Dec 19, 2021
A few things of note that I'll probably forget before I even finish tying this😅.
The farms are auesome, I love the use of the sci-fi/fantasy aesthetic to make stacked farms.
Them being abandoned for whole years on the other hand isn't actually that strange (I mean the farmers all moving away perhaps), most fields need down-time as it were, Nut I guess the point was more how long they're left unattended. (I come from a country built on farming, ignore my ramblings).
Your choice last chapter to have the snoring, lead to sleeping, lead to Rheibie and Odell getting there first proper chat together was a nice touch and I like their snarky budding rivalry of sorts😄😁.
I also love the idea of 6 great heros on a completely mundane car journey😂, like obviously more stuffs going to happen but a part of me just wants to watch an incredibly dull 7 day drive😄😂. In my own writing I always find it fun putting the characters in 'normal' circumstances - I plan on having them spend a sizable chunk of the fourth arc just drinking and maybe exploring a city if they have time between hitting the various bars😂😅.
Like the Neimidus circle, do you plan to expand on their personalities as extensions of the main cast?
Sort of like how a Digimon or Pokémon is an extension of their trainer/partner in those anime? Sounds like fun😊👍.
And interesting to see Gywn showing some motive.
He's understandable been talkin by the flow thus far, plus it's clearly in his nature to be interested by cultures and landscapes but it's great to see the seeds of an arc being planted - I presume it'll be about seeing him grow to fill the role of hero/leader? Sounds great😊👍.
