Jun 09, 2017
To:Jio Kurenai
I'm glad that you feel that way. Trust me, I love the feeling of receiving a notification when a comment arrives in my story, too.
In a way, I also start imitating the writers' styles and, for better or worse, try to implement them into my writing. I hate to say this, but I don't think my current writing style is favorable. There were times when my creative juices fly off, but sometimes, I get stuck in a rut and just write really simple sentences. It's frustrating sometimes, and I have to read a novel with good writing (such as yours) to get my fingers writing beautiful prose.
Obviously, you can't write beautiful stuff like this on the first draft, but I forget sometimes that I'm supposed to write an image, not a sentence. And you, my friend, write beautiful imagery.