Sep 10, 2020
Okay, so Futaba either has another "voice" like Ryouta or there is something much more supernatural going on in here given her "wish" and the title of the novel. Anyway... I could tell from the start of the chapter that Shizu was in love with Ai, her gestures, her mannerisms, just by sitting with Futaba it could be felt and that's amazing.
The way you described her love, a heart made of glass, was beautiful in every sense. Very poetic as well. Oh and the first drop of summer's rain can be seen in an analytical point of view as Futaba's cry of feeling selfish while watching the sky. As if her tears had reached Ryouta and just then her message arrives.
It's nice to see you experimenting with another style and I like both, let's see how you keep up at it. I'm sure it'll be fantastic!