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This is the former home of some of my novels, you can find them these days over on RoyalRoad!

registered at: Oct 14, 2021

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Sep 01, 2022

Naww a solid happy ending for sure 😄.

I don't have too much to say really as this was just an awesome read - Always exciting and interesting with some romance for good measure.

The cast was lovable, the prose good and the plot intriguing - I wish I had more relevant things to say, but mostly this was a whole lotta fun😄.

I think it's awesome how much more cohesive the plot+character and the images were - I liked your last book too but the improvements on this one are amazing - You should be proud!😄

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Best of luck with the competition and congrats on finishing😄😊👍.

Challengers

Chapter:30

Sep 01, 2022

Awesome chapter, but I do gotta ask - Why didn't Akio attack the ambush if she knew it was there?

Was it just pure hope that they would tie her up inside the bridge so she could attempt, escape? Then what😅.

Great chapter tho, really exciting to read the finale!!

Challengers

Chapter:28

Sep 01, 2022

Dang poor Manami has had it rough, even for a serial killer😭😭

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:14

Aug 31, 2022

Dang so that's how Manami was changing her hair colour!😄

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Also interesting chat below - I think it's great that you both made finished novels, congrats😄😊👍

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:13

Aug 29, 2022

To:EliteWarrior910

No worries man, extra drafts is part of the process, I should know lol😅😉👍

The Wolf Among Rats

Chapter:1

Aug 29, 2022

K so bear with me here lol - I used to work for a water treatment company, and I er.... I absolutely love the smell of chlorine, like alot - Like I'd smoke that shite if it wasn't lethal.

Now that I've outed myself as a weirdo, I can relate with Ze-ski chlorine feeling😅.

( This was a strange comment, I apologize 😂)

Fantasy, Love, & Discord!! (FLD)

Chapter:14

Aug 29, 2022

Hot dang she pretty cute! Also that title on the default image 'A certain Scientific Best Girl' - 10/10 😂

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:163

Aug 28, 2022

I mean what can I say that the others ain't already - I'll miss this, quality writing, flow and interesting characters with a solid balance of comedy to romance.

I think what you aced (as said below) is that on paper this is a generic anime-style romcom packed with classic troops, from the plot beats to the structure - But that's the point, genre fiction is brilliant when used as set dressing.
What matters is your characters, the romcom is their to give them rails on which they can flourish - Meanwhile your subtext around V-tuber & introvert/Otaku or perhaps nero-typical as the cool kids say now, culture is pretty solid and nauced😄.

Like said below, there probably are places one could draw critic but you're having so much fun that you forget any issue you might of had - And that in itself is super impressive.

This has one of my favourite things, that 'anime vibe' - And for that I tip my hat - Cya in the next one Akua, congrats on finishing and best of luck with the comp, I'd say you have a good chance😉😄😊👍.

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:41

Aug 27, 2022

Levvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv!!!!!!!!!!!!! My boi 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Challengers

Chapter:27

Aug 26, 2022

Lol, I get she was having a romantic moment - But it sure read like poor Kyshi was having a stroke😅😅

Unconsciously [SHORT]

Chapter:14

Aug 25, 2022

Alas the end is upon us, Once more onto the breach Akira! One final date with Koi awaits!

My Childhood Best Friend is a VTuber! (OsananaV)

Chapter:39

Aug 25, 2022

Wingman achieved 😉😎😂😄

Fantasy, Love, & Discord!! (FLD)

Chapter:13

Aug 24, 2022

To:Deleted User

I called it! I said he was gonna be one ages ago!!!!

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But, it's hard to happy cause...... Poor Matsupan, he's too young to die😭😭😭😭

Sakuragami Syndrome

Chapter:12

Aug 22, 2022

Heh, Aly's peom reminds me of 'we didn't start the fire'😂😄

Bearable Melodies Within Nonsense

Chapter:2

Aug 22, 2022

Dang these are pretty addictive - I wanna know more😄

Bearable Melodies Within Nonsense

Chapter:1

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