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Mario Nakano 64

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Jul 18, 2024

Author's Commentary #98:

Time to talk about Chapter 98: The hell of Tartarus.
Some of you might remember, but EC1-DNA actually made her debut way back in Chapter 23 at the underworld banquet. Her name is an obvious pun on Echidna from Greek mythology. Considering the Roboborg union is headed by T. Phon and EC1-DNA, I'm sure you can probably guess what the naming scheme and theme for them will be.

As for the chapter, this obviously never happened in the original, though I was planning to make it the final arc. However, I decided not to, since I hadn't written it at the time, and just thought it would be better to save it for the remake. And now, not even readers of the original will be able to know what direction the story will take.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Spice of life [Remake]

Chapter:98

Jul 18, 2024

Author's Commentary #146:

Time to talk about Chapter 146: Interview the author Part 3: The top 10 favorite characters.
Once again, not much to say. I actually struggled the most with compiling this list out of all the other lists. Probably because there are just so many likable characters.

Even Muramasa Jouzu managed to top the list. For those who don't know, he's the 0mnipoteng 0mni-god of this universe. He decided not to involve himself too much in this story, though he's likely to make an appearance soon.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:146

Jul 18, 2024

I really like Bear's analogy with stone and metal. As they say, only rocks can cut other rocks. I know sound weird, but for some reason I can't shake the feeling that this is a prequel to your Face of Eternity series. Then again, it could just be me overthinking things.

The Pill That Killed Romance

Chapter:33

Jul 17, 2024

Author's Commentary #44:

Time to talk about Chapter 44: Arrivederci Athens.
The girls are leaving Athens and heading for Venice Italy. There, Tetsuka gets a proper introduction. Eriza's also along for the ride, but seems to be acting a bit different. The chapter's main focus is obviously Tetsuka though, so let's talk a bit more about her.

As mentioned before, she takes some inspiration from Gajeel Redfox of Fairy Tail, in fact she essentially has all his powers. The reason for that is because I planned to have her be a main cast member in a battle series spin-off staring Muramasa Jouzu. I ended up canning the story after losing motivation, but I might end up rewriting it.

As for Madoka, she's now 19 years old in the story. Her birthday will certainly be a memorable one, and naturally, I'll have plenty to talk about in these commentaries.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Escape:Witch [Remake]

Chapter:44

Jul 17, 2024

Author's Commentary #97:

Time to talk about Chapter 97: A taste of Tartarus.
This chapter is actually something I wanted to see in Shokugeki no Soma. What happens if a contestant's meal is poisoned? Since Shokugeki never delved into topics like that, I decided to do that here.

I will confirm that Ookuma was the mastermind, and only poisoned herself in order to garner public sympathy. Rika's hatred for her is only going to increase from this point forward. Another thing that might be apparent is the fact that conflict is likely to brew with Benihime. Should she find out about Rika's past, she very well might turn against her.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Spice of life [Remake]

Chapter:97

Jul 17, 2024

Author's Commentary #145:

Time to talk about Chapter 145: Interview the author Part 2: The top 10 worst games.
Basically, my top 10 least favorite games in the series. I'll admit, I actually considered just doing a top 5, since there were only a few games I truly loathed making, but as I went through so of the games, I realized there was just enough to make a top 10 if I included the games I removed after rewriting them.

Though one thing is clear; every single Numakawa game made the list. And worst of all, there are more to come. Perhaps I'll even have to do a list ranking all of Numakawa's games.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:145

Jul 16, 2024

Author's Commentary #43:

Time to talk about Chapter 43: Black sail of the labyrinth Part 3.
The climax of the Athens arc is here, and it is easily one of the saddest chapters thus far. Melinda was truly ruthless and poor Emeri suffered. There actually was a major deviation between this and the original though.

In the original, Eriza was actually left on the isle of Naxos, much like how Adriadne was in the Theseus myth. Since Eriza will be a big part of the story now, I decided to have her just stick with the gang here in the remake. This means that she'll be traveling with them when they go to the next local.

As for Emeri, this event will naturally effect her going forward. Even though she complained about the lifestyle her family imposed on her, deep down she truly did love them. I will confirm that the minotaur truly was Koki and not a trick by Melinda. Though I will also confirm that Serika's theory was true and Melinda had her eye on the Kuramoris from the start.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Escape:Witch [Remake]

Chapter:43

Jul 16, 2024

Author's Commentary #96:

Time to talk about Chapter 96: The 10 finalists.
The much hyped up remake exclusive Headmaster selection arc is back, or so I'd like to say. In reality, the true name for this arc is the Tartarus arc. The Roboborg union which was mentioned in Season 1 will be the primary antagonists for this arc along with it's leader, Dr. T. Phon Laqutte. Laqutte did briefly appear in the original, however, I was unable to properly showcase him there. Here however, he will get his own arc.

ドクター・ティー・フォン・ラケット (Dr. T. Phon Laqutte) is how his name is spelled in katakana. He along with the Roboborg union are an obvious reference to the Borg from Star Trek. Laqutte's name is also a reference to Locutus, the name Jean-Luc Picard was given when he was assimilated by the Borg in the season 3 finale of Star Trek: The Next Generation. His name is also an obvious pun on Typhon, from Greek mythology.

His birthday is May 8th which is also the date the episode that debuted the Borg first aired.

As for his favorite food, he technically doesn't have any since he is a cyborg. Though before he became a cyborg, water was the sustenance he deemed most necessary for survival.

