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Hello! I used to be on Honeyfeed way back then but had to retire due to some personal stuff. Now I'm back and I hope to enjoy all these brand new changes and new additions the page has to add.
You can find me at RoyalRoad as well!
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Aug 27, 2020
Truly infuriates me when I find people like that online with that holier than thou air while talking. You did an excellent job portraying it here. And that online username as well 10/10.
This was an unexpected interlude. So I was right in the reflection/mirror world theory, nice! It's such a great concept to explore, and now I'm deeply wondering about these two new characters. Are they new, or are they from the other series? Gotta wait for that sweet update.
I'm loving it so far, I'm a sucker for Anti-Hero leads and Hiroshi is right up my ally. The apparition of the Deviant Killer really spiced things up here right at the end. The way you describe action scenes is amazing as well, showing talent and promise.
To:Rose’
Hi, and thank you!
For some people that might not be their cup of tea since I go way over the top with descriptions, yet that has become my "trademark" writing style of some sorts, haha. I-m glad they story is right up your alley. I appreciate your time for checking out the prologue of volume 1!
Aug 26, 2020
To:kazesenken
Amazing.
Ah yes, Irene to the rescue.
I believe the fighting scene was very well done, it's hard to actually work on them and this one seemed to have been poured with a lot of thought.
The bull rabbit hunting segment was pretty entertaining and Victor's part with Sarah was the best one. Verona could easily be a princess given all the wildlife followed her, haha.
This counted as a nice "interlude" of sorts, we finally meet Yue, her shared past with Kami-sama, and how all the trucks are concerned about this issue since well, if their targets keep on being sniped, their karma won't go up, unless, well, they have other priorities like Vera, haha.
Again, I repeat myself, I'm a sucker for your horror writing it does remember me of me playing Corpse Party and after some explanations you did her,e I am super sure this is a closed space in time since Fuyu mentioned that everything is happening at the same time, like some sort of mirror world between dimensions where she can see herself doing something different, but it is happening in real time. And once again we see the polaroids as well...
I was easily caught by your writing and I can say that the blurb did make justice to what I read. It seems you have planned the lore and worldbuilding with precise care since the very beginning, and that is encouraging. I wish you good luck and I'll be expecting the updates!
To:Deleted User
Thank you for reading, Mr Author.
I was worried the first part could be pretty extreme but I felt it was necessary to reflect Yui's state of mind in the present. In regards to Nobu, I can't say much. He is quite a strange and unusual guy, with a huge my-pace personality. However, not everything is what it seems.
I repeat, don't get your hopes super high!
Their chemistry is really important and I'm glad it got noticed since they are partners after all.
Glad that the wake-up call didn't feel out of place due to this chapter being forced to be divided into two!
In regards to your question, you'll see. However, the story doesn't focus on romance too much so don't get your hopes super high, haha. This chapter is actually pretty long, and I had to divide it into two parts due to HoneyFeed's character limit. Yet, I am glad it didn't feel that long at all!
Thank you!
Happy thoughts were a good alternative, since their meeting, albeit not being "happy" at all, in the future it seems that they both see it that way, meaning character development for both.
Yush, Yui and Yuiko met 5 months ago, in January. However, Yuiko prefers to be called by her first name automatically instead of being tied down by formalities. However, you might notice that eventually there is an actual deep reason for that. Hope you stay for that reveal!