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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Sep 27, 2025

To:Moe Tie

Don't forget that the diet coke and mentos caused their stomachs to implode. And it was done at high altitude, enchancing the effects and making it extremely painful. Muki really is merciless.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:47

Sep 27, 2025

To:Moe Tie

I actually was going back and forth on whether to kill her off, but ultimately went with it for the sake of the story and Rosa's growth.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:45

Sep 27, 2025

To:Moe Tie

Yup, this is our hero, everybody. Also, the bald girl counter is up to 13 thanks to the 5 sporty bald orc women plus Kirikatta and Erika. And as a bonus, Boree's bald too, so it's 13 bald girls and 1 bald guy.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:44

Sep 27, 2025

To:Moe Tie

She is currently in control of Erika, so no danger to her physical self at the moment.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:43

Sep 27, 2025

To:Moe Tie

This comment will age well.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:42

Sep 27, 2025

No bald Eight, 0/10... Just kidding. I really enjoyed reading this one. More often than not it reminded me of Skeleton and Idiot Sorceress. Though on that note, it does bring up a minor critique I have. That being that compared to that novel, the world in this novel doesn't quite feel as rich. What I mean is that most locations here feel like flavor of the week type things, rather than the lore-filled world you had in Skeleton and Idiot sorceress. That, and I do kind of feel like Eight should have been a tad more fleshed out. It did feel a little anticlimactic how she was just in a rebellious stage. That, and it would have been nice to see Lucky beat her proper.

Now Rollando, he really is what ended up carrying this hard. The dice man may have gotten Lucky in trouble more than a couple times, but he proved his worth with knowledge and humor.

Overall, I don't think this will top Skeleton and idiot sorceress, but it just might top Food truck to be my second-favorite of your works. Congratulations on finishing and good luck with the contest.

Gamble-Mania

Chapter:40

Sep 27, 2025

Author's Commentary #575:

Time to talk about Chapter 575: Riding into round 2.
Round 2 isn't quite here yet, but the buildup chapter for it sure is. Looks like Hagemi might have messed up Yuusuke's psych for the worse by showing him the video of Saloni. While it looks like he might be able to bounce back with a win, as Mimoko stated, his bad psych could destroy his tournament.

Shirako is also back, and waving bald flags. Iori might even bald up too even if she does win a hypothetical match, though maybe that would be in the next Side Story. Of course, this is all if Shirako really does end up facing Iori in the tournament. And speaking of matchups, don't forget Mimoko won't actually be facing Miga. But whether this ploy will ensnare Mimoko Tanabe remains to be seen.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:575

Sep 27, 2025

Just when I think it's about to wrap up, a chapter like this gets me thinking there's still plenty more chapters left. I'm curious as to what might be happening with the boy. Could Grace be turning hell good?

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:46

Sep 27, 2025

To:Kowa-sensei

I'm glad to hear you think it's well-written. As I alluded to in an earlier reply, this story was originally going to be much darker than it ended up turning out to be. As such, you'll notice this much more in the earlier chapters than the later ones.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:7

Sep 27, 2025

To:Kowa-sensei

That percentage is gonna increase.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:6

Sep 27, 2025

To:Kowa-sensei

In the beginning, I originally planned for the elves to be much eviler, but ended up scaling them back quite a bit. They have had a really rough past though, and an overlord that preaches conquest above all, so there's that to factor in too.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:5

Sep 26, 2025

And thus, it comes to an end. One quick thing is that I feel the previous chapter is the better note to end on. I get the allure of sequel bait, and feel it is encouraged to have an ending that can hint at a potential continuation, but the rules do state the ending should be satisfactory. Ending with a cliffhanger like this might be pushing it a bit. Not that the cliffhanger is bad, it's just the rules can sometimes be convoluted at times, so better safe than sorry is my motto.

As for the story, I'm glad you were able to finish it. I feel it fits the typical isekai model, though it doesn't really stand out as something quite like a Re:Zero or Youjo Senki. That doesn't mean the story is bad, but it does feel more on the generic side.

Regardless, it was an enjoyable read, and I wish you the best of luck with the contest.

Lock & Key: Resonance

Chapter:39

Sep 26, 2025

One more to go.

Lock & Key: Resonance

Chapter:38

Sep 26, 2025

Guess Draven escaping is for sequel reasons. Sucks that he couldn't be killed though.

Lock & Key: Resonance

Chapter:36

Sep 26, 2025

Just realized the rest of the chapters are up. That means I'll be binging this right now.

Lock & Key: Resonance

Chapter:35

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