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Ana Fowl

Hello! I used to be on Honeyfeed way back then but had to retire due to some personal stuff. Now I'm back and I hope to enjoy all these brand new changes and new additions the page has to add.

You can find me at RoyalRoad as well!

registered at: Jul 27, 2020

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Jul 19, 2021

Since you are writing for the contest, please specify your chosen prompt and theme in the Author's Note section. If not, it will face disqualification

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Chapter:1

Jul 19, 2021

Since you are writing for the contest, please specify your chosen prompt and theme in the Author's Note section, as well as writting a proper summary for your novel and title. If not, it will face disqualification.

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Chapter:1

Jul 19, 2021

Oh, nice cliffhanger. The Last Moon Festival lore was quite interesting as well, and Ven is a likeable protagonist so far. It's gripping, that's for sure, and your writing style is great!

A Whisper in Scarlet

Chapter:1

Jul 19, 2021

A direct prologue, where we readers know nothing about what is going on and kind of follow what the characters are saying, in a way. So far, I like this air of mystery, since we don't know if they are good, bad, neutral, special, ordinary...!

A Whisper in Scarlet

Chapter:0

Jul 19, 2021

As espected this hasyour trademark right in that classroom scene, won't elaborate on it (lol). Regardless, this was pretty good. We get to know every single character and how they relate to Emyria and Aystaria. We see relationships as well and how the world they live in came to be.

Six

Chapter:2

Jul 19, 2021

So far so good. I feel like Aystaria has so much to say and experience but has closed that side of her memories for her own good. Lys was cute and I feel tension between Reina and Aystaria when they talk, the romantic kind. The world-building is quite nice, and I want to know more about Emyria's family. One little thing tho, Maybe you should put the character's thoughts in italics? Sometimes I get confused if it's part of the narration or their thoughts, just me being dumb.

Six

Chapter:1

Jul 19, 2021

Right into the action, we go, and there is a contender for Snazzy, the battle shall be legendary! Ahem, anyway, good job Wolfy. I liked your intro, very action-packed and, even if I was unable to feel something towards Aystaria at first, in the end, I was able to feel her being terrified. Did this tentacle monster get inside of her? Interesting cliffhanger.

Six

Chapter:0

Jul 19, 2021

Jiro needs a hug.

The Hero Who Returned Remains Traumatized in the Modern World

Chapter:4

Jul 19, 2021

This back story is good, the foreshadowing was well executed as well!

REWIND: How To Commit Genocide in 48 Hours

Chapter:8

Jul 19, 2021

I quite liked the fast pace of this chapter. A back story of Asano sounds nice.

REWIND: How To Commit Genocide in 48 Hours

Chapter:7

Jul 19, 2021

Well Yuuki, good luck out there.

REWIND: How To Commit Genocide in 48 Hours

Chapter:6

Jul 19, 2021

Alright, this chapter was a bit longer than all the previous ones, however, what made up the length was the interactions between Haru and Tachibana. It's clear he is head over heels for her with some sanity in him. The plot twist was expected but I wonder how he will take it since he is trapped in a weird love triangle. Oh, the Donut Shop scene was really nice too! Made me hungry.

I Fell in Love, Now What?

Chapter:3

Jul 19, 2021

I wonder what made her get dizzy, and adding the language of flowers was a nice touch Rinrin!

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:7

Jul 19, 2021

Adding suspense was a nice little touch, and we get to know a spirit. I imagined Mashiro holding one of those hoes they use in some rituals in Japan! I wonder how Ai fits in all of this.

Cat's Hour [UNDER REVISIONS]

Chapter:6

Jul 14, 2021

Well, well, Yuuki is here. I wonder what happened to him for him to appear in this place.

REWIND: How To Commit Genocide in 48 Hours

Chapter:5

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