Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Apr 18, 2024

    Author's Commentary #7:

    It's finally time to talk about Chapter 7: Rika and Mimi.
    This chapter was not present in the original version, though believe it or not, it was written and published in my novel, Mystery ghost foresight, which was originally going to be a prequel to Spice of life. However, I ended up losing motivation for Mystery ghost, and discontinued the series. However, I ended up writing Mimi and Rika's history as part of a mystery, and when I decided to rewrite Spice of life, I felt it would be best to put the full backstory in and do it early in the story.

    Originally, only the final part of the flashback was included in the original, but it ended up being included in Chapter 40. Having Mimi's backstory early was something I felt was essential for the remake which is why it is taking place at Chapter 7. The flashback also gives some character development to Rika so that's another good reason to have it early.

    As for the flashback itself, you'll notice that Mimi is actually speaking Danish when she first awakes. I used a machine translation, so if there are mistakes, feel free to correct me. As for why I had her speak in her native language, I actually enjoy it when characters occasionally speak in their native languages as it can give more personality to them. Sadly this is the last Danish you'll hear Mimi speak in the story, at least not counting Danish dishes and the codenames of her fellow spies. Intriguingly enough, she's fluent in 10 different languages.

    Speaking of which, all the Danablu spies are named after Danish food dishes, with Mimi's being salmon laks. As for Mimi herself, she draws heavy inspiration from Lily of Spy Kyoushitsu. The other Danablu spies also draw inspiration from the characters of Spy Kyoushitsu as well, but not as heavily as Mimi does.

    One final thing I'll mention is that Mimi is 165 cm tall and her birthday is January 20th, which is actually National cheese lovers day. This is actually very fitting for Mimi since her favorite food is danablu cheese.

    Speaking of which, all the major characters in the series have a favorite food. Some I'll reveal early, while others I'll hold off on revealing until they appear in the story.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Spice of life [Remake]
    Chapter:7





    Apr 16, 2024

    Author's Commentary #7:

    Believe it or not, there isn't much to discuss about Chapter 7: Confrontation.
    The chapter primarily serves as a buildup for the the next few chapters so there isn't much to really talk about. One thing I will mention is that the song I believe fits the Desperado league the best is Bach's prelude and fugue in E minor BWV 533. So feel free to play it in the background whenever the Desperado league comes on screen. Now let's talk about Mei.

    Mei Utsunomiya is your typical strict disciplinary committee head. Because of that, she feels that her image is directly influenced by the school's, which is why she strictly enforces all the rules. Iori's been a frequent offender for years, and the only reason she doesn't get punished a lot is due to her financial situation.

    Mei once punished Iori harshly for her appearance, but Iori naturally used her clout to start a controversy and frame the incident as Mei discriminating against her because she's poor and thus had no choice but to adopt an eye catching look in order to make bank as a streamer.

    Her name is spelled 宇都宮 命 (Utsunomiya Mei) in kanji. Her name, 命, can mean "fate" as well as "ordering" which she tends to do a lot of. Her last name, 宇都宮, can mean "intelligence", "to rule", and "shrine".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    As for Mei herself, she actually one of the more underdeveloped characters, though I don't exactly have big plans for her. In terms of design, she draws inspiration from Kobachi Osaragi from Kaguya-sama while her personality is inspired more by Himeko Momokino from Citrus.

    Her birthday is June 6th, which is the same as Osaragi's. I actually wanted it to be the same as Himeko Momokino's, but since her birthday is not listed, I chose to have her share it with Osaragi.

    Since Mei doesn't play chess, nor plans to, she doesn't have a favorite piece. Even if she did play though, she wouldn't consider one piece more valuable than the others as all have their uses.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    En Passant Grandmaster
    Chapter:7

    Apr 16, 2024

    Author's Commentary #13:

    Time to discuss Chapter 13: Skewer.
    First off, let's explain the title. In chess, a skewer occurs when two pieces in a line are under attack, however, unlike a pin in which a lower valued piece is under attack and the higher valued piece is behind it, the higher valued piece is under attack while the lower valued piece is behind it. This means that many will choose to move the higher valued piece to safety, and forsake the lower valued piece.