If you're familiar with all the things the Roboborg union is referencing, I'm sure you can get a basic idea on how this arc will play out. This will probably be the darkest arc in the series, not to mention the most emotional.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Spice of life [Remake]

Chapter:96

Jul 16, 2024

To:Spirit

Thanks for checking this out. Since there are hardly any anime,manga, or even light novels focused solely around chess, I decided to make one. The idea of chess with death battles was an idea I had for a while, but didn't refine until I decided to write this story at the start of the year.

As for my elo, I'd say on average it's around 1000-1200. Sometimes I even drop below 1000 when I'm not focusing, but on average I'd say it's probably 1000 at the least. Though my peak elo was 1100, at least as of this moment, so I guess we'll say that's my elo for now.😅

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:1

Jul 16, 2024

Now Ko's beginning to feel conflicted. I can understand why. I wonder what Kitsune's going to do to give her hope.

The Pill That Killed Romance

Chapter:32

Jul 16, 2024

So the pill was part of a larger scheme, but ultimately not meant to be the end-all. Very glad to learn the father's motives, though Ko's motives are still a mystery.

The Pill That Killed Romance

Chapter:31

Jul 15, 2024

[Game log #9]

Here's the game from Chapter 22. It features a Sicilian Defense: Smith-Morra gambit.

[Event "?"]
[Site "?"]
[Date "????.??.??"]
[Round "?"]
[White "Syouma Numakawa"]
[Black "Okisato Tanabe (2434)"]
[Result "0-1"]

1. e4 c5 2. d4 cxd4 3. Qxd4 Nc6 4. Qc4 e6 5. Nc3 Nf6 6. Nf3 d5 7. exd5 exd5 8. Nxd5 Qxd5 9. Qe2+ Be6 10. Ng5 O-O-O 11. c4 Bb4+ 12. Bd2 Bxd2+ 13. Kd1 Qxg5 14. h4 Ba5+ 15. Qd3 Rxd3+ 16. Bxd3 Qd2# 0-1

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:22

Jul 15, 2024

Author's Commentary #95:

Time to talk about Chapter 95: Madoka's birthday.
As stated in a past commentary, Madoka shares her March 24th birthday with Harry Houdini. As such, her birthday chapter will naturally feature her escaping from various death traps, much to Jester's annoyance.

This chapter was in the original and honestly doesn't differentiate too much from it's original counterpart either. What is not in the original though is the arc that will be beginning next chapter. Yep, the Headmaster selection exam arc will be resuming next chapter, and the series will never be the same. I actually thought about adding this arc to the original, but after settling on rewriting the series, decided to save it for this. I hope you're excited for it, because it will definitely be a ride of emotions.

One final thing I'll mention is that Madoka seeing Maju's magic shows was what ultimately inspired her to become a magician herself. While she can't really do a live show without getting kidnapped after it, she can record her shows and post them on Ewetube which was founded by and owned by her mother. If you read Escape Witch, you'll know that Madoka was able to do well as a Ewetuber and truly does grow up to be a sexy hot magician. I'd argue that aspect of her was inspired by the anime Tejina Senpai. Though Madoka does not get stage fright and can always escape no matter how dire things are.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Spice of life [Remake]

Chapter:95

Jul 15, 2024

Author's Commentary #42:

Time to talk about Chapter 42: Black sail of the labyrinth Part 2.
While the general story of the arc is the same as the original, there are some notable differences. One being that Emeri's flustered emotional state is now much more apparent here.

The big one though is that Eriza will now play a much bigger role in Season 2 as a whole. The conversation with her and Melinda was also remake exclusive and readers will want to remember it for later.

As for the arc itself, it is based off of the Theseus myth from Greek mythology. Though it wasn't properly touched on, the ball of Eriza and Eika's hair was meant to represent the ball of thread Ariadne gave Theseus so he could find his way out of the labyrinth.

If you're familiar with the myth, I'm sure you can understand why Melinda declared Emeri the loser of the game. However, there's also a second and quite infamous Greek mythology reference in this arc. See if you can find it before it's revealed in the next chapter.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Escape:Witch [Remake]

Chapter:42

Jul 14, 2024

Author's Commentary #41:

Time to talk about Chapter 41: Black sail of the labyrinth Part 1.
As highlighted in the previous commentary, major revisions between this and the original have occurred. The first is that the season's main antagonist, Melinda Moriarty, has received both a personality and visual overhaul in terms of her design. Instead of being more melancholic, she's now more edgy and upbeat. I really do like her new personality and design compared to her old one. Speaking of which, let's go over her bio.

メリンダ・モリアーティ (Melinda Moriarty) is how her name is spelled in katakana. She's a highly intelligent woman and has a decent social media following. Her name is also a reference to Professor Moriarty from Sherlock Holmes, and she is actually his descendant.

Her birthday is January 31st, which is both National Backward day and the day before Yuni's birthday.

Now that Melinda's bio is out of the way, it's time to talk about a major change between this and the original, that being Serika doesn't get kidnapped. Looking back, I'm not sure why I decided to have her get kidnapped or how she'd even get kidnapped considering her strength. Even if she did get taken out by the immobilization serum dart, I still didn't want her getting kidnapped, mainly because of what Melinda would try and do to her. However, I also didn't want Serika at full strength as that would make everything a sure win for the girls which is why I had her get hit with the dart in the first place. She actually has built up some immunity to the serum thanks to her training at the mansion, but obviously not enough to resist it completely. While she didn't get kidnapped, she will be completely useless for the arc and will have to be carried around by Madoka since leaving her alone would be too risky. And much to Serika's dismay, her hair will also be styled in twintails until she can move again, courtesy of Yuni.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

Escape:Witch [Remake]

Chapter:41

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