Dec 30, 2017
I must admit ... never have I read a more suspenseful passage on trying to fall asleep! XD The struggle within Lucas was well-described, but the shoulder devils and angel made it downright hilarious. Although it was a long scene, it didn't feel drawn out and was entertaining the entire time.
And then you flipped the entire situation onto its hindquarters when Rio woke up. I was surprised, but thoroughly pleased, when instead of continuing in a comedic direction, it took a rather serious and intense turn. Lucas getting into her head and pushing her to break ... man, I'd give that "Like" button a second smack under the mistletoe if I could. :P The whole chapter was gripping throughout, although for different reasons at the end!
Also, I may have said this before, but I've dealt with crappy machines when writing, and I know it sucks. I'm glad that it hasn't prevented you from dishing out more chapters of this great story, and I always look forward to reading more! Keep 'em coming, I'm counting on it! XD
By the way, after reading this, I now know that I made the right choice when choosing the scent of cinnamon for Marilyn in "ANNO DOMINI". And this is definitely a different scenario than what I had planned...