Mario Nakano 64

Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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    Jan 22, 2025

    Author's Commentary #327:

    Time to talk about Chapter 327: Dining in at the secret puzzle cafe.
    It's finally time for downtime, but once again, trouble strikes at dinner time. Luckily, everyone can just go to the hotel's fancier restaurant and the secret puzzle cafe for dinner. Now let's discuss the new character, Muna.

    ムナ・ネフェルネフェルアテン (Muna Neferneferuaten) is how Muna's name would be spelled in katakana.
    منى نيفرنفيرواتن (Muna Neferneferuaten) is how her name would be spelled in Arabic. 𓅓𓅲𓈖𓄿𓐍𓈖𓆑𓂋𓈖𓆑𓂋𓅲𓄿𓏏𓈖 (Muna Neferneferuaten) is how her name would be spelled in hieroglyphics.
    (If I made any mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is February 1st. This is also the birthday of Yuni from Escape:Witch, but the two have no relationship to each other whatsoever.

    Her favorite piece is the queen since she herself is a queen.

    As shown in the chapter, Muna really loves tomatoes. She prefers to eat them whole though, and when hungry can eat crates of them. She doesn't need to eat all the time though, but on average, requires meals of 10 whole tomatoes morning, noon, and night, to avoid entering the state of hunger she did in this chapter.

    As for a little more background on the Neo Kingdom of Egypt, it's pretty much Ancient Egypt if it survived all the way to the modern era. Hieroglyphics are now the main form of writing, though Egyptian Arabic is still the main spoken language, and is still used in writing.

    When I first completed the designs for the Egyptian team, I considered having them be Japan's 3rd round opponent instead of Poland. Ultimately, I felt Poland worked better, due to the Jadwiga gambit, and went with them for the 3rd round. The entire team will properly show up as the arc progresses though.

    And finally, Okisato will face off against Zsa Zsa. And this time, Zsa Zsa will play at her best, so look forward to seeing an exciting match. And I really mean it. This match is a long one, but it has a really satisfying ending. I hope you're looking forward to it.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:327

    Jan 21, 2025

    Author's Commentary #326:

    Time to talk about Chapter 326: Get wild and bald.
    The Xiu game has finally arrived, and unlike the fog of war match back in Chapter 159: Fog of war and sexy feet, her true prowess is on display. Mimoko will have one challenging match ahead of her as will the team as a whole. Now let's discuss Ugnė.

    ウグネ・シャウリテ (Ugnė Šaulytė) is how Ugnė's name would be spelled in katakana. In Lithuanian, her surname means "rifleman" while her first name means "fire", as in fire like in a fireplace.
    (If I made and mistakes with the translations, feel free to correct me).

    Her birthday is February 26th, which is the day the first chapter of City Hunter was released.

    Her favorite piece is the bishop, since those are the snipers of the chess board.

    Ugnė is a professional paintball player and aspiring chess player, as well as a close friend of Muazzez. The two have been partners in crime for years, though only became bald just before the tournament. Her character is inspired a bit by Ryo Saeba from City Hunter, which is why she's a skirt chaser. It's also why the chapter's title is a pun on the chorus from "Get Wild" by TM Network, the first ending song for the City Hunter. The chorus line is "Get wild and tough", but the chapter title is "Get wild and bald".

    The game was an interesting one as it features a Modern Defense with 1. e4 opening, an opening that hasn't appeared too much in the series. But when it led to a Caro-Kann Defense: Gurgenidze System, and proved to be an entertaining game, I decided it was worthy of being featured in the chapter.

    And with hat, round 5 is officially over. Next chapter will be a downtime chapter, but as previously mentioned, a game will occur before round 6 starts. There will also be some chapters that introduce new characters, so look forward to that too as some of these new characters will play a decent role in the latter half of the arc.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Jan 21, 2025

    Author's Commentary #325:

    Time to talk about Chapter 325: Sugar vs broccoli.
    If you ever wanted to see Robbie Rotten vs Jabroni Mike in a chess match, this i pretty much the closest thing to that. This was the last of the recent batch of chapters I wrote, and it kind of shows with how it just inserts itself before Xiu's match. Now let's discuss all the new characters introduced.

