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Taylor Victoria

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I like to read and write. I also like cats.

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Jul 25, 2022

To:Xiellion

That’s the worst part… there aren’t any

Pyro's Grand Demise

Chapter:9

Jul 25, 2022

To:Xiellion

Oh, the horror!

Pyro's Grand Demise

Chapter:8

Jul 25, 2022

To:Xiellion

There’s plenty of drama about this particular problem later on. Are cyborgs considered human? And if so, are their lives worth the same? Lots of drama😁

Pyro's Grand Demise

Chapter:7

Jul 25, 2022

To:Xiellion

Thanks for the valuable feedback! I try my best to maintain the appropriate amount of action without too many details. I’m glad you liked it!

Pyro's Grand Demise

Chapter:6

Jul 25, 2022

To:Xiellion

No, I appreciate you finding any typos! Especially since I typically write these chapters so quickly😅 Because I work, I’m forced to cut back on time, so mistakes occasionally slip through.

Pyro's Grand Demise

Chapter:5

Jul 25, 2022

To:Xiellion

I go into more detail later in the story, but the different types aren’t necessarily those colors. They do have to legally identify themselves by wearing colored wristbands, but most choose to change their eye color instead. Like wearing contacts instead of glasses🤷‍♀️ The “color” just identifies what risk level they are.

Pyro's Grand Demise

Chapter:4

Jul 25, 2022

To:ikkew

Lol Pyro likes to complain, as the readers will eventually find out. She can tune down her senses, but not entirely. Thanks for the feedback!

Pyro's Grand Demise

Chapter:2

Jul 25, 2022

To:Xiellion

Thanks for the added feedback! I typically don’t go into too many details with descriptions in my web novels… especially when they’re not fantasy… but I’ll consider giving more thought to it from now on!

Pyro's Grand Demise

Chapter:2

Jul 25, 2022

To:tanktrilby

Thanks! Yes, explosions are inevitable in this story…

Pyro's Grand Demise

Chapter:1

Jul 25, 2022

To:Xiellion

I considered writing a prologue, but I’m thinking I’ll add a bonus story at the end of the novel! I wanted to get right into the action when I began writing😄 Thanks for your input and I’m glad you enjoyed the chapter!! And I love using weird words so😅

Pyro's Grand Demise

Chapter:1

Jul 22, 2022

To:Gulfstream

I always enjoy reading your feedback and theories! It's safe to say there are a lot of selfish characters in this story, which I hope is easy to believe since this futuristic world is particularly cruel--especially to cyborgs! Thanks for making that connection😆

Pyro's Grand Demise

Chapter:13

Jul 20, 2022

Wow, this reminds me of Avengers when they realize they've done more damage to the city than the enemy😂 Poor Jim needs to be more aware of his surroundings, although I probably would have been more focused on the enemy as well! I think he deserved the recognition!

Challengers

Chapter:11

Jul 16, 2022

Wow, what an awesome action scene! I could really picture everything clearly—good descriptions! Aiko is still a badass, despite falling on her butt😂 I think her and Peterson make a good team!

Challengers

Chapter:10

Jul 16, 2022

To:ikkew

I’m glad you enjoyed the first chapter! The deadline really is coming up soon… not stressful at all😅 Best of luck to you! And yeah, Fordham is most likely not going to show up again in this story, but you never know!

Pyro's Grand Demise

Chapter:1

Jul 16, 2022

To:Gulfstream

You always make the best points! Pyro originally seemed like such an isolated person, but perhaps she’s evolving into someone more reliant on companionship…? I personally know how good a brownie can taste after not having sweets for days, not weeks, and I can tell you nothing is better😋 I hope you enjoy Part 2 of the story!

Pyro's Grand Demise

Chapter:12

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