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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Oct 19, 2025

So this is the final chapter. Review time. Compared to the early chapters, your writing has improved significantly. It is still a bit rough in some spots, but I think you're building up a great foundation for yourself. I'm sure you're aware I'm not the biggest fan of how overly descriptive you can be, as I feel it can hurt more than help, but it seems others had high praises for your style, so perhaps it might simply be that I'm the dissenting opinion. Good job on finishing this.

How a Pink Diamond Talisman Turned Me from a Graduate Student into a Warrior Princess

Chapter:6

Oct 19, 2025

I do enjoy it when an author is willing to have their villains be written to be grotesquely evil and irredeemable. It makes for a great hook in my opinion as viewers will want to see said villain get their ass kicked all the more so.

How a Pink Diamond Talisman Turned Me from a Graduate Student into a Warrior Princess

Chapter:5

Oct 19, 2025

That was shorter than I thought it'd be.

How a Pink Diamond Talisman Turned Me from a Graduate Student into a Warrior Princess

Chapter:4

Oct 19, 2025

[Game log #348]

Here's the blindfold chess 960 game from Chapter 597 between Saori and Mimoko.

[Event "N/A"]
[Site "Kōtō City, Tokyo"]
[Date "2024.10.13"]
[Round "N/A"]
[White "Mimoko Inoue (2858)"]
[Black "Saori Saeki"]
[Result "1-0"]
[Variant "Chess960"]
[SetUp "1"]
[FEN "rkbrnbqn/pppppppp/8/8/8/8/PPPPPPPP/RKBRNBQN w DAda - 0 1"]
[Link "https://www.chess.com/play/computer"]

1. f4 d5 2. a4 Rd6 3. a5 b5 4. e4 Bf5 5. exf5 Rb6 6. axb6 cxb6 7. Bxb5 Nc7 8. Bc6 Ng6 9. fxg6 hxg6 10. Nd3 O-O-O 11. Rxa7 Qh7 12. Qxb6 Rd7 13. Qb7+ Kd8 14. Qb8# 1-0

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:597

Oct 19, 2025

Author's Commentary #597:

Time to talk about Chapter 597: Going in blind.
Blindfold chess is here, and it's a bit different due to the rule that players must call out the algebraic notation for their moves. I initially messed this up, but decided that it could work by having just Saori incorrectly state the moves while Mimoko stated them correctly. Saori really is despicable.

Though not an official WWCF member, she is in contention for being the biggest jobber in the series. If she gets an official rating, it would likely be 200. She's not horrendous at chess, but she isn't exactly much better than a low-level player either.

And with that, we're only 3 chapters away from the big 600. The end of this season is also nearing as well. As a result, you might see me rushing a bit to the end and not showcasing all the main character's matches. I actually wanted to showcase some more matches, but I feel that if I decide to, it'll be via revisions long after the season is done. I might do one last minute revision and merge some chapters together in the short-term though, so be aware that it's a possibility.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:597

Oct 19, 2025

[Game log #319]

Here's the game from Chapter 511 between Iori and Saori featuring yet another Halloween Gambit.

[Event "N/A"]
[Site "Kawaguchi, Saitama"]
[Date "2024.10.01"]
[Round "N/A"]
[White "Iori Ishikiridokoro (2488)"]
[Black "Saori Saiki"]
[Result "1-0"]
[Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis"]

1. Nf3 Nf6 2. Nc3 Nc6 3. e4 e5 4. Nxe5 Nxe5 5. d4 Ng6 6. e5 Ng8 7. Bc4 c6 8. Qf3 Nh6 9. Bxh6 Qh4 10. Qxf7+ Kd8 11. Be3 Qe7 12. O-O-O Qxf7 13. Bxf7 b5 14. Ne4 d5 15. exd6 Bb7 16. Rhe1 Nh4 17. Bg5+ Kd7 18. Nc5+ Kc8 19. Re8# 1-0

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:511

Oct 18, 2025

Well how much does she bench?

Wadakoi - A Ridiculous Love That Will Kill Me Someday

Chapter:6

Oct 18, 2025

You said you didn't watch Rokudo's bad girls, right? The ending line about Akio not wanting Misaki to be violent for his sake is exactly like how Rokudo feels with Ranna. They really are similar.

Wadakoi - A Ridiculous Love That Will Kill Me Someday

Chapter:5

Oct 18, 2025

Author's Commentary #596:

Time to talk about Chapter 596: Scandal.
I feel one of these days I'm going to name a newer chapter the same name as an older chapter without realizing it. With nearly 600 chapters, forgetting a chapter name or two is a real possibility. Getting back on track, things are about to take a slight detour from the round. As such, you can expect some games to take place after the 600th chapter.

Since I don't have the game written yet, it'll be next chapter. That being said, with Mimoko blindfolded, it means Blindfold chess will finally be making it's debut in the series. And not just that, it'll be Chess 960, so the back rank will be randomized. The only thing that might dull some of the excitement is that Saori is low-leveled. Then again, I doubt there's anyone that wouldn't want to see someone like her get humiliated on the chessboard.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:596

Oct 18, 2025

To:Taylor J

Yes it was. It was literally the day I got back from it that I began writing this. Despite my wonky sleep schedule, I managed to release and write the chapters in those early weeks before eventually returning to my groove.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:25

Oct 18, 2025

To:Taylor J

Finally found I had the McDonald's parody actually be a parody of Japanese convenience store chicken. As for the two bad elves, they're meant to be rude as hell, but get away with what they do because of their freakish strength.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:24

Oct 18, 2025

To:Taylor J

Yes it was. Glad you liked the investigation.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:23

Oct 17, 2025

[Game log #347]

Here's the game from round 5 of All-Japan between Mimoko and Alma from Chapter 595. It features a Fool's Mate.

[Event "All-Japan"]
[Site "Kōtō City, Tokyo"]
[Date "2024.10.13"]
[Round "5"]
[White "Alma Mata (2032)"]
[Black "Mimoko Inoue (2858)"]
[Result "0-1"]
[Link "https://www.chess.com/analysis"]

1. f3 e5 2. g4 Qh4# 0-1

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:595

Oct 17, 2025

Author's Commentary #595:

Time to talk about Chapter 595: Scripted loss.
We're getting into the thick of it now. Even though the game was short, Mimoko's now trapped. And up until just a few minutes ago, I too felt trapped with not knowing what to do with the plot, until I realized I could use my original idea for the 600th chapter special to turn this into peak writing.

Alma was always slated to play Mimoko after Side Story 7, though her game wasn't set in stone until recently. This one I kind of feel was a lose-lose in terms of the game, as with Mimoko actually being shown how the game would play out, the chances of her making one move to offset the prediction would increase the longer the game went on. Thus, I settled on a Fool's Mate as after 1. f3, Mimoko would move her pawn to e5 regardless of the prediction. Then after that, all Alma needed to do was go 2. g4 and Mimoko had no choice but to win the game. Her pride as a chess player refused to let her pass up an easy win, and even if she had, the controversy wouldn't have gone away, and possibly gotten even worse thanks to the mysterious commentator's posts.

Now, I'm going to have to think about how to have these next few games play out. For the sake of lining up everything perfectly for the 600th chapter, I might have a match or two from this round take place after the events of it. I'm not keen on swapping around round 5 and the rest day, so that's probably what I'll go with.

That's all for this commentary. I hope you enjoyed it.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:595

Oct 17, 2025

To:SkeletonIdiot

Actually reread the chapter multiple times as I couldn't remember the MacBonalds being mentioned. Don't think I did a McDonald's parody for this one unless I'm misremembering.

Our Town in another world

Chapter:24

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