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Ana Fowl

Hello! I used to be on Honeyfeed way back then but had to retire due to some personal stuff. Now I'm back and I hope to enjoy all these brand new changes and new additions the page has to add.

You can find me at RoyalRoad as well!

registered at: Jul 27, 2020

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Aug 03, 2021

Hey-o! I'm here, causa!

I'm truly intrigued by this unorthodox and unconventional prologue. It breaks the mould so props to you! The dynamic between his inner voice, or the narrator, and the MC is really good. Even in such a short prologue, you managed to give this narrator a very personal voice, kinda like a friend. While the MC is more on the meek or even annoyed by this other personality of his, if we see it that way.

(UNFINISHED) My Thinking Story

Chapter:0

Aug 03, 2021

To:dmznot

Thank you so much!

The Sky Where Seasons Flutter Down

Chapter:1

Aug 03, 2021

To:hoqnuhamul

Thanks for your comment!

Ideasthesia

Chapter:0

Aug 03, 2021

To:KasumiMaika

Thank you!

Ideasthesia

Chapter:0

Aug 03, 2021

To:Alyssa Aurinia

Thanks Liz for your in-depth reviews, I always appreciate them sweetie!

Ideasthesia

Chapter:0

Aug 02, 2021

This is definitely your style. The chemistry of those two is the gripping hook so far. At first, it was dialogue-heavy just to have that turned around into action!

By the Shores of Time

Chapter:3

Aug 02, 2021

Things seem to be getting more interesting, as well as having a bit more character depth alongside your atmospheric descriptions.

By the Shores of Time

Chapter:2

Aug 02, 2021

Hi, Erii. Been a long time, I'm glad I can read your entry.
I see you have changed your cover art as well so I wonder how the story changes from this point towards the future. As always you delivered a prompt that reminds me of your first story, especially after reading the name Gabriel. Is this some sort of revamp? Or a coincidence? I'll keep reading to find out!

By the Shores of Time

Chapter:1

Jul 23, 2021

Title drop! The beginning of this chapter was drawing, an excellent way to start, as if everything had been a dream just to become a nightmare, throwing her into this new reality and meeting Eujin. I really like Van's personality though, and their small banter was entertaining after the trauma she just went through!

A Whisper in Scarlet

Chapter:4

Jul 23, 2021

I'm in love with the imagery here, I felt I was Ven the whole time. You did a splendid job in this chapter!

A Whisper in Scarlet

Chapter:3

Jul 23, 2021

The monster descriptions were truly vivid, I'm at the edge of my seat! Poor Ven...

A Whisper in Scarlet

Chapter:2

Jul 23, 2021

Their banter was amusing, and didn't feel dull! This C-A-T god really goes... beyond beyondness. How is this a gift!? It sounds like they were really bored and just rolled with it, like "What would make a nice gift? Oh, I know, /cat-girls/." I truly do wonder if there is a way for Kat to fix this, and now that I think about it, if it wasn't Cat, we would've had a very old man cat-boi as a co-protagonist haha.

A Kat's (GOD AWFUL!!!) Blessing

Chapter:3

Jul 23, 2021

To:Mehgazone - Patricia

I'm not someone who laughs at puns but you, dear, broke that side of me just now with that golden reply.

A Kat's (GOD AWFUL!!!) Blessing

Chapter:0

Jul 23, 2021

That was such a nice gesture, giving them cake! The pacing is still good, we got to know more about Maria as well.

A Kat's (GOD AWFUL!!!) Blessing

Chapter:2

Jul 23, 2021

To:mugmoth

It did pay off, go take a well-deserved break and a pat on the back!

The Hero Who Returned Remains Traumatized in the Modern World

Chapter:5

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