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Mario Nakano 64

It's a me. I'm an aspiring light novel writer hoping to one day see my works in anime form. I hope that my works at least brighten up your day and give you something to look forward to.

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Oct 05, 2025

No, no, no! It's like the first few chapters! Why? Everything was good, so why'd the writing revert back to how it was in the first few chapters?

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Chapter:18

Oct 05, 2025

The formatting... It really is hard to read when everything's all scrunched up and not spaced out.

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Chapter:17

Oct 05, 2025

The formatting got really scrunched up, and for the whole chapter. Things were really formatted nicely before, so why the change? Hope this is just a one-off thing.

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Chapter:16

Oct 05, 2025

I guess they are still in the spirit realm after all.

The Zodiac Covenant- Vol.1

Chapter:12

Oct 05, 2025

Wait, so they were brought to another realm to gain power, but then returned to their original world?

The Zodiac Covenant- Vol.1

Chapter:11

Oct 05, 2025

It did look like the formatting got a bit scrunched up at times when it should have been spaced out. Some parts look intentional, such as the message, but I'm not sure on the others. It's not a huge issue, but it can fall into nitpick territory.

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Chapter:15

Oct 05, 2025

One third in, and no isekai yet. I feel the buildup to it might be overstaying it's welcome a bit.

The Zodiac Covenant- Vol.1

Chapter:10

Oct 05, 2025

No clue what direction this story will take, but I'm guessing based on what's already transpired that it'll be a dark one.

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Chapter:14

Oct 05, 2025

Evil tree monsters? OK.

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Chapter:13

Oct 05, 2025

No, there's capitalization errors, and the deadline for editing has passed. Well, not much can be done now. Don't worry, I'm sure all of us have an error or two like that in our stories so hopefully it's not too much of a deal.

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Chapter:12

Oct 05, 2025

Marty McFly's "Jeez, you smoke too!?" line is most appropriate for this chapter.

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Chapter:11

Oct 05, 2025

Nine chapters in and no isekai is a pretty big risk, but I guess you want to really build up how things were for the characters before the isekai.

The Zodiac Covenant- Vol.1

Chapter:9

Oct 05, 2025

That's one of the darkest ways yet to isekai people.

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Chapter:10

Oct 05, 2025

Made sure to check and see if this had the psychological tag, which thankfully it did, because holy shit, is this dark and psychological.

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Chapter:9

Oct 05, 2025

It really is a shame the early chapters are so rough considering your writing has improved greatly from then until now. Sadly the editing period is over, so we'll just have to deal with it, but do take pride in knowing that your improvements have impressed me greatly and got me invested in this story where before, I was struggling to get through the chapters due to the rough structure.

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Chapter:8

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