Jan 20, 2022
Oh noooooooooooo Pearl I had more faith in you then this😭.
Man I don't even know where to begin, this is quiet the downward turn😕.
Ever since the beginning Runo has been so heavily alluded to being bad that it seemed too obvious and with time it began to seem like you'd gone the nuaced route - He shows emotions, cares for his friends, is a good guy with alot of harsh battle-scares.
But no, obvious bad guy is obvious😭.
And come on there is nothing worse then the bad guy who just hand waves away all the nice things they did - honestly what a predicatable let-down
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I really hate sounding so harsh as this but it's way to close to the Fate franchise - You know how those always start with a background character ominiouly staring at the camera so often that you think - "Can't be him, that'd be stupidly obvious and boring" - And then low & behold it's always that most obvious guy in the end.
Except this is worse becuase you showed more of Runo then anyone else and he's clearly a good guy, making this whole twist forced and contrived.
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I dunno, maybe In the follow chapters you'll reveal something else to make it more justified but if that answer is some stupid - "I spent decades pretending to be a nice human just to get to you Dolly, mwahahahahahhahahaha" - That Amma be the big sad.
Like this might work fine for a shoen or a children's show but I guess I'd come to expect more from you ya know?
Again sorry if all this sounds mean, but this is a bit saddening which I guess is maybe the intention😶😶😕😕.
