Sep 09, 2021
To:Bubbles
I think we can agree the fitting chapter name. Perhaps it was a subconscious reflection about how I felt about not only Celeste's story, but the process of writing this.
Yes, there was much to be desired. Elements of mystery are still things I'm trying to grasp. The Guardian of Hope didn't have any elements of that, however, I appreciate the feedback regsarding it! How you've described much of the story has been accurate. The mid-point was something I'd hope to mitigate in terms of quality, but as I long suspected, I fumbled it. The original vision involved a much longer narrative, which could've aided those chapterd for better or worse. Nothing was without consequence. And Boss Rush is accurate since, especially those last chapters were written in sequence. Could I have added more to provide something more compelling? Yes, now that I think of it, I could... And depending on where this story goes in the contest, I'd love to expand on it.
I'm glad there was much you enjoyed, though! The characters I tried my hardest to make stand out without trying; As natural as possible so to speak. Again, wherever this story goes I wouldn't mind expanding these aspects too. And for its themes, I wanted to put something that offered something to gnaw on as imperfect as it is. I really hope it was able to satisfy that! Its up to you to decide what it all means.
I appreciate the time taken to read and the feedback you provided!
From one writer to another, thanks! :3
