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Hello! I used to be on Honeyfeed way back then but had to retire due to some personal stuff. Now I'm back and I hope to enjoy all these brand new changes and new additions the page has to add.
You can find me at RoyalRoad as well!
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Aug 23, 2021
Hello, you have not stated your prompt nor the themes you'll use from it on the Author's Note, please do so or your story might face disqualification. Thank you.
The relationship between the twins breaks my heart, see them like this now due to what happened...
I agree with the previous comment, your prose is very good. I'm not a huge fan of Martial Arts stories but let's see how it goes down the road.
This start really went off with a huge bang, I wonder how things will develop.
This was a shorter chapter but so far I really love the investigation and research you've done!
Eris characterization and her relationship with David was amazing! I'm really digging this twist you've done with the concept and the way you plan on executing it!
This was very well written, amazing work. For a first chapter, it had great characterization and plot, as well as a lingering air of mystery.
You navie Celestia, Fae said his arm wouldn't be functional anymore. Overall, I believe the pacing is good and the way the family interacts is great!
The characterization is really good so far, especially for Celestia. Her change from the prologue to now shows so much in just a little span of time!
This prologue shows how a perfect family, to some extent, can easily break apart due to a single incident. I am looking forward to seeing how this prologue clicks with the summary!
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Aug 22, 2021
So this was really really good, you managed to reel me in in the first three chapters, well done lad! The fighting scene was incredible, as well as the underlying themes such as Kahn and Seyun's importance for Lev, and Astri's full name's meaning and lore, I do wonder if they are the same for a reason? Well done!
For a second there I really thought Lev was going to really die and we'd get a character switcheroo somewhere, glad to know I was fooled. I'm really digging this concept of Sehyun and Lev's friendship with some underlying tones in-between, as well as his new companionship with Astri, as well as your in-universe lore of what Crown's are and mean, as well as Metahumans.
Here I am and I must say your first chapter blew it off the park, seriously. I felt like watching a movie and at the same time a fulfilling very first episode of an anime that leaves you wanting for more. I'm truly invested! Poor Lev.
Aug 05, 2021
I am just here like, 100% sure this is Suzukuma's yandere awakening.