    Now let's talk about the trio of bullies. First up is the leader of the group, Shion Segawa. She takes heavy inspiration from Shiho Manabe from Classroom of the elite, but draws her name from Sion of My Instant Death Ability Is So Overpowered and Hiro Segawa of A couple of cuckoos. The kanji for her name is 背川 姫媛 (Segawa Shion). Her first name, 姫媛, means "noblewoman", which is certainly what she is considering she's the prefectural governor's daughter. Speaking of which, her mother's name, 志歩, means "ambition" and "walk". As for their last name, 背川, it means "betray" and "river".

    Both also share the same birthday of February 21st. I initially wanted them to have the same birthday as Shiho Manabe, but since she doesn't have one listed, I instead went with the day that Season 3 episode 8 of the Classroom of the elite anime aired.

    Originally, I had bigger plans for Shion, but for now, she'll just be more of a minor antagonist.

    Speaking of Shiho Manabe, the blue-haired girl, is named Mami Manabe in reference to both her and Mami Nanami from Rent a girlfriend. 曲直部 万美 (Manabe Mami) is how her name is spelled in kanji. Her first name, 万美, means "ten thousand" and "beautiful". Her last name, 曲直部, can translate to "wrong or unjust", "honest", and "group".

    Her birthday is May 2nd, which is the same as Hiro Sewaga's from A couple of cuckoos.

    She is actually one of the school's top shogi players and is also the daughter of an influential politician.

    The final bully, Kigyoku Gyakui, doesn't actually draw her name from anime characters I hate. 逆井 嬉玉 (Gyakui Kigyoku) is how her name is spelled in kanji. Her first name, 嬉玉, can translate to "happiness" and "ball", which is a nod to her status as the top striker of the soccer team. Her last name, 逆井, can mean "to oppose" and "water hole".
    (If I made any mistake with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is January 23rd, which is the same as Kikyō Kushida's from Classroom of the elite.

    Like the other members of the trio, she'll likely just be a minor antagonist for now.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    En Passant Grandmaster
    Chapter:13

    Apr 16, 2024

    Author's Commentary #24:

    Time to discuss Chapter 24: Hagemi's first match.
    Originally, this wasn't going to exist, but I felt that I needed to flesh out more of why Gyro feared Hagemi so I decided to write this chapter. It ended up working in the end, though I'll elaborate more on that in a future commentary.

    First off, some more info on Hagemi. Hagemi comes from a rich family, but ran away from home after her father tried to force her into a relationship with the son of an influential politician. She was only 16 at the time, and had never played chess prior. After meeting and impressing Redfield, she quickly became an overnight star in the chess world, but in the process, upstaged Kuon. At the time, Kuon was a 9-year old chess prodigy whom was going to be the next big star, until Hagemi came out of nowhere and not only upstaged her, but became Redfield's favorite chess player. As such, Kuon developed a rivalry with Hagemi and views her with hostility. Hagemi however, initially viewed her as a little sister, but began seeing her in a bit more of a romantic light once she became an adult. Hagemi's also close with Mimoko's mother as well as various other mothers in the neighborhood. She's actually very sociable and nice, though can become terrifying when she's angry.

    One final topic I'll touch on are Inojin and Cypress. First off, both ended up having sex with Gyro as a punishment for Gyro's loss. The incident ended up causing Cypress to have mild, but not romantic affection for Gyro. The incident is also one of the big reasons he made it his creed not to underestimate women.

    Finally, let's briefly give Inojin his bio since this will likely be the last time we see him in the story.
    In kanji, his name is 伊之助 猪仁 (Inosuke Inojin). 猪仁 can mean "boar" and "humanity", while 伊之助 is actually the same as Inosuke Hashibira's name from Kimetsu no yaiba and translates to "Italy", "to reach" , and "a nickname". There really isn't much significance behind his name. I just liked how it sounded.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His birthday is April 21st and his favorite piece is the knight. The reason for that is because he views himself as a good-looking guy on a horse. Unlike a knight though, he's not chivalrous in the slightest.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:24

    Apr 16, 2024

    Author's Commentary #23:

    Time to discuss Chapter 23: A prodigy in the making.
    This chapter gives us the first proper look at Okisato and Mimoko going all out. It also illustrates that just like in the real world, blunders are more prone to occur the faster the playing speed is.

