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This is the former home of some of my novels, you can find them these days over on RoyalRoad!

registered at: Oct 14, 2021

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Dec 27, 2021

I know this is something your writing blind but the names of the churches feel a little on the nose, though if tounge-in-check is your aim, then no worries.

Looking forward to the next one👍👍.

Through the Christmas Glass

Chapter:3

Dec 27, 2021

To:Deleted User

Heck ya😂

Through the Christmas Glass

Chapter:3

Dec 26, 2021

To:ACHIEVE

Oh man, you reminded me how overdue it is that I play something from the neir franchise😂😂.

And yup, it's a hard road, I write tragic characters alot and getting attached is a terrible feeling to grapple with😂😂😅😅.

No worries 😊👍, I'm looking forward to more!

Dance of Thorns

Chapter:9

Dec 26, 2021

Something I found out recently that migth be of interest to you: HoneyFeed blocks copy paste if your on a phone but if you put your links in a comment they work just fine, that's what I've been doing anyway😊👍.

The Isekai Police: Promise of a Wonderful Fantasy was a Lie

Chapter:39

Dec 26, 2021

Wow this is interesting.
Our boy is the most well spoken(or written atleast) 14 year old I've seen😅😅.

Nice characterisation and group dynamic plus natural introduction of world-building details.
Good job all round😊👍.

The Mildpowered Virgins of Novylion High

Chapter:1

Dec 26, 2021

To:WittyAcorn

Oh I see no worries, definitely fun😊👍.

Witticisms

Chapter:1

Dec 26, 2021

To:Cas_Cade

I'm not forcing myself at all bud😊, I just keep starting too many webnovels😂😂.

Same to you, no need to read mine, I'm interested in yours either way round but if you do thanks you very much!😊😊

CirCular

Chapter:1

Dec 26, 2021

Wow, I know we talked about it before but damn these are long😂😂.

I'm genuinely interested in your ideas and writing but being honest I'm currently reading 3 other webnovels with long chapter lengths😅, so for now allow me to give you a few chapter likes and I'll get back to this once I finish one of those other books.

I look foward to coming back to this in the near future bud😊👍.

CirCular

Chapter:1

Dec 26, 2021

To:ACHIEVE

Oh and also I quite like the chapter lengths, you can see from books like mine that long chapters aren't actually ideal for mobile readers - So what you have works well for me reading on mobile atleast😎👍.

Dance of Thorns

Chapter:9

Dec 26, 2021

To:ACHIEVE

Merry Christmas!
It's good to know you have an ending planed, I start all my stories with an ending and then have to discipline myself not to change it as I grow more attached to the characters😂😂.

Dance of Thorns

Chapter:9

Dec 26, 2021

Poor Rheba😅.

My atrologys a little weak (I know that sounds wierd coming from someone writing a sci-fi book😂😂) but less stars would mean a younger planet then earth rigth?
.... Oh wait never mind what Mem just said about varying patterns changes everything!
I didn't know questions of whether where in the same universe were gonna come up but I love that sorta thing😁😁.

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:55

Dec 26, 2021

Hmm, I think your gonna struggle to keep this with-in the short story bracket of the Christmas challenge 😂😅.
Seems pretty intriguing 😊👍.

Through the Christmas Glass

Chapter:2

Dec 26, 2021

To:N. D. Skordilis

No worries bud, glad to help😊👍.

And yea I think that's for the best, again you can use English honourifics and simplified explaination to keep the meaning of the words, while streamlining.

I'm sure it'll be even better after editing phase 4😊😊👍👍.

The Time Capsule - Part 1

Chapter:1

Dec 26, 2021

Oh wow.

Can 2 year olds walk and talk enough be going to parks by themselves lol.
I know neither of my two siblings were capable of that at that age😂😂.

More seriously this is certainly interesting, I'm curious to see more of where it goes😊👍.

Witticisms

Chapter:1

Dec 25, 2021

Ho-ho, great to see you back writing😁😁 and what a way to come back.
Intriguing opening, with quick effective characters and a sympathetic but possibly murderous protag.

Great length (opening) chapter with a solid flow/& pace to boot!

Great job bud, Merry Christmas 😁😁🎄🎄😊😊👍👍.

A Christmas Sale

Chapter:1

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