Jan 22, 2022
K haven't quite finished (like 7/8th through and it feels finished😅) but need to get my thougths down lol.
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This chapter is a friggin roller coaster my man.
First we got badass Annebelle spotting her evil girlfriend for what she is but then all of a sudden were watching feckin alien! Annabelle is 100% dead becuase surviving a throat injury for more then like a minute or two is near impossible - There are guards getting slashed right and left and the siren is some Eldrich cross between a minator and a harpy - It's metal as fuck!!
But then the excitement drops as everyone just yeets it out of there😅, like all tension immediately dissapated....But then we go back to Annebelle in a pool of her own blood but she gets up, fires some ice-cold one liners and beats the shit out of the evil harpy - "Hell ya, Go the home girl! Your sacrifice is Nobel! And we will never forget yo--..... What do you mean she teleports away at the last moment?...... What do you mean before the chapter even finishes we have the sarge tell us no one in the entire camp died?........"
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Ya Annabelle needed to die - Don't get me wrong, especially after this chapter I love the girl, she be giving Netiera a run for the best girl position - But this suddenly felt so pointless.
The description of the laser was also feckin awesome, proper metal but it felt unearned simply because Annabelle(And to a lesser extent everyone else) escaped.
Heck for all this chapter builds up the strength and threat level of the sirens/Harpy's, having it clear that they're too incompetent to kill Annabelle with a pointblank stab throught the neck - sort of undermine the rest.
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So ya interesting chapter.
It is both the best and most badass-exciting one I've read so far but also the most dissapointing by far😶😶.
