Sep 21, 2023
A nice little bonus chapter hinting at what could happen should this get a sequel.
Going into this, I expected there to be many more battles. To my surprise, there were hardly any. In its place were the trials that sought to test the bonds between the main couple. I really enjoyed it. I think you did a good job highlighting the romance aspect of the story. The characters were also likeable. Walden, Luna, Charles, and Zumi were all likeable and I enjoyed reading about their antics and interactions with one another. There were also detestable villains like Mond and pervy portal master. Watching Mond screw herself over was incredibly satisfying.
It was a pleasure to binge this novel. I really enjoyed reading it. Congratulations on finishing it and good luck with the contest.👍