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I like to read and write. I also like cats.
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Jun 14, 2022
Oh my gosh this is crazy!!😂 But in a good way! Looking forward to more:)
Oh crap things are getting intense. A PANTHER?! Wonder how he’s gonna get out of that alive😂 I also enjoyed the accidental torture. For some reason I feel like Peterson is going to serve as comedy relief for most of this story haha
To:Gulfstream
Nope! His name hasn’t been mentioned yet. It’s actually going to be revealed at the beginning of the next chapter:) Guess Pyro didn’t care enough to ask😅 But yes, plenty of red flags haha
Jun 11, 2022
“Like a bug on a windshield.”😂😂That had me cracking up. And of course the newly introduced pretty character has to see it. I’m looking forward to seeing where their dynamic will go… and if our protagonist broke his nose:0
To:Yati
Thanks for the feedback! I’m looking forward to where this anti-hero goes:) She seems to have a mind of her own when I write lol
Thank you so much for the awesome feedback! I’m trying to slowly flesh out the world chapter by chapter, and I really hope it keeps your interest:)
Jun 10, 2022
Thanks for the links! I think that's a really neat idea, especially since a lot of people enjoy listening to music while reading:)
This sounds like it's going to be such a whimsical and fun story! I love the name Princess Vanilla Bean and the quote, "Quite plump this creature hm?"😂
Jun 09, 2022
Ugh, pushy people are the worst ! Good first chapter btw!!
Jun 08, 2022
Wow this is an interesting concept! I really like the idea of “rips” in between time. Plus, I always like when authors add in real world events to their stories, it adds more depth and makes it seem like these things could actually happen:)
Oh yeah, Fordham is DEFINITELY good to go😂 Thanks for the insight. I’m definitely going for some old-school vibes, mixed in with more modern ideas. But we’ll see where it goes! :)
For a second I read that wrong and thought it said she literally took HALF the kid lmao. Interesting first chap!!
Jun 07, 2022
Wow this was a very interesting start! I really like how you switched back and forth between POV’s—it added tension to the buildup:)
Enjoying the world building so far!!
I would have rolled over and tried to fall back asleep xD
