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Jul 07, 2023
Poor Kasumi got owned by 2d. All that grass touching did nothing.....
I like the escalation of the chapter names from going "she's staying here" to "she's staying in my room."
Also this mom is being an absolute troll about this, I love it!
Are you resubmitting the story?! I just read this and I noticed all my likes are gone?!
To:Geta
Always trying to betray expectations. ;)
To:Shulox
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To:minatika
This is so spot on it makes me giggle. Wait and see!
Jul 06, 2023
To:Deleted User
I actually just like Diane's interactions with others in general. ;)
Jul 05, 2023
Cute that Nao is just so straight forward and comfortable with being physical. Meanwhile, Takashi is mad embarrassed... x)
The real question is why is everything level 100?!?!?!!!
That actually takes guts. I knew classmates who went to the popular corner and tried to talk to girls and there's nothing more excruciatingly painful than watching that when I was a kid. Also the analogy of Anne-Marie's head with the revolver is pretty neat.
Air Cut is such a funny phrase, I actually think it just makes the chapter funnier just by having the two characters use it over and over again.
Nice FSN reference you got there...
One thing is I noticed you have some big spaces between scenes. I feel like you can use some kind of text identifier like "---" or a more fancy symbol to segment the sections.
There's definitely a certain irony in being branded by love, hahaha!
With Chiyo's power, maybe they just blow up the royal palace instead...