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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Dec 07, 2025

So this is your chess series. As far as first impressions go, I love that you list the moves so readers can follow along. There is a small mistake though. On move three, for Black, you have "Queen e2" instead of "Queen e7". The same goes for move 4 for White where it should be "Bishop f4" instead of "Bishop e4". With those typos fixed, everything plays out smoothly. Curious about how the rook-king fork comes to be, I tested some things out and found that the continuation of 7... a6 8. Rb1 Qa3 9. e4 Nc6 10. Nd5 Nxd4 will result in 11. Nxc7+. The game pretty much lost for Black at move 7, so resigning there wouldn't have been a bad move either. Looking forward to how future games in this story play out.

The Value In Being Alone

Chapter:1

Dec 07, 2025

So Pippa's human form is actually human? I was kind of hoping her human form would be all-pink humanoid body with Kirby face.

Pink-Haired Pippa

Piracy In Another World: I Will Plunder The System

Chapter:7

Dec 07, 2025

And now I've reached the latest chapter. To be honest, I'm not sure I'll continue reading this one. Though you might have some intriguing ideas for games, if you don't provide more detailed descriptions of the moves being taken, it's really hard to follow along. Regardless, I wish you the best of luck with your story.

Caïssa’s Child

Caïssa’s Child: The Boy Who Beat the AI

Chapter:15

Dec 07, 2025

Suddenly, random line in katakana.

Caïssa’s Child

Caïssa’s Child: The Boy Who Beat the AI

Chapter:14

Dec 07, 2025

You really should reduce the amount of boldened text. It greatly ruins the immersion.

Caïssa’s Child

Caïssa’s Child: The Boy Who Beat the AI

Chapter:13

Dec 07, 2025

The tempo beats are starting to get annoying.

Caïssa’s Child

Caïssa’s Child: The Boy Who Beat the AI

Chapter:12

Dec 07, 2025

"Knight leap, a bishop's glare, a tiny sac to open a line"... That doesn't really tell me anything about what moves are being played.

Caïssa’s Child

Caïssa’s Child: The Boy Who Beat the AI

Chapter:11

Dec 07, 2025

The boldened text is really distracting.

Caïssa’s Child

Caïssa’s Child: The Boy Who Beat the AI

Chapter:10

Dec 07, 2025

I have no idea what's going on.

Caïssa’s Child

Caïssa’s Child: The Boy Who Beat the AI

Chapter:9

Dec 07, 2025

I'm completely lost. You started out listing the moves, even the eval status, but then, no clue what happens next.

Caïssa’s Child

Caïssa’s Child: The Boy Who Beat the AI

Chapter:8

Dec 07, 2025

Why the random script-format? Also, still can't visualize the games properly without proper notation. The vague descriptions of the moves hurts more than helps.

Caïssa’s Child

Caïssa’s Child: The Boy Who Beat the AI

Chapter:7

Dec 07, 2025

I hope he doesn't over-rely on emotions.

Caïssa’s Child

Caïssa’s Child: The Boy Who Beat the AI

Chapter:6

Dec 07, 2025

Hold up, you got a character named Iori? Not to mention, Momoko is only a letter off from Mimoko. Anyway, let's delve into the game. I like that it starts off with the Polish, but then, I have no idea what's happening. Your language is too vague and whimsical, leaving me clueless as to what moves are being played.

Caïssa’s Child

Caïssa’s Child: The Boy Who Beat the AI

Chapter:5

Dec 07, 2025

You do list the moves for the openings which I like.

Caïssa’s Child

Caïssa’s Child: The Boy Who Beat the AI

Chapter:4

Dec 07, 2025

[Game log #5]

Here's the game featured in Chapter 5 between Okisato and Col Baskerville Moran. It features a Danish Gambit Declined, but it's still an intense game.

[Event "N/A"]
[Site "Sumida, Tokyo"]
[Date "2024.08.17"]
[Round "N/A"]
[White "Okisato Tanabe (2600)"]
[Black "Col Baskerville Moran (2212)"]
[Result "1-0"]

1. e4 e5 2. d4 exd4 3. c3 Qf6 4. Bd3 Bc5 5. Nf3 Nc6 6. e5 Qe6 7. O-O Bb6 8. cxd4 Bxd4 9. Bc2 Bc5 10. Ng5 Qe7 11. Nc3 h6 12. Nd5 Qxe5 13. Re1 hxg5 14. Rxe5+ Nxe5 15. Nxc7+ Kf8 16. Nxa8 Nf6 17. Be3 Bxe3 18. Qd6+ Kg8 19. Qxe5 Bf4 20. Qc3 Bxh2+ 21. Kf1 Ne8 22. Re1 Nd6 23. Qxc8+ Nxc8 24. Re8# 1-0

En Passant Grandmaster Volume 3 cover

En Passant Grandmaster Volume 3

Chapter:5