Sep 12, 2020
I was surprised with that murder mystery at the start, I feel that your story has tackled every single theme at this point and that is amazing, given it doesn't feel out of place. That whole investigating scene was brilliantly executed, as well as showing once again Gin's quick wits.
Going on a bit further into the story, what the principal said holds a lot of reason. We are often blindfolded, and it depends on us to see the world instead of letting ourselves be blind. It was very deep and emotional, serving as the closure this chapter needed in regards to the incident.
