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Mario Nakano 64

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Jan 10, 2026

Author's Commentary #680:

Time to talk about Chapter 680: An announcement regarding focus.
Now that the quiz arc is finished, I'm kind of clueless as to what to do next in the short-term. I'll probably do the 1,000 likes special, but after that, maybe more character profiles.

I really want to put all my focus into finishing up my other contest novel, which is why I'm holding off on doing anything major here or with the volumes. Once that's done, this series will naturally get my full focus. And speaking of the series, we're now 20 chapters away from the big 700. That means I got to come up with some new fanservice for the occasion.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:680

Jan 10, 2026

What nationality is Bukit? I don't think I saw a specific mention. Also, while they're talking about the subject in the story, it does get a bit confusing as to who's speaking the lines. I thought Bukit was speaking some of Riku's lines as to me some sounded more like they were coming from her than Riku. Maybe try and distinguish things a bit clearer or rewrite things. The lines are good, but they honestly flow a bit better coming from Bukit in my opinion. For example, the "There is blatant discrimination" line sounds like it's coming from Bukit along with the "Shade darker" one. The "What do you mean?" line feels more like a Riku line.

Miss Kagayaki: Won't the Ice Princess of K-Pop's Childhood Friend Deem Her Worthy?!

Chapter:12

Jan 10, 2026

Note: Just rewrote the entire beginning. Please check it out as it helps make everything flow much better.

Misfits of the Magic World

Chapter:15

Jan 09, 2026

I'm hungry.

PhotoKoi: To The Girl I See Beyond The Lens

Chapter:7

Jan 09, 2026

Now here's where the ":" works well in the texts.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:16

Jan 09, 2026

Lucky pervert.

The Witch Queen

Chapter:12

Jan 09, 2026

If she had just worded her statement to be something like, "everyone here shares their name with historical figures", she might have avoided controversy.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:15

Jan 09, 2026

Almost caught up. 5 more chapters to go I think.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:14

Jan 09, 2026

The talk of space reminds me of the scene from the Red Ranger isekai where the giant robot flies into space, and everyone is surprised by the state of space.

Tyur'ma

Chapter:6

Jan 09, 2026

Looks like I'll have to binge this proper now that it's done. Probably won't do it right away though.

The Witch Queen

Chapter:11

Jan 09, 2026

Plays Pizza Tower's War theme.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:13

Jan 09, 2026

Since when do you do cliffhangers? But I guess that hypes up the next story up more. Nice little read as always.

Hazel's memories of the Amarok hunt

Chapter:3

Jan 09, 2026

More Aba lore. When will he make a proper appearance on-screen?

Hazel's memories of the Amarok hunt

Chapter:2

Jan 09, 2026

Noticed that there was a section with italicized text, but no script format, but also not quotations. Judging by the look of them, I don't think they're meant to be thoughts. Honestly prefer that over script format any day of the week.

Seashells and Other Broken Things

Chapter:12

Jan 09, 2026

Really got this one in last minute, but glad you did. This monthly was one I thought would be a perfect prompt for your characters.

Hazel's memories of the Amarok hunt

Chapter:1

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