    Now let's discuss the chess club. They've expanded their roster from 5 members to 10. However, only 8 of them will really be getting the spotlight in the story.

    As for the other two, their names are Zago-kun (座吾) and Azanira-chan (畔蒜 ).
    座吾 translates to "seat" and "myself" while 畔蒜 translates to "shore" and "perennial plant of the lily family".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    As for why they only have surnames, both were made with the intention that if this novel ever got a video game adaptation, they'd be the player characters. As a result, their first names would be chosen by the player.

    Azenira and Zago won't have a major role in the novel, but they will both have some cameos. And as for how things would work out plot-wise if the novel ever did get a video game adaptation, they'd essentially follow Okisato around and replace Numakawa in arcs that he's present in since Numakawa contributes the least to the story.

    Though going more into a potential video game adaptation, you would still be able to play as characters like Okisato for story battles. Speaking of which, I'd also make sure all the story matches (Okisato vs Inoji, Iori vs Cypress, Yuusuke vs Zanni, the bughouse game, etc) have secret cut-scenes and dialogue if you play the games EXACTLY like they are in the story. This would only be a feature of story mode though.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    En Passant Grandmaster
    Chapter:23

    Apr 16, 2024

    Author's Commentary #22:

    This time, we're discussing Chapter 22: WWCF cards.
    The primary purpose of this chapter was to talk about the WWCF cards. Since this was written before I rewrote some of the earlier chapters, this was originally going to be the giant info dump chapter on the WWCF cards. However, all this chapter really ended up doing was revealing that they can allow their holders to earn money from winning battles. Part of my mentality for doing that is that if this novel were to ever get a video game adaptation, the banking feature would essentially function similar to how you get money from winning battles in Pokemon games.

    I also thought it would be better to gradually reveal some of the features of the WWCF cards rather than dump everything all at once, so look forward to more reveals about the card's features in future chapters.

    Finally, let's discuss Syouma Numakawa. 沼川 將誠 (Numakawa Syouma) is how his name is written in kanji. 將誠 means "to almost be" and "fact", which is fitting since he's part of the science club.
    沼川 on the other hand, translates to "swamp river".
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    His birthday is June 13th, which he shares with Lorenz Hellman Gloucester from Fire Emblem three houses.

    Like Maida, he feels the queen is the most versatile piece on the board.

    He's actually skilled at programming, but also very arrogant. Funnily enough, the greatest influence for his character is actually Lorenz Hellman Gloucester from Fire emblem three houses.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:22


    Apr 15, 2024

    Author's Commentary #20:

    It's time to discuss Chapter 20: Feline fanatic.
    First thing's first, Kuon was originally supposed to be a much larger antagonist, but I couldn't think of what to do with her, so I relegated her to that of a minor one. As such, this chapter originally served to build her up as a messed up villain, but since I decided to change course, I ended up rewriting Kuon to make her more of a scientist.

    南谷 九怨 (Nanya Kuon) is how her name is spelled in kanji. Her first name, 九怨, translates to "nine" and "resentment", which is fitting for her character. Her last name, 南谷, means "South" and "ravine". It also has "nya" in it which is why I chose it.

    Her birthday is August 8th, which is International cat day. As for why she prefers catgirls over cats, that will eventually be explained in the story.

    Her favorite piece is the queen, mainly because she herself believes she is the queen of chess. She was actually a child prodigy, but ended up getting upstaged when her eventual rival and world's highest rated female player entered the scene. As for who that woman is, that will be revealed soon.

    I'll also talk a bit about Nyogaku Nakano. Like Kuon, I originally planned for her to have a larger role, but for now she'll be a minor character.

    中埜 如岳 (Nakano Nyogaku) is how her name is written in kanji. Her first name,
    如岳 means "similar to" and "peak". Her last name, 中埜 means "inside" and "field". It is an obvious nod to the the Nakano quintuplets from the Quintessential quintuplets. Though funnily enough, the character that largely inspired Nyogaku was actually Sahara Wakasa from Mato seihei no slave.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is December 4th. I originally wanted to make her birthday the same as Sahara's but decided to go with something a bit more creative as Sahara debuted in the 12th chapter of the manga and the 4th episode of the anime.

    As for her favorite piece, it's the bishop. Why? Because she likes how they go whoosh on the diagonals.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:20