    ヴィンチェンツォ・ディルイージ (Vincenzo DiLuigi) is how Vincenzo's name would be spelled in katakana.

    His birthday is September 4th, which is the day the first episode of the Super Mario bros Super show aired.

    His favorite piece is the bishop because he likes attacking at long range.

    Vincenzo originally hails from Escape Witch and Spice of Life and is Jester's younger brother from another mother. He also says all his lines in English and sounds exactly like Vinny Vinesauce when he does his Luigi voice. Funnily enough, Vinny's Luigi voice was the primary inspiration for Vincenzo.

    ドージェ・メディチ (Doge Medici) is how Doge's name would be spelled in katakana.

    His birthday is October 20th, which he shares with Italian professional football manager, Claudio Ranieri.

    His favorite piece is the pawn, mainly because he views moving them like kicking soccer balls.

    Initially, Doge had a very generic design, and personality to boot, but then I decided to base him off of Claudio Ranieri, and dilly ding, dilly dong, we got fun and memorable character. He even says Caludio's trademark, "Dilly ding, Dilly dong" catchphrase as a homage.

    マルコ・マルヴォーリオ (Marco Malvolio) is how Marco's name would be spelled in katakana. ジャブロノ・マルコ (Jabrono Marco) is how his streamer name would be spelled in katakana.

    His birthday is December 23rd, which he shares with streamer and content creator, Jabroni Mike, who Marco is heavily based off of.

    His favorite piece is the bishop because they're the lewdest piece according to him.

    Marco is actually a streamer and a lewd one at that. His character is a homage to and parody of Jabroni Mike. As for his hair, it's a reference to when Jabroni Mike infamously gave himself a broccoli haircut.

    ピスタチオ・ラグー (Pistachio Ragu) is how Pistachio's name would be spelled in katakana.

    His birthday is January 26th, which is the day Pizza Tower was released.

    His favorite piece is the king because it has the simplest and least confusing moves according to him.

    Pistachio is a parody character of Pizza Tower's Peppino Spaghetti. He was actually mentioned in some of my aforementioned works, but never appeared until now.

    And with that, all the members of the Italian team have been given their bios. As for the game, it was a last minute one I did because I felt we needed to see some more Ragnar action. I decided to have him play the Icelandic-Palme gambit as the game I got when I played it against the Chess.com bots, with assisted mode on, was amazing.

    But now the next chapter will definitely feature Xiu's game, and then round 5 will officially be over. Though I will confirm at least one game will occur before round 6's start. As for who it could be between, the clue is that it will feature someone who was introduced in round 5. See if you can guess who it is before it's revealed in the story.

    That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

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    Chapter:325

    Jan 21, 2025

    To:lolitroy

    If you're looking for vibey works from me, I have a few more that might fit the bill. They're on the shorter side, both in chapter length and overall length, but they fit the vibey feel you're likely seeking.

    First up is "Will you give this cute tsundere love?": https://www.honeyfeed.fm/novels/12806
    Fair warning, it's basically me just writing random slice of life wholesome moments, so this isn't really a coherent plot so to say. The latter chapters also tend to be low quality due to me just randomly writing randomness. It's not my highest quality work, but easily one of my more cozy and vibey works.

    On the more comedic side, I've got "Iron Wiedergänger":https://www.honeyfeed.fm/novels/14511
    It's got a similar vibe to your novel, Robot Catgirls Philosophizing on the Moon!, but with an isekaid chuuni vampire who ends up reincarnated as an android... ON THE MOON! There is a bit of violence and it's on the ecchier side of things, but it's primarily a dumb comedy and it's a short read as well.

    Next up is "Hangin out with the gyarus": https://www.honeyfeed.fm/novels/12976
    It's a two chapter one-shot, though fair warning the second chapter is essentially me just tying the work into my novel's extended universe so to say. But other than that, it's a chill slice of life read with no real strife or conflict. It also doubles as a dream journal of sorts, so if some things in it are a bit jumbled, that's why.

    Then there's "Sakura Streamer girl": https://www.honeyfeed.fm/novels/16355
    It's a one chapter one-shot, made for the Honeyfeed Workshop contest. It's only a chapter, but it's nice and wholesome.

    The last novel I can think of that might fit what you're looking for is The ones under the bed: https://www.honeyfeed.fm/novels/14908
    It's less so a novel, and more so just fun bios on some of the monsters I thought lurked under the bed when I was a kid. Probably not what you're looking for, but I thought I'd throw it in anyways.

    And that's all I can think of in terms of cozy and vibey works. All of these also work as one-shots so there's no need to worry about continuations even though some of the characters appear in my main crossover work. I do have some other works, but I don't think they're vibey enough for what you're seeking, thus I won't recommend them.

    Thanks for asking for recommendations. I hope they're what you're seeking.

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    Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent
    Chapter:30

    Jan 21, 2025

    To:lolitroy

    Thank you so much for reading this. Not gonna lie, the ending with Hana's parents is probably the weakest part of the story, and I knew it too. But I feel it was at least better than having them stay dead as that would really ruin things. Sure, it may be underwhelming, but just look at Makarov from Fairy Tail. And for full disclosure, I was disappointed that he survived when I first read the chapter, but now I get why the author did what he did. Sure, it may feel like it lessens the emotional impact, but others might feel different and glad things end happily.

    I knew this moment would be the least favorite moment of many in the story, but there was little I could think of to get out of it. I didn't want to pull out a time machine, so what I did instead was leave subtle hints of Hana's parents actually being alive, in hopes of reducing the odds of readers feeling this all came out of the blue. The first was the subtle line of Delina complaining about upgrading smartphones, implying that Hana's was not the first, and the second one was the smartphone itself, Hana's mother's to be exact. The fact that it looked exactly the same as before, yet Hana's mother looked so old, didn't match up. There were also no years on the gravestones either. Not that all this completely fixes and justifies the scene, but I at least wanted to clarify it all.

    As for Meredith, she felt as though she might have actually driven Hana to death, as back in that time, people didn't know if the amberstasis would work or not. That emotional weight can be quite heavy. The world also didn't feel like a one worth living in to her, so she decided to take a chance with the amberstasis, but first decided to try and reconcile with Hana's parents to get them on board as well.

    The ending was intentionally meant to be more open-ended so a continuation could be possible, but if not, the ending was at least hopefully satisfying. While it may follow more of a formula, many series that end up getting animes, notably isekais, tend to. I've noticed a lot of entries in the contest were more on the philosophical side, which is fine, but sometimes, people just want a relaxing series that doesn't require too much thinking to enjoy. My mindset when writing this was make this something a publisher would look at and say, "This would work as a nice short series that people could sit down and relax with". That's why I played it safe so to say as if it follows a formula that works, then there's a higher chance it could be picked up, and possibly resonate more with a Japanese audience.

    Going back to some of those aforementioned isekais, I feel the reason they work is because they tend to have a relaxed, not to serious feel at times, or at least the ones that fall into the "Animal Crossing type" as some might say. But one thing I felt when watching those shows was relaxed. Sure there were some zany out of the blue moments that made no sense, but it was overall a nice way to relax and unwind my mind from the real world. That's what I'm hoping this work will be; a nice relaxing work to enjoy and help people unwind from the stress of the real world.

    Ironically enough, the original idea for this novel was an isekai, with Hana venturing around a fantasy world with her mother, vlogging it in hopes of the videos reaching her father who remained on earth. Irina was meant to be an eccentric baroness that would tag along, and there would be girls love elements present. But with the contest, I obviously had to revise things in order to fit the theme.

    And finally, many have pointed out that there are dystopian undertones in the story. Though in many of the other novels I've read in the harmonic future category, many have featured concepts that seem dystopian. I will clarify that not everyone else really faces the problem Irina has. To them, life is perfect, and everything is fine. They're not oppressed by some secret evil AI or anything like that, they just have a different worldview. Since I mainly wanted to make this more of a relaxing work, I didn't want to make it to philosophical, so I refrained from delving too much into the inner workings of the world, relegating things like how the government works to just a sentence or two.

    It's not a perfect work, heck no work can truly be considered perfect in a sense, but I hope it's good enough to at least convince someone it would make for a good manga/anime that people could read/watch to help soothe their souls and wind down and relax with.

    Thank you for your insights and for reading this entire series. It really means a lot to me. I hope you enjoyed reading this story.

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    Limitless Vlogging: A journey around the utopian supercontinent
    Chapter:30