Aug 02, 2022

To:Gulfstream

Pyro is stuck between a rock and a hard place right now, but hopefully she makes the right decision😅 I’m glad the tone came off as frigid, because I was going for a detached vibe from the CEO. Despite talking about lives being at stake, she doesn’t particularly seem to care hehe. Thanks for your continued feedback!!

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Aug 02, 2022

The constant barrage of profanity really tickles my funny bone

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Aug 02, 2022

Enjoyed the first chapter a lot! Wondering where the heck this will go😆

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Aug 02, 2022

To:Xiellion

Pyro is definitely her own person😆 I hope you're enjoying her antics, because I have fun writing it! And we will be seeing more of the CEO soon, so I'm looking forward to experimenting with their chemistry:) I hope you enjoy their future interactions! Even if they don't get along haha.

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Aug 02, 2022

To:Xiellion

Thanks! I sometimes skip chapters on accident too😩 It takes a moment for me to figure out why nothing makes sense lol

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Aug 01, 2022

Drugs, psychological conditioning, and sometimes torture? I’m starting to feel bad for these guys😓 Good to know they’re not all bad though! It gives the story more depth that the Dreadnought cyborgs aren’t all a big, evil enemy. I’m also interested to know more about this Nakamura lady… she seems suspicious.

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Aug 01, 2022

To:Gulfstream

Yay! I’m glad you found this chapter interesting! Even cyborgs are prejudiced despite everything going on, so you can see why Pyro is sick of it all😂
I hope you enjoy the next chapter! There will be some developments👀

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Jul 29, 2022

To:MD Bubba

Thanks a lot! I appreciate your feedback:)

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Jul 27, 2022

Glad to finally hear some backstory about Jim/Peterson! I think you waited just long enough to build anticipation😆 The detailing about Rio’s chair and being slightly “unstable” was interesting as well! Your world building is coming along very nicely:)

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Jul 26, 2022

To:Gulfstream

Pyro is definitely pretty miserable right now, but certainly things can't get any worse from here!😅 This chapter was probably her lowest point, but I'm planning on things getting slightly better from here on out... probably. I don't want to spoil anything hehe.
I'm glad I avoided an infodump!! I hate those😒

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Jul 26, 2022

To:IceDonut

She wasn’t apprehended until after she left the broom closet, so it’s safe to say Kaden hasn’t been caught! I will try and clarify this later on, so thanks for the input!

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Jul 25, 2022

I think this is my favorite chapter so far! Nothing too crazy is happening, but there is plenty of character development, which is so so important... And something which is often forgotten unfortunately! I loved the scene with Peterson getting terrified of the cleaning spider. Especially when Kenan starting laughing at himXD I want one of those for myself. And this was some interesting info about Rio too--makes me want to know more about her past!

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Jul 25, 2022

Hey, guys! I updated a day early because I will most likely be busy tomorrow, so I wanted to make sure the chapter was posted! Thanks for your continued support:)

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Jul 25, 2022

To:Xiellion

Oh God no. I’m too squeamish for that. Plus that’d really suck for her🤣

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Jul 25, 2022

To:Xiellion

I would assume so! Considering she doesn’t get all the necessary organs replaced. I haven’t actually thought that far yet bc it didn’t have to do with the storyline😂

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