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I like to read and write. I also like cats.
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Aug 22, 2021
Looking forward to more! A lot more hehe…
I love your writing, but I also wanted to mention how pretty the cover is!👌
Dang, I always hated being in the classroom when it was such a nice day outside... lol! I enjoyed your writing, so keep up the good work:)
Haha, very voluptuous bottles of hand sanitizer. This was a very enjoyable first chapter and I look forward to more!
This is the most dialogue-heavy chapter yet! Not to mention the longest... sorry, hehe. I hope this explained a few things and kept you interested in the story! Please continue reading to find out what happens next~ Thank you!
To:RexxDrink
Thanks for the feedback! I'll give it a read:)
To:cmoneyjr
You could say this is my rendition of a pixie from a writer's point of view! I'm sure other people have different understandings and POV's, but this way suited my story best! I'll give it a look:)
Aug 18, 2021
To:Kikai kara Kami
I really enjoy finding out character's names have hidden meanings to them, so I didn't find your explanation boring at all! It shows you really thought hard about the character's personality and what name would suit them best:)
The writing is legit, but the sheer amount of the word "sus" makes me question humanity👍
Why are we still here? Just to suffer?
You certainly have a good hook of an intro! That last sentence is totally foreboding but intriguing all the same😆
I enjoy how it reads like a script--it's refreshing!
Any protagonist who hates math is a protagonist I can relate to👍
Aug 15, 2021
I really enjoyed your descriptions and dialogue, so it created an enjoyable first chapter! Keep it up:)
That... was a sad intro... but it worked and kept me reading:*(
