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Hello! I used to be on Honeyfeed way back then but had to retire due to some personal stuff. Now I'm back and I hope to enjoy all these brand new changes and new additions the page has to add.
You can find me at RoyalRoad as well!
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Jul 23, 2021
That was such a nice gesture, giving them cake! The pacing is still good, we got to know more about Maria as well.
To:mugmoth
It did pay off, go take a well-deserved break and a pat on the back!
I'm really digging your writing style, it's engaging, it's full of personality, it's vivid, the characters are all likeable and established right from the get-go. The pacing is great, and I wonder how everything will link together.
This prologue was... not what I expected, wow. And I mean that in a good way. For a slice of life prompt, it starts very seriously, even your writing is immersive and it makes me fear for the old man's situation. The atmosphere was gripping and then... /fart/. I'm still laughing, haha.
Oh wow, this chapter just blew all the others out the window. The execution was superb and the way you played with his PTSD memories conflicting with real-life was brilliant! At a certain point, we lose track if he still is remembering or imagining things. At some point, this was going to happen, and it wasn't going to end good. And here we are, again at the hospital... poor Jiro.
Zeya has a good head on her shoulders. I'm still wondering though, that negative karma count will be nerve-wracking for her in the following chapters.
Great writing as always, I was still having doubts when Zeya was capable of such powers but when those things happen, I trust the author to have an explanation for it. The kendo foreshadowing was good in that regard, however, I'm looking forward to knowing what's in store after being capable of such powers in a dire situation.
Well, these last few chapters were a trip. Sorry for being unable to read on time and decided to binge them.
Short, funny and compact. Kinoshita truly is the epitome of eccentricity, if that is even a word.
I'm glad that the issue from the last chapter was resolved, and with such a happy ending! Now that Hikari will be side by side with everyone, I'm eager to know how their relationships will develop even more! I'm glad we got some insight into the nekomimi bois as well with that school book.
This keeps on getting good. I felt this chapter longer than the rest, which was great! The interactions get better and what a fancy dorm!
Jul 21, 2021
Since you are writing for the contest, please specify your chosen prompt and theme in the Author's Note section. If not, it will face disqualification
Hello, since you are writing for the contest, your Prompt must be from the list as well as the obligatory theme of it, as per the rules state. Your story may face disqualification.
Hello, your story does not has the prompt nor theme written in the author's note and because of that it can face disqualification. Please add them, as well as a summary for your story. Thank you.
