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This is the former home of some of my novels, you can find them these days over on RoyalRoad!

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Jan 15, 2022

I have now finished the chapter😅, the stuff with the 5th sisters is great!

I love the way she gets inadvertently shot down by the 4 lads😂.

Is it possible she's the same presitess anthryom met way back in the second town when staying at the inn?
That'd be neat, though maybe I'm overthinking this - That presitess was more..... Holy(?)😂😂.

The Isekai Police: Promise of a Wonderful Fantasy was a Lie

Chapter:44

Jan 14, 2022

To:ALTaccounti

You gotta be more optimistic then that 😂😂

I Want You to Be Real with Me

Chapter:0

Jan 14, 2022

I think our boy needs to wake up lol😂🤣

I Want You to Be Real with Me

Chapter:0

Jan 14, 2022

I feel bad for the hungry kitten, I'm not entirely sure what that suggests about his character😂😂.

I like his focus on her physical attributes and scent, she seems cute.

The "[Male Protagonist']" is interesting, it reminds me of 'monster musume' and how that show tried to give it's protag minimal facial features - However I think you might struggle with it/ to keep it up over time.

Good luck😊👍.

会い (Ai), My Valentine 「Honeyfeed Exclusive」

Chapter:2

Jan 14, 2022

I think we all need to start helping out little old ladies if this is the result😅😅😂😂

An Unrealistic Day with A Realistic Love in Imaginary Ways

Chapter:2

Jan 14, 2022

Wow that's a long paragraph 😅, I'd try adding a few (or alot) of pause breaks bud it helps people read easier - You'll see if you check out other people novels as an example👍.

Hope that helps, good luck😊.

GLAMS Adventure: The Girl and the Mysterious Crystal

Chapter:1

Jan 14, 2022

To:ACHIEVE

Hey don't worry bout it, I take entire weeks off😂, I think it's best to let the writing eb and flow as feels natural to you😊👍.

Dance of Thorns

Chapter:26

Jan 13, 2022

Webflix and chill🤣🤣

MagiHumeDate ー The Dating App for Magical Beings and Ordinary Folk 「Wattpad Exclusive」

Chapter:2

Jan 13, 2022

Wow this is quite the long first chapter!
If I might, I've found generally novels with short opening chapters tend to convince people to try your novel alot More then those that start guns blazing with a few thousand words like this book👍👍.

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I'll certainly come back to this once a I finish reading one of the other long length novels on the site😂 - Great cover art btw😊👍

Record of the Frost King

Chapter:1

Jan 13, 2022

Is it bad that I totally agree with our best lizard-girl Harlan's plan😂😂?

The Nonpareil of Resh (Act 1)

Chapter:64

Jan 13, 2022

Can I ask (if it not a spoiler) but what's killing the older sisters?

Like I understand the ones on the frontline and what not but say Hina's previous boss, the last vice-commander? '24'
Presumably she'd have no reason to engage the enemy carelessly and would live forever like Six-seven does, no? 🤔🤔

Dance of Thorns

Chapter:23

Jan 13, 2022

Ohhhhh this could be fun - I really like the idea that he's an already beaten villain, maybe he can bring honour back to his household! 😁😂

Transmigrated Into a Noble's Beaten Son

Chapter:0

Jan 13, 2022

Oh damn this is great!

It's a brilliant angle for the competition but also just a Great idea in general.

The way you characterise our protag via little things like his desktop settings or his running arguments with the landlady is really brillaint.

Couple of the paragraphs near the top could do with more pause breaks but other then that really interesting first chapter😊😊👍👍.

2D>3D: My favorite Vtuber can't be this Trashy!?

Chapter:1

Jan 13, 2022

To:nebokerugirl1

Hehe, well you read my stuff, so it was only fair to read you back😊.

No need to change on my account, HoneyFeed is a pretty small site so you might be able to build a bigger audience elsewhere😅😂

MagiHumeDate ー The Dating App for Magical Beings and Ordinary Folk 「Wattpad Exclusive」

Chapter:4

Jan 13, 2022

Oh...that was abrupt😅😅

MagiHumeDate ー The Dating App for Magical Beings and Ordinary Folk 「Wattpad Exclusive」

Chapter:4

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