Mar 03, 2021
Seeing Isekai + Yuri in the tags made me go wide eyes emoji, since it's a very underrated genre that is slowly becoming more popular. Oh and the art as well, who is your artist? I didn't see them get credited so I kept wondering.
I did notice... quite a lot of grammatical errors here and there. And it was a bit confusing having a huge ellipsis. Perhaps you could try to separate it with just a single dot and centring it. Another thing, I think specifying what italics, bold, and "normal" do break the narration ;;
