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Momentie

Hi there,
This is the former home of my fiction - Unfortunately from drama, to a lack of innovation - To bugs that made the site unusable to me - My books are no longer being hosted here on here.

This in mind I'm leaving this note here to let people with an interest know you can find all my works in updated versions over on RoyalRoad & ScribbleHub - With plans for other releases yet to come.

For more info you can check out the final chapters of either 'UnderCurrent' or 'The Girl He Used to Know' - Which both depict my odd journey with this website😅.
HoneyFeed had its merits, it got me some feedback & I made some good friends here - But it is in effect the training wheels of web-noveling sites - If you are even slightly serious about your art or simply want a website that will teach you proper formatting & has an actual userbase - Then do yourself a favour, take off the training wheels & seek out the website that is right for you😊.

Best Regards,
-Momentie

registered at: Oct 14, 2021

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Jan 23, 2022

To:Gulfstream

Heck ya it is!!

Mind you don't put too much faith in Wikipedia, it states the valentine as one of the only good British tanks of the war - That is straigth up bullshit, British tanks objectively were better then the Americans, the Italians, the Japanese and argueably better then the Russians and French tanks too boot!!

Lol I used to be a tank nerd when I was a kid, ignore my rambling, I'm glad you enjoyed chapter😊😊😂😅.

The Girl He Used To Know - Original HoneyFeed Version

Chapter:6

Jan 23, 2022

Damn you nightmares!!

Not my gladiator Bois😭😭😭😭

Avalon

Chapter:15

Jan 23, 2022

Ohhhhh I like the two warriors figthing at the end, the tension build up to their final hit is great!

Avalon

Chapter:14

Jan 23, 2022

To:Ochroleucous

Sound like battle is on the horizon and that Fiona will finally have to get her shit together😅 (loving her arc so far😊)

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Also I really like your drawing they have a lot of character. I wish HoneyFeed had a proper resources page but I agree imagur is the best alternative we authors have right now😂😂.

Looking forward to the big battle😁😁.

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:70

Jan 23, 2022

To:ACHIEVE

Oh awesome that sounds perfect 😁😄.

And ya I totally agree they don't need much detail, just a hair colour or something simply😊👍.

Dance of Thorns

Chapter:24

Jan 22, 2022

K haven't quite finished (like 7/8th through and it feels finished😅) but need to get my thougths down lol.

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This chapter is a friggin roller coaster my man.

First we got badass Annebelle spotting her evil girlfriend for what she is but then all of a sudden were watching feckin alien! Annabelle is 100% dead becuase surviving a throat injury for more then like a minute or two is near impossible - There are guards getting slashed right and left and the siren is some Eldrich cross between a minator and a harpy - It's metal as fuck!!

But then the excitement drops as everyone just yeets it out of there😅, like all tension immediately dissapated....But then we go back to Annebelle in a pool of her own blood but she gets up, fires some ice-cold one liners and beats the shit out of the evil harpy - "Hell ya, Go the home girl! Your sacrifice is Nobel! And we will never forget yo--..... What do you mean she teleports away at the last moment?...... What do you mean before the chapter even finishes we have the sarge tell us no one in the entire camp died?........"

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Ya Annabelle needed to die - Don't get me wrong, especially after this chapter I love the girl, she be giving Netiera a run for the best girl position - But this suddenly felt so pointless.
The description of the laser was also feckin awesome, proper metal but it felt unearned simply because Annabelle(And to a lesser extent everyone else) escaped.

Heck for all this chapter builds up the strength and threat level of the sirens/Harpy's, having it clear that they're too incompetent to kill Annabelle with a pointblank stab throught the neck - sort of undermine the rest.

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So ya interesting chapter.
It is both the best and most badass-exciting one I've read so far but also the most dissapointing by far😶😶.

The Isekai Police: Promise of a Wonderful Fantasy was a Lie

Chapter:46

Jan 22, 2022

Interesting chapter.

I mentioned it before but I'd definitely consider changing Hina to be a couple gens older - Her and 67's bond is great, espically their more open side but it would hit harder if we knew the two have been all each others got left for like century's (?) - You could really add to 67's short lived desperation/fear of Hina injuring herself😊😊👍👍.

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Also the two girls at the start, I'd give them some simply traits, just a haircolour or even have them be younger versions of someone in the team.
It's a small thing/detail but they are sort of disembodied 'girl' voices in this chapter😅.

Good stuff😊👍.

Dance of Thorns

Chapter:24

Jan 22, 2022

To:Deleted User

Thanks for having a look!😄😃 (Sorry for the late reply, missed your comment somehow😂).

Sounds like the cat wants food😉, I know thats the only reason my domestic cat ever talks to me🤣.

The Girl He Used To Know - Original HoneyFeed Version

Chapter:1

Jan 22, 2022

To:Mr. Smoothy

Thanks!😃 - I hope you enjoy😊.

The Girl He Used To Know - Original HoneyFeed Version

Chapter:1

Jan 22, 2022

Hehe you know I love a good report, especially one that foreshadows something like a power-up😁. FIona's gonna be teleporting enemies into molten lava in the mines or something before long😂😅.

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:69

Jan 22, 2022

To:Ochroleucous

Thanks for the feedback means alot!😊 I'm really glad to see people do enjoy the style and formatting.

And holy crap that text the speech idea sounds brilliant, I had never thought of doing something like that but now it seems so obvious, I'll definitely try it sometime😃😁.

The Girl He Used To Know - Original HoneyFeed Version

Chapter:8

Jan 22, 2022

I love the bit about how hard it is to lift someone on your shoulders😂😂😅😅.

The Dungeon Party

Chapter:4

Jan 22, 2022

Sorry to spam more comments on this chapter but there is only one appropriate comment for the last line:

"~And I would walk 500 miles and I would walk 500 more,~"😂😂

The Isekai Police: Promise of a Wonderful Fantasy was a Lie

Chapter:45

Jan 22, 2022

Ep 6 complete! 🎉🎊

I hope the pay off played out ok and you've enjoyed thus far, we're now half-way through this strange slice of life adventure so I hope it's proving fun😊.

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Based on feedback in early chapters and the last chapter I'll be moving this series back to the UnderCurrent formatting - Ergo I'll post a complete ep/chapter every 2-5 days rather then posting them in parts (With the exception of really long chapters) - I hope that works out 😊😀 and thanks again for the support!

The Girl He Used To Know - Original HoneyFeed Version

Chapter:9

Jan 22, 2022

To:Cas_Cade

I've done that myself a few times, I appreciate your sacrifice 😂😂😭😭

CirCular

Chapter:4