Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Apr 12, 2024

    Author's Commentary #5:

    This time, we're discussing Chapter 5: Delusions of grandeur.
    This chapter primarily serves as an introduction to the main villain of season 1, Gyro (Gunther Gunnerson). He primarily came to be because I thought a villain that had toy gyroscopes spinning atop them would be cool.

    Originally, June 5th was his birthday, however, I changed it to March 11th, which is the birthday of Gunnar Gundersen, who was an Australian chess master as well as the one who played the game with the en passant checkmate that served as a reference point for the game in chapter 1. Gyro's name was undeniably inspired by Gundersen's which led me to change the birthday. Though that isn't the only thing that's changed about Gyro. His rating, which was initially 2459 was increased to 2559. The reason for that is because I wanted him to feel more like a threat as I felt his original rating was too low and too close to Okisato's rating of 2434.

    Since his name isn't Japanese, there is no kanji for it. However, I believe ジャイロ (ギュンター・ガナーソン) (Gyro (Gunther Gunnerson)) is how it would be spelled in katakana.

    As for his favorite piece on the board, it is none other than the bishop. Like Yuusuke, he believes it is one of the more versatile pieces on the board, though knights are a close second for him.

    Finally, let's discuss the game featured in this chapter. Like chapter 3's game, it was conceived by playing a bot on chess.com. In short, the principal sucks, though to be fair, he made some decent moves, likely thanks to Gyro's teachings. Other than that, there really isn't much else to say about the game itself.
    One thing I will clarify is that DESPERs don't need to be out in the open when they activate, which was why Gyro was able to activate his from his pocket.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    En Passant Grandmaster cover
    En Passant Grandmaster
    Chapter:5

    Apr 12, 2024

    Author's Commentary #4:

    Time to discuss Chapter 4: Fool's mate.
    First off the fool's mate. Yeah, Iori totally did that for the lols. Speaking of which, Iori is a streamer with over 4 million subscribers on her channel. She tends to be very edgy and raunchy in terms of what she streams. Despite her solid streaming career, her financial situation isn't the most stable and she lives alone. She's been friends with Mimoko since middle school though but only picked up chess after becoming a streamer. Her rating however is just 500 which signifies she's a rookie when it comes to chess.

    As for Iori's name, the kanji is as follows, 石切所 依央莉 (Ishikiridokoro Iori).
    First off, her first name 依央莉, translates to "dependent", "center", and "jasmine". It can also mean "beauty" and Iori certainly is beautiful, but I actually chose it more due to it also meaning "to trust in".
    As for her last name, 石切所, I wanted it to be noteworthy primarily in how it sounded, since Iori's whole shtick is standing out. It translates to "stone", "cut", and "place". It can also mean "to be enthusiastic" which Iori certainly is, as well as "worthless" which is what her detractors think she is.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    To my knowledge, she doesn't share a birthday with any notable chess players, though her birthday is notable since it's April 1st, which is April fool's day.

    Finally, as stated in her character bio, her favorite piece is the knight. The reason for that is because she likes how chaotic the knight's movement is.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    En Passant Grandmaster cover
    En Passant Grandmaster
    Chapter:4




    Apr 12, 2024

    We have finally reached the true final chapter of Spice of life's original version. Thank you so much to everyone that checked this out. Feel free to check out the remake if you want, but if not, that's fine. This chapter is pretty much how the remake will end as well.
    Now for some discussion on the chapter. First off, Happy birthday to Rika, Masaru, and Ryokoma.
    As for Rika and Masaru's children, all of them with the exception of Waki and Yumi are named after spices. As for why one is named Waki, Rika just did it out of appreciation of her friend. As for Yumi, her birthday is the exact day I uploaded the first chapter of Spice of life here on Honeyfeed.
    Now to discuss the remake properly. Originally, I rewrote Spice of life and submitted it to a contest, but since it didn't pass, I decided to upload it starting today. A part of me really did want to upload the remake so I guess things worked out. Story events will be far better paced, and characters that appeared towards the end of the story, like Nero/ Muramasa Jouzu, make their debuts in the remake much earlier. Funnily enough, Nero's debut chapter here was actually the last original chapter I wrote before initially doing the rewrite for the contest. Every chapter afterwards ended up being adapted from the rewrite into this version of the story.
    Now even though I've been constantly gushing about the remake, the original Spice of life will always hold a special place in my heart. As such, I will be keeping this version of the story up while I publish chapters for the remake. As for the future of the series post remake, maybe I'll do a story focusing on Rika and Masaru's kids or have the characters cameo in another work. Though I guess they've already cameoed in Escape Witch (which is also getting a remake) and the characters from Escape Witch have cameoed here. But for now, everyone lived happily ever after.
    Once again, thanks to everyone that read this entire story to the end.
    And for one final bonus, here are my top 25 favorite characters from the series.
    25. Wakaha
    24. Mochi
    23. Bianka
    22. Harumi
    21. Shiori
    20. Emeri
    19. Yuni
    18. Nino
    17. Ichika
    16. Izumi
    15. Benihime
    14. Hanabi
    13. Waki
    12. Hina
    11. Mocha
    10. Itsuki
    9. Dastard/Eluf
    8. Masaru
    7. Helga
    6. Matcha
    5. Zuina
    4. Serika
    3. Madoka
    2. Mimi
    1. Rika
    0. Nero/Muramasa Jouzu
    I think the reason many Escape Witch characters appeared is because of how much more they were fleshed out here than in their original story.
    Once again, thank you to everyone that read and supported this series. I truly enjoyed writing it and it will forever hold a special place in my heart.

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    Spice of Life
    Chapter:122