May 27, 2025
Author's Commentary #452:
Time to talk about Chapter 452: Unconsentual hair removal.
Yeah, you all saw it coming. And yes, this was planned from the start. No further comments...
OK, so there is actually more to talk about, however, I actually have to be careful to avoid giving away spoilers. Though I can talk more about the original vision for this. Originally, this was nothing more than a simple chapter or two of fun to be had on the rest day. Everyone would still go bald, but things were much smaller scaled, mainly due to only a few teams being fully fleshed out at the time. Now there's over 65 women's teams. The nature of the tournament has also changed drastically as what was once an insignificant minor event is now a major plot beat in the entire story.
One quick thing I'd mention is that I plan to feature music notes in the comments, providing links to the songs I feel should play during certain chapters. These won't be numbered, and they won't be done starting from Chapter 1, nor will they be present for all chapters.
As for how things go from here in the story, obviously, more girls will end up bald. Of course, there will also be character development moments, so don't think this will just be weeks of author's poorly disguised fetish. In fact, things will be shifting over to Kisha for a few chapters, so look forward to learning more fun facts about the series.
That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.
