many to the fact that while Earth in this universe does share some parallels with our modern day earth, there are many differences as well. However, one thing I felt I needed to address in the story was the state of Ukraine.

    This is a touchy topic due to current events at the time of writing this, but since Ukraine has such a rich chess history, I felt it needed to be in the story. While I could have taken the safe route and simply decided to have the war not take place in this universe, I felt that wasn't the right way to go about it, thus I went with what I did.

    The war still occurred, but it ended much faster due to the DESPERs. Ukraine does still exist though, but now has chess players as it's army in order to defend itself from Russia. As for why Grigori didn't force the Ukrainian president to cede all of Ukraine to him as part of the wager, it lies in the fact that Grigori sought to build his public image as a peacemaker, and he felt he could just slowly snip away at the land later anyway. Vesna's backstory will also be one of the darker ones in the series o fair warning on whenever it comes up again.

    One other thing I'll mention before moving on to the next discussion topic is that there were many other nations I felt needed to be a part of the Chess Olympics due to either, their rich chess history and or good placement/won medals at the 45th Chess Olympiad. This is what initially drove me to make so many teams, and before I knew it, I had over 40. I doubt I'll be able to have both male and female teams for all the countries, in fact I'll confirm that the number of women's teams including Japan will not exceed 50. This is not to snub all those other teams, but rather it's just too big a task to write all those characters. Remember, each team consists of 5 members and even if you exclude the characters that have already been introduced, that's still a lot of characters to juggle. And that's just on the women's side. I've still got to write out some of the teams on the men's side. But I do think it's important to at least flesh out most of these characters as many of them will return for future arcs.

    Now I'll talk more about the other nations mentioned in this chapter starting with the Neo Kingdom of Egypt. This nation came about mainly because I wanted to have an ancient Egypt-themed nation. And thanks to the DESPERs, some Egyptologists can now live their dream and rule Egypt as pharaohs. As such, this nation's characters will be more on the lighthearted side of things.

    The Neo-Babylonian Empire and the New Kingdom of Simien will be much darker though. Like with Ukraine and Russia, the middle east at the time of writing this, is currently embroiled in conflict. Not wanting to mess with it, I instead decided to just revive Babylonia and have them conquer everything with robots. And in case any wonder why Babylonia has robots, blame Live A Live. To be honest, writing the key characters from these nations is easily one of the most difficult things I've attempted. These characters need to be written as close to perfect as possible otherwise the story suffers. Though this arc won't focus too much on these nations much, though characters from these countries will be introduced in this arc.

    Finally, let's end things on a lighter note by talking about Mongolia. For them, I just wanted a Genghis Khan type character and after listening to way too much Mongolian folk metal, decided to go with it. There will be some interesting things to talk about in regards to Genghis Jad, but I'll save it for when he properly debuts in the story.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Dec 07, 2024

    Author's Commentary #281:

    Time to talk about Chapter 281: The conclusion of the Spain vs Denmark match.
    There's a lot to talk about on this one. First off is the match itself. I originally planned for the game to be between Leyla and Sophia and end in a draw, but I didn't like how the game was turning out so I scrapped it and just had Sophia beat Leyla off-screen. Though Leyla losing, her game and Denmark winning the match was one of my original ideas.

    It was either Leyla drew Sophia and the match ended in a 2-2 tie, or Leyla lost, but Denmark won the match. I went with the latter, mainly so I could highlight the importance of the team aspect. The loss is also all the more stinging for Sophia as she won her game yet her team lost. The Esperanza vs Jane match was also short which was a plus as I didn't want the round to drag on for too much longer. It also features a Saragossa opening which is Jane's go-to opening when playing as White. I've been meaning to feature a game with it and finally got the chance to do so.

    And now, let's talk about the character that spooked Iori. Oh boy, this character is easily shaping up to be one of the most difficult characters to write. And funnily enough, this character led me to create ANOTHER character that will be just as difficult, if not more difficult to write. The latter character has not appeared in the story, but I will reveal that their name has been mentioned, and they will likely appear in this arc. I'll go more in depth on these characters once they're properly introduced in the story.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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