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Oct 03, 2025
I love this story. I love how you give little hints to the past and the future. You have introduced many characters in the beginning. You mentioned Li being the little sister. Is Laya the same person?
Thanks for clearing that up. I thought as much though and knew you would make it obvious later.
I like how you make me feel like I am there. like she is talking to me while going through her life.
I love that you didn’t make her choose at the end. It leaves it up to me to imagine her choice. Thank you for sharing your story.
Those last paragraphs were full of emotion.
😭This was a nice chapter. I can only imagine what Ina is going through.
This was a good chapter to recap everything that happened before.
It is great that she feels like a daughter at the end.
I think it is great that she feels that love from her parents
”Maybe I was, but not anymore.” This line sums up her feelings. You did a good job at pulling her state of mind together in this chapter.
I never did like Celphi.
Oct 02, 2025
Mai has decided to enter the monthly challenge. I love how you opened this. We meet the character in a very personal way. I look forward to reading ther rest.
Yes. this does seem to be the kind of place people go to be forgotten.
I hope they have enough time before the storm hits.
😭😭Thank you.