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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Sep 23, 2025

Happy two-year anniversary to this series. To celebrate, I've released a bonus chapter here and in the remake and had the current chapter of En Passant Grandmaster feature a game between Cinnamon and Yumi. I also threw in a Leona cameo here to make up for not doing much for Life Stream's two-year anniversary. Here's to many more years of Spice of Life.

Spice of life [Remake]

Chapter:144

Sep 23, 2025

Spice of Life

Chapter:124

Sep 23, 2025

To:Japanese🌹Rose

Back alley license. Though he didn't go crazy until later on in his life.

En Passant Grandmaster

Chapter:7

Sep 23, 2025

Funny Yalda mentions an edgelord considering what ends up happening later on.

Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel

Chapter:32

Sep 23, 2025

Here's hoping the dog will repay the deed and help her escape.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:40

Sep 23, 2025

Never tried goat milk before, or anything made from goat milk now that I think about it. Wonder how it compares.

Face of Eternity : The Journey of a Little Angel

Chapter:31

Sep 23, 2025

Bootleg Okamura fight.

Control My Life!

Chapter:30

Sep 23, 2025

I imagined Tensei would look more like Paimon. Also, how hard was it to get that small text in the chapter?

Control My Life!

Chapter:29

Sep 22, 2025

Maybe he should state the game first, then issue the challenge. Either that, or Eight's been breaking the rule this whole time.

Gamble-Mania

Chapter:36

Sep 22, 2025

Gonna be honest, Lucien making it so Grace is the only person who could likely get the flowers had me groaning. Even with Kuro there, you're just begging for the Devil's assistant to kidnap her.

I Got Summoned to Hell to Grant a Demon’s Wish?!

Chapter:39

Sep 22, 2025

That chonker of a paragraph really needs to be split up. Seems like this is the latest chapter. You did mention this was your first work, so it is expected that it might not be the most polished thing, but I think the premise is unique. If you ever decide to come back and revisit this, I hope you take all the feedback into account and try to make this a really good story.

My life with the Lizard girl

Chapter:3

Sep 22, 2025

This chapter was a bit hard to read. First off, I had no idea who was talking in the first line. Pronouns should only be used after the noun has been defined. The first paragraph also contains words that should be capitalized. I'd recommend doing a rewrite of it.

My life with the Lizard girl

Chapter:2

Sep 22, 2025

In terms of grammar, more or less what I said before; try not to use "said" so often, especially when their are better more descriptive words out there.

My life with the Lizard girl

Chapter:1

Sep 22, 2025

The premise is intriguing, and the cover art is nice. In terms of writing, I'd recommend fixing the formatting for the second paragraph. You also don't need to say "said" all the time for dialogue tags. Try words like "shrugged", "grumbled", "chuckled" instead of just "said". In fact, if the character from the previous paragraph is speaking in the next one, you don't need to even include a dialogue tag, unless they are also performing an action as they speak. Hope you found some of this advice helpful.

My life with the Lizard girl

Chapter:0

Sep 22, 2025

So basically, smash the giant crystal to cure everyone.

Lock & Key: Resonance

Chapter:32

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