Sep 26, 2025
And thus, it comes to an end. One quick thing is that I feel the previous chapter is the better note to end on. I get the allure of sequel bait, and feel it is encouraged to have an ending that can hint at a potential continuation, but the rules do state the ending should be satisfactory. Ending with a cliffhanger like this might be pushing it a bit. Not that the cliffhanger is bad, it's just the rules can sometimes be convoluted at times, so better safe than sorry is my motto.
As for the story, I'm glad you were able to finish it. I feel it fits the typical isekai model, though it doesn't really stand out as something quite like a Re:Zero or Youjo Senki. That doesn't mean the story is bad, but it does feel more on the generic side.
Regardless, it was an enjoyable read, and I wish you the best of luck with the contest.