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Hi there,
This is the former home of my fiction - Unfortunately from drama, to a lack of innovation - To bugs that made the site unusable to me - My books are no longer being hosted here on here.

This in mind I'm leaving this note here to let people with an interest know you can find all my works in updated versions over on RoyalRoad & ScribbleHub - With plans for other releases yet to come.

For more info you can check out the final chapters of either 'UnderCurrent' or 'The Girl He Used to Know' - Which both depict my odd journey with this website😅.
HoneyFeed had its merits, it got me some feedback & I made some good friends here - But it is in effect the training wheels of web-noveling sites - If you are even slightly serious about your art or simply want a website that will teach you proper formatting & has an actual userbase - Then do yourself a favour, take off the training wheels & seek out the website that is right for you😊.

Best Regards,
-Momentie

registered at: Oct 14, 2021

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Sep 19, 2022

I appreciate these little recaps - Nice and succinct and they'll be great reminder bullpoints if I ever get round to writing a proper resh review😄😉.

I've often wondered if I should a more straightforward recap for undercurrent - The one it has, plus the one coming in a couple of weeks are maybe too wordy for the purpose at hand😂 - I like how yours just gets straight to the point with no fluff😁

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:168

Sep 18, 2022

Whoop, I was one of the first in and now I'm last out, don't worry I'll get the lights on my way😅 - Again sorry for the delay.

Unfortunately, the backlog countinues - I think at other times of the year I might have more to say here, it feels like there's a lot of shards I could potentially go into detail on - From the possibility of future books centred on love triangles or using Madonna in a counter-culture war - To maybe digging into how you chose to structure things and keep everything so surprising at every turn.

But again, I gotta move on to the next one - And as all reviewers know: 'Saying nice things is way harder than just complaining'😂
And boy is there little to complain on!!
Sure with reflection I think there are some small things I might have grips with but really it'd be efforted nitpicking.

The plot is simple to get into but filled with nuace and genuine passion - The characters are fun and spunky, if admittedly there are only really 3 of them, but with plenty ground work for the side cast to blossom in the future.

The plot is awesome - Always engaging with a great balance between showing us why our couple care for one another - Aswell as develing into the deeper subject matters.
It's also one of those magic books that you happily binge read or read on a weekly basis and enjoy either way - No small feat in itself😄.

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Put bluntly this was a great read - It feels like a starting point, while also being a self-contained story - A perfect design for a contest challange.

I think I've said this to just two other people in other prompt zones - But this is a contender for top 5 of all the novels I read for the comp and easily a top 3 in the romcom category.

Congrats on finishing and best of luck man!😄😊💪👍.

My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!

Chapter:25

Sep 18, 2022

I got ask, did ya name it 'dead man's switch' by accident or on purpose? 😂

I used to work in the water industry and it's actually a term we use - It refers to buttons an operator has to keep pressed in order for a machine to work, so say you need a special chemical to clean the water but only in a very small dose - You use a dead man's switch' or handle to prevent anyone accidentally leaving the machine on and killing an entire populus😅.

If on purpose that's a cool subtextual link and if accidental, it cools coincidence 😉😂👍.

My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!

Chapter:24

Sep 18, 2022

Dang that tracker stuff was very well played man - Introduced from the start with bantery reminders along the way - Felt like a really natural solution😄💪.

And dang, that cliffhanger tho!

My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!

Chapter:23

Sep 18, 2022

Dang didn't see that coming - poor girl

My Government-Issued Girlfriend Can't Be This Cute!

Chapter:22

Sep 14, 2022

First person? I like it😄.

Sorry took me so long to get through but glad I did - Certainly interested in the main book, tho my list is so long that it could be a long while - For now I'm happy with the temporary ending😄.

Best of luck in the competition, and congrats on finishing😊👍

Unconsciously [SHORT]

Chapter:18

Sep 14, 2022

Nawww a nice happy ending, that makes you look foward to future volumes - I didn't release how close I was to the end, sorry for the delay😅 - But glad I finished, it was fun and wholesome throughout 😊👍

Unconsciously [SHORT]

Chapter:17

Sep 13, 2022

What can I say, I really enjoyed this novel - Sure I 100% agree with Tomo and yourself that it's... 'Unconventional' in terms of prose - But, I think that made me love it more😂😄.

It's so different to everything else - Doing a horror mystery novel for the prompt was pretty unique by itself but having these Bombatsic memorable characters, describing everything through the dialogue and so on - Ya it's not what we might call 'proper' , but it was fun and unique compared to everything else!

I also like the simple, earnest message underneath of standing up for yourself and trying to live happyily😊.

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Congrats on finishing, it was alot of words too so really good achievement and best of luck going foward - I'll keep an eye out for part 2!!😄😄.

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:20

Sep 13, 2022

Poor Butgami had terrible parents😂😂

Also what a great solid sequel hook😍

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:19

Sep 13, 2022

The goddess is such a troll!😂😄

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:18

Sep 11, 2022

Nice ending hook and nice ending in general😊.

I'm really glad to see one of your texts come to an end - I've read some of your other stuff but always lacked that price of the puzzle of how you end a story - I think you do it well, it feels satisfying has good payoffs and room for more😄.

I appreciate you had to rush in places but I think that made the book even more impressive, it's concise in a good way where you can kinda skip the more generic romcom elements, while still getting the feel good effect.

Grammer and prose is good as usual from you - All round this is a fun, well made read.

Congrats on finishing and best of luck in the comp!😊😄.

Fantasy, Love, & Discord!! (FLD)

Chapter:21

Sep 11, 2022

(reading on Kindle, sorry for comment/emoji spam😅) - Naw that was a cute way to play it out - Espically Ze'saki wanting to watch it with him😊

Fantasy, Love, & Discord!! (FLD)

Chapter:19

Sep 10, 2022

That's one wacky sounding shopping mall😂.

Also Good lad Ein, that crisps thing was a nice touch😄👍.

Fantasy, Love, & Discord!! (FLD)

Chapter:17

Sep 10, 2022

To:Gen/Esis

So while I haven't finished yet, this chapter certainly didn't feel like a dip in quality.

Personally, I find things that get cut short, often end up being better in some ways - For example in a version of this book you might of had totoro and koroko have a whole chapter to establish their joint front - Honestly I think that would be boring, I've seen it a dozen times before - But simply having it here as a quick paragraph allows you to get the wholesomeness of it, without making the audience waste a chapter.

^^That's a hypothetical obviouly, I've no idea what you did or don't have to cut - But my point being that it may work out well in some ways as it'll force you to be concise and only include what you truely want the most - Honestly it makes me excited to read these last few chapters! 😄

Oh and congrats on finishing btw, sorry for the late read - Lots of chapters this last week😂😂

Fantasy, Love, & Discord!! (FLD)

Chapter:16

Sep 08, 2022

Not sure why ya put such large gaps between each sentence but this seems really Interesting!😄....... But I already have such a backlog of book😭😭..... But the cover art looks like fun!😄 - Guess another entry is going on the to do list😂, I shall return💪.... Some day....😅😅

So What If I'm a Girl

Chapter